Pandya Store | Episode Discussion #175 - Page 58

Originally posted by: spdp

@bold: This.
This is the plan. ShiVi ShiVi kar ke, writerben showed full dhara drama.

Whole track is about her planning & executing. They didn’t even miss making her mahaan with senti music: maa nahin hai toh bura lagaa!
and when they know, that maa was trying to dump Raavi w/o her consent or even knowledge with someone unknown— this PC RajRatans & mahaan bahus won’t even bother support Raavi.
Shiva is shown bailbudhdhi-er. Raavi is shown dobi-er.

ShiVi sells- brings numbers: so unke naam pe - they sly run full Bhabhi tracks! because writerben feels Raavi ke character mein depth nahin hai :/

Hataao this writers ko. They clearly neglected PS to make their ott show on other chanel!

Take badlaa sitara.

Actually that's their tactic... Shivi shivi bol ke dhara ko dikhana & now creative change ke naam pe they will completely disappear shivi.. The way they are writing for quite some time, it's seems as they are pissed off coz ppl we're not liking their Dhara.. PH must have told them to focus on shivi & they ruined them beyond repair due to their ego.. I don't think anything good coming after creative change

Honestly i would prefer a gaura centric or devta centric track with meaningful shivi scenes rather than a shivi centric track with no shivi scenes.

Audience are not fools. They thought that the first marriage track made their ratings double, so phirse shivi ki shaadi karwa dete hai. But what they are not understanding is rather than seeing a badly written marriage track, people prefer a well written separation track. Script matters.

Originally posted by: Pixierocks

Honestly i would prefer a gaura centric or devta centric track with meaningful shivi scenes rather than a shivi centric track with no shivi scenes.

Audience are not fools. They thought that the first marriage track made their ratings double, so phirse shivi ki shaadi karwate dete hai. But what they are not understanding is rather than seeing a badly written marriage track, people prefer a well written separation track. Script matters.

But that's the thing.. In Gaura & dev rishita track they don't show shivi at all.. Only focus on the couple whose track is shown but during shivi track we get everything except shivi, even if we get shivi there are always venomous dialogues & be sar pair ki MU.. They have always treated shivi tracks with contempt... Their ego & deliberate attempt to down shivi is quite evident

Originally posted by: VNuts

I really liked this thread. Pretty much summarised everything we've been saying. Worth a read.

https://mobile.twitter.com/mittens_woolen/status/1504791107473129480

Hope this girl survived the attack by andh bhakts of Shiva😕

She is absolutely right. The moment I saw Dhara forcing alcohol down Raavi’s throat, I lost it. Dhara needs to be punished severely and especially if Raavi files a complaint, Dhara can be put behind bars. Gujarat is a dry state,

This writers didn’t even pay attention to this detail before using alcohol in their script.

Show’s story seriously lacks anything happy.

Even generic happy like celebrating festivals.

Jaise ki allergy hai creatives ko.. only happiness they know is Dhara ki bachhey ki khushi.

Navratri: One if the most fun & big festival every nook & corner of Gujarat celebrates. Could have been good ShiVi progress track - but nope-they brought in disooster.

Diwali: Disooster was lurking around- tripping falling w shiva, Maligning raavi. Where as Diwali for every business owner in Gujarat is day of Chopda Pujan. Laxmi Puja at store would have been wonderful.

Bestu varas: Holds huge significance for Gujaratis, nothing. Instead showed ShiVi going to divorce court (courts are closed Duh!).

Uttarayan: Whole Gujarat stays on rooftops those two days!

Nothing.

Holi: We are seeing Bhabhi Ka planning plotting force intoxicating drama!

0 zeal to cater to what audience craves for!

Originally posted by: Yahvi

But that's the thing.. In Gaura & dev rishita track they don't show shivi at all.. Only focus on the couple whose track is shown but during shivi track we get everything except shivi, even if we get shivi there are always venomous dialogues & be sar pair ki MU.. They have always treated shivi tracks with contempt... Their ego & deliberate attempt to down shivi is quite evident

I don't know what is going on behind the screens or why they are not giving us a good track. But why would a writer try to sabotage his or her own story? If they wanted dhara to be loved why would they write such scenes for her where she beats shiva and Krish like animals or shoves a bottle of alcohol down her devranis throat? They could have shown dhara being against forced marriage and raavi being ziddi about getting married to shiva by hook or crook. But they have shown it's dhara's idea.they made raavi speak up against this. For the audience, dhara is in the wrong now and is coming across as crazy and controlling. Raavi is the only character that is coming out as sensible in this whole track. As someone who loved dhara initially, i would say her character has been ruined the most in the last 350+ episodes.

Originally posted by: spdp

Show’s story seriously lacks anything happy.

Even generic happy like celebrating festivals.

Jaise ki allergy hai creatives ko.. only happiness they know is Dhara ki bachhey ki khushi.

Navratri: One if the most fun & big festival every nook & corner of Gujarat celebrates. Could have been good ShiVi progress track - but nope-they brought in disooster.

Diwali: Disooster was lurking around- tripping falling w shiva, Maligning raavi. Where as Diwali for every business owner in Gujarat is day of Chopda Pujan. Laxmi Puja at store would have been wonderful.

Bestu varas: Holds huge significance for Gujaratis, nothing. Instead showed ShiVi going to divorce court (courts are closed Duh!).

Uttarayan: Whole Gujarat stays on rooftops those two days!

Nothing.

Holi: We are seeing Bhabhi Ka planning plotting force intoxicating drama!

0 zeal to cater to what audience craves for!

Writers are in some different mind zone.. They know their ott show is remake of a decent written novel, it would give them right exposure, so they don't care much about PS, they are only using the show for badla now, hope PH do something after channel intervention but I doubt it would be something better...

Only thing that can save this show now is changing writers & editors & bringing someone who's passionate about their work, doesn't matter if big name Or not bcz even if slightly decent writing cast will do wonders, they are talented lot, especially KDice & Krutika ji

Originally posted by: Pixierocks

I don't know what is going on behind the screens or why they are not giving us a good track. But why would a writer try to sabotage his or her own story? If they wanted dhara to be loved why would they write such scenes for her where she beats shiva and Krish like animals or shoves a bottle of alcohol down her devranis throat? They could have shown dhara being against forced marriage and raavi being ziddi about getting married to shiva by hook or crook. But they have shown it's dhara's idea.they made raavi speak up against this. For the audience, dhara is in the wrong now and is coming across as crazy and controlling. Raavi is the only character that is coming out as sensible in this whole track. As someone who loved dhara initially, i would say her character has been ruined the most in the last 350+ episodes.

Revengeful mind can't ever be creative.. A creative can't create anything good if their art is overshadowed by ego.. When your main focus is destruction not creation.. Nothing comes out substantial from your work.. That's chaubeys in nutshell

Originally posted by: Yahvi

Writers are in some different mind zone.. They know their ott show is remake of a decent written novel, it would give them right exposure, so they don't care much about PS, they are only using the show for badla now, hope PH do something after channel intervention but I doubt it would be something better...

Only thing that can save this show now is changing writers & editors & bringing someone who's passionate about their work, doesn't matter if big name Or not bcz even if slightly decent writing cast will do wonders, they are talented lot, especially KDice & Krutika ji

Passionate is the right word. They are not passionate about the show or the story. They forget what they write before. No continuity. Unresolved plots. Introduce a character and forget him for weeks. They reached a stable point in the charts and simply stopped putting any efforts. Just wrote random comedy and chaos and rinse repeat of shivi lollipops.

It's not about the characters of shivi, gaura or dev rishita. Its simply lazy writing and lack of creativity. Trip and falls are easy to write because that requires zero efforts from the writers. Its the actors and director who do the job. When you have to write serious conversations and clear a mu, that requires time, energy and sincerity.

Shivi or gaura or devta centric doesn't matters. Most important is sensible story line . It's a family show . Choubays has forget they have a store. Other one was going to be built what happened to that store. They can concentrate on that. But no instead planning and plotting by villian and humiliation of innocent soul. A spineless rude husband who says he loves his wife but can't take a stand for her. Keeps on insulting and humiliating her with his toxic mom.

I am really happy makers got warning .