ShiVi SS-"Kyu..?"PART6-pg13(2/1/22)COMPLETED - Page 9

I LOVE IT!

kitni baar bolun?

OMG Kaandiya

This story was so good. Love love loved it. Everyone kept talking about Cliffy that I was so worried the whole time if there will be any MU because of Dave And especially knowing your love for Dave. Haha, sonitna bura sochne ke baad this was lovely. I loved how Krish pointed about Shivi chemistry/bond to Raavi. Raavi have a serious though about it. Shiva not being angry about Raavi's Dave jaap and knowing that it was aivey.

Loved Shiva's realization too and how he acted on it. He missed Raavi and went to see her at night. He wasn't even afraid of the kiss, but then bece sechu and ran away. But OMG, I loved the little pinky pact thing they had going on since childhood. I wanted more. These two are just adorbs!

Also, the birthday surprise was amazing. Par party main cake khaye Bina nikal gaya hai aur Raavi ke Ghar yeh kaand kardiya. 😂 An sabko pata chal jayega. There could definitely be a continuation of this as family finds out and their teasing. And bichare cake! Only a true dessert lover can understand this dukh😭

As much as the ending is perfect, can't help saying more since I just love love love your way of writing ShiVi.

Also the fact that she gave herself to him as his birthday gift, man I'm emo. The buildup was perfect for the climax. The mature part was well written. Will be visiting soon in future for a reread

Wow thats really nice 👍👍👍👍😍😍

AFTER SO LONG...FINALLY YE STORY KHATAM HUI.....YOU MADE US WAIT A LOT JAANU.......😁😁

WHOLE STORY WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING AS ALWAYS😘😘...

WAISE YE BATA SHIVA KO GHAR NHI JAANA KYA😆

This was hot☺️

Loved it. ❤️

Thank you for updating today. Made my sunday❤️

Yu poool.

You took so long to complete this I had to read from from beginning to theek se understand everything 🤡

I think this is one of my favourite stories of yours .. with just the right amount of angst and the pace is not slow and draggy .. fatafat sab sort ho gaya .. just the way I like it ❤️

Also I was so mad when he ran away after the pappi. Gadheda 😡

But I'm glad he went back and made it upto his girl, and how ☺️

Please write more pre shaadi fics .. I love reading your pre shaadi fics☺️

Janu. Dil le mera for this. My babies finally together, and they spent their birthday away from Gandu fam, what else I want 😭❤️

My kyootu babies and you have my heart❤️

Janki🤗! Sorry about such a late comment, but college has been keeping me extremely busy these days!

For part 5:

Loved how both of them are revisiting old memories and realising their feelings for each other slowly....❤️ But Raavi's hurt and his guilt at breaking their promise hasn't been let go of either.

Shiva boy is happy that she did all of this for him, the gift and the arrangements for the party! But he should really talk to Raavi now and sort things out!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Reswa! Will get back to this soon! ❤️

Oops! Forgot about this!