ShiVi SS-"Kyu..?"PART6-pg13(2/1/22)COMPLETED - Page 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

*inserts I'm here gif*


Janu meri jaaaannnnnn, I can't wait for the next one!! Shiva waiting for Raavi to wish like every years just *chef's kiss*


Chummi le 😚❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

🥰💕💕💕beautiful update, …..so sweet Shiva is waiting/excepting Raavi’s Birthday wish 💕💕💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

aur milega kya? its so amazing.......end hota hai to 🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Jaanu 🤗 I am finally catching up on all the stories, and I thought of catching up with your most recent one so I can keep up with live updates

this story is so sweet and wholesome I love how they both silently care for each other and look out for each other

shiva rushing to the phone was sooooo cute

can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out raavi is the one that organized the party

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part-4

Everyone had retired to their respective rooms after bidding each other goodnight but Shiva wasn't able to sleep,he kept rolling himself left to right && vice-versa.He was growing restless, with each passing minute, more and more agitated.He tossed his phone nearby the pillow and started glancing posts and stories his friends had uploaded & replying them.He noticed the video which Krish had posted,he noticed that he tagged Raavi too, firstly he thought he must've had randomly tagged her but than as he saw the video again more attentively he saw Dhara standing with her phone and smiling, and before she leaves for the kitchen she waves her palm, smiles widely, puts her phone on the adjacent cot and leaves.He felt a little suspicious but than he got a perception saying maybe he was thinking too much;Dhara bhabhi must be shooting a video from selfie mode.



A notification popped, Raavi liked as well as commented; he sat up, opened the notification but the comment was deleted instantly,he opened chats only to find Raavi online and now he was vexed, why had she not wished him if she was awake, even if she had forgotten,she saw all the posts and stories which were pretty much enough for her to realise that it was his birthday.Shiva stood up, picked his bike keys and sneaked out to find out what was wrong with her, because he knew his chipkali, and this is not at all like she behaves, he was tensed.



While on the other hand,Raavi too was feeling hollow, it was like she felt something missing, she wanted to wish him; and why not, she had never missed wishing him, in fact she had been the first person to wish him,exactly at 12a.m.,every year.But she had to control herself, after all she had to give him the best surprise; ever.She was bored as she saw everyone posting stories and posts, she felt the fear of missing out,, so she stood keeping her phone aside, she started packing the gifts with classic embroidery print white & silver gift wrapper she put that on her study table,tracing it,as she smiled to herself,she moved herself towards the adjacent walls where various frames hung,all of them in a sequence;one with her parents,mausapa-masima,Dhara-Gombi, one of both families on Gombi & Dhara's wedding and five photos of all the kids; one of when they where toddlers,the other from Gombi-Dhara's wedding,One from navratri,One of them celebrating board results and one from last years' holi celebration.A smile crept on her face.



They had grown up together,lots of stories,memories,mischief, & of course their bickers & fights.But to her co-incidence, each and every photo of them had two of them next to each other;either glaring each other, or pulling and pranking each other;Krish pulling her away and Dev pulling Shiva away in the 'who will play with silver colored dandiya-tug of war',she chuckled.They never had a simple posted picture, all of them were candid,all of them having them,in their own world,since always.She realized that though she claimed to like Dev, she never felt that way actually, just words and no feelings,at all.But there's was something, special or strange, she didn't knew, she knew that with Dev she cannot be as comfortable as she can be with Shiva, she had no idea of why was she feeling it suddenly; but these things were registered by her sub-concious mind, always, even when she refrained from believing it; but now that seemed the truth.She had noticed this today, but they had been special,always.


She smiled to herself,letting out a small sigh.Suddenly, she felt a tap on her shoulders,her heart started throbbing loudly.She got scared and slowly grabbed the vase in front of her and turned and was going to hit the tall-dark figure but a pair of hands grabbed her hand and put the palm on her hand,

"skskmgffhhsksss..." she tried to struggle as she started removing the tight palm but,the touch was familiar,she knows this touch,it was Shiva's...

"shbatuhaimsfghhh..." she again tried,

"Ae chipkali chup reh", to which she nodded in a no, so he said,

"fir reh ese bole bina mai hath nahi hataunga", to which she made a puppy eyes and pleaded him, as if he had melted right away,he said, "Pehle vada kar tera yeh speaker mute karke baat karegi,ek toh jab dekho gala faadti rehti hai" and rolled his eyes in annoyance, she nodded in yes, and he removed his palm, only to be welcomed with millions of questions,

"Shiva...tu..tu yaha kya kar raha hai?Kisine dekh liya toh kya sochega..tera chod..mere baare mein koi kya sochega...tu..tu ek kaam kar tu ja...aur..aur yeh kya time hai yaha aane ke...vese to apne ghar se bada bhagata rehta hai mujhe aur ab khud chor ki tarah ghus raha hai...bhootnath kahika..tu..ab...ese putle ki tarah kyu khada hai..ghur kyu raha hai...kuch bolnaaa", she shrugged his hand so that he can comeback in senses.


Shiva was lost, lost in her eyes and antics, he chuckled to himself as she bombarded him with millions of questions in one go;but to his amazement she looked ethereal, she was wearing filmsy fabric lilac colored spaghetti strap top and shots on her milky white skin,enhancing the color even more.His hand was shrugged by her; he slowly took the vase from her hand, put that on the table and started walking closer towards her, she kept walking backwards until her backed touched the wall.

"Shiva..tu..tu yeh kya kar raha hai?", she gulped.

"Tujhe nahi yaad aaj kya hai?", he asked back, looking deep into her hazel brown eyes;she looked away because she did not wanted him to know, but her eyes wouldn't have been able to lie to his eyes,the way he was looking at her, it was something different,a feeling,she never felt.He gently lifted her chin towards his face and repeated the question, she fumbled as she said, "Kuch..kuch bhi to nahi hai..kyu aaj kya hai..?", she tried to sound casual but clearly, he was able to recognize the lie in her tone, but she wasn't going to answer easily, so he thought of twisting the question when he felt how close they were,yet comfortable, he tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, and whispered, "Tune halwa kyu banaya tha?", she was able to feel his warm breathe as he said this, a cold shiver ran down her spine, she answered, "Kyuki mujhe pata hai tujhe pasand hai", and he instantly replied, "Tujhe kese pata ki mujhe pasand hai?",

Now she got fierce as she answered, "Kyuki mai bachpan tujhe jaanti hu,samajhti hu..isiliye"

and looked directly into his eyes,he went more closer to her, and asked,

"Fir toh tujhe yeh bhi pata hoga ke mujhe aur kya kya pasand",

and she said, "Haan"

...and he smashed his lips on hers, she was shocked but he was drowning her into a gentle and soft kiss..she watched him in amazement for a moment but then she responded him back equally, as they separated,he looked away as both of their cheeks were tomato red.His hands wrapped her waist, he was able to feel her soft skin.Her hand went in his hair, as he curled his hair and rested her hands on his neck.They separated panting, for the lack of air.They were lost in each other's eyes as if they had lost in a moment.Shiva realized that what he did was wrong, though it was a heat of the moment and though it felt right, it was wrong, he quickly pulled himself away, and started walking, but he found her holding his pinky finger, as he turned, he understood what she meant...


It was a pact between them, that when they wanted to say each other something important but the other one was refraining even before listening it, they would hold each other's pinky finger indicating it as a sign for future.They made this when Raavi was bullied and was teased when they were in in 5th std, Shiva had ignored her first but one day when he got to know that Raavi was no where found and then he had found him on the terrace of school sitting in the corner,sobbing...he had felt guilty for not listening to her when she wanted to share the pain with him, and no one else,that was the day he had made this promise to her and she had agreed then.The matter was eventually solved with Gombi and Mausapa and school authorities, she never forgot on how restlessly he was finding her and ho calmly he soothed her even though he hated her, he had been his comfort,since,always.


Memory road took them emotional but Shiva said, "Nahi Raavi aaj nahi, jo tha galat hi tha,galti thi,bas",

he gulped as he walked away and went down the ladder.

She stood there with tears in her eyes, she wiped them as she knew that he can avoid her but tomorrow after she will give him the surprise, she will tell him about what she felt, this would be her gift,for him.



heyya!!Long time no see!!So ya i finallllllyyyyyyyy completed this chapter and i solemnly swear to update the last part soonest!!


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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

I realised I had missed out on the update before this one as well so caught up with both parts! Just loved it! Loving the story! Our OG ShiVi ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Waiting for update!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loved it Janki!!! Shiva and Raavi's symbol, the holding the pinky one, was so heart touching.. And Shiva was so worried that she hadn't wished him!!! I hope that he understands Raavi when she tells him about her feelings and doesn't hurt her... And that he doesn't react badly when he realises Raavi is the one who planned the birthday party for him... ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

Wow,wow,wow,wow. Just loved it way too much❤❤

Waiting for next update....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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AHHAAN...!!


THIS WAS SO GOOD JANUDIIII...AND PAPPI HAYEE MERI KHWASHEIN POORI KARDI😆❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#50

Oooooooooooo 😳


Cant wait to see how this progresses

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