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RAAAVVIIIIIIIIIIIIII……….. They all heard the painfilled scream, it was filled with anguish, sorrow and loss… They all felt the same, but for him it was like someone has ripped his soul and blew it to smithereens.

He fell on his knees before the still barely alive body of Raavi, He could not see her like this, so much pain, almost lifeless and she was slipping away from him. At first, he felt helpless, fear and loss. But now his emotions were incoherent, there was a blood haze slowly capturing overall his other emotions. It was spreading all over him, incapsulating him only in one……ANGER…. The blood lust of the ones who dare to harm his beloved. He could see the blood seeping out of her abdomen, so much blood. She will hate it, she hates blood….even a prick or a pin drop of blood causes her to wince and turn her head the other way.. She would say… “Shivaa, rok na, mujhe khoon se sakth nafrat hain…dekh kya raha hain Bhootnath, rok isse…. And now, how much ever he tries the blood keeps seeping out, along with her life, slowly seeping and slipping away from him….

Dhara and Krish who had rushed out with Shiva, equally felt the helplessness. They could feel that they were losing Raavi and knew that losing her would mean losing him as well. But before that they will probably have to witness the destruction. The storm that was brewing inside Shiva was quite visible in this body. His body was trembling, his hand were trying in vain to stop the blood but most disturbing and indicative were his eyes which were filled with unshed tears and slowly losing coherence of the present, of reality.

“Shivaa”, callout Dhara, trying to bring him back to reality “ Shivaa, Raavi ko kuch nahi hoga, who theek ho jayegi, hum hain na, dekh Krish ne call kiya hain, ambulance abhi aati hi hogi… Woh bilkul theek ho jayegi, hum sab hain na usske saath…” Dhara said wiping her tears, which were not stopping. She wanted to bring her child back from the confusedness, he needs to control and handle himself to be able to help Raavi.

“Haan Shiva, Bhabi theek kheh rahi hain, maine ambulance ko call kiya hain woh bas aate hi honge, Raavi Bhabhi ko kuch nahi hoga”. Krish could also see his brother was slowly losing semblance of reality, he was staring at Raavi Bhabi’s unconscious face, trying to stop the blood with one hand and caressing her hair, saying nothing. His unshed tears filled eyes were growing darker and hazier with an emotion that he has never seen in his brother’s eyes ever, even when he was the most angry, but this one, filled him with dread and fear of the unknown. All he knew certainly was that if he lost his brother to this strange emotion, there will be hell to pay. He tried shaking his brother from his trance “ Shiva, tu sun raha hain na, sambhal khudko, sab thek … Shiva just shrugged his hand, without looking at him and continuing his ministrations on Raavi.

“Shivaa… “ Raavi called out weakly, she was struggling between consciousness and trying to avoid the darkness that was spreading over, the pain has numbed gradually but she knew that she had little time before the darkness took over, took her away from her Shiva.

Shiva so attuned to her that he glanced into her eyes , “ tu theek hain chipkali, main hoon tere saath, kahin jaane nahin doonga tujhe. Jaayenge toh saath jaayenge, akela nahin choodonga tujhe. Tu bas saath reh mere, ankhein khuli rakh aur mujhe dekh, darr nahi lagega tujhe.”

“Shivaa…. Tu saath hain. Mujhe…darr…nahi….Raavi said with effort trying so hard to remain conscious.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awsome ❤❤❤❤❤❤


Waiting for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting start... Do continue soon...

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Thank you for Love guys!!!! But this will not be a OS/SS/FF. These will be drabbles or Snippets from the dramatic Lives of Shiva & Raavi. I will mostly focus on the emotional range these two have for each other and how others react to these two characters and their emotions.

My main goal for writing this is my Obsession with Shiva and Raavi. I needed a channel to express it. And writing relieves me and also this is the best platform for expressing my suppressed emotions.

I totally welcome criticism and suggestions!!!!

But mostly I would love to have Adorations, that's what keeps me going😛

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow this was heart breaking but beautiful!!

Waiting to read more❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved the intensity! Waiting for more such dribbles!❤️‍🔥

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice part. Update next one please.

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Wow💕💕💕, totally intrigued

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Simply wow!!! Loved it.waiting for next

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