ShiVi FS- Realising His Worth (Part-3, Page-23) [22/06/21]

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Asfiya

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Posted: 4 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: mpks1
Loved part 2 very much. Raavi showing her concern and defending him against Mami’s harsh words. We will never get such things in the show but glad we can read through your story. Can’t wait to read the next part😃

Thank you so much!❤️❤️

Updated next part😊

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Miss_SR

@Miss_SR

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Posted: 4 years ago

#182

👏👏👏 for Raavi. Not only was she strong but she was clear and precise! Loved her.

Shiva stopping raavi, then feeling hurt, followed by his shock at what Raavi said...his feelings came across so well even though he didn't have much dialogues. Hope he manages to be there for her.

You even made me feel sorry for mami, something the actual show hasn't made me do yet 😆.

Another great update 👍❤.

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Foxii

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Posted: 4 years ago

#183

Great update, I like how you described Raavis situation.

Either way she is bound to get hurt...

Its still better this way, when she has Shiva to console her and not Maami😆

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mpks1

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Posted: 4 years ago

#184

Lovely update! Glad Raavi is taking her own decisions, wants to carve her own path in this marriage and not influenced by her Maasi. This is the Raavi I like who never gives up. But as you have written, she and Shiva need to talk. She needs him more than anything else. Can’t wait to read their conversation in the next part😃

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Asfiya

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Posted: 4 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Sunshine-Girl
This is brilliant!!
Finally a story going towards what I wanted to see!!
This is wholesome!❤️
Her concern,, his kindness 👏
And mami being mami🤬
Loved it, eager to read next part 😊

Thank you so much!

Updated next part ❤️❤️