ShiVi FF: Heart Aches

Raavi:

She was finally back in Somnath. The most beautiful girl of Somnath. And she was back with one motive. To make Dev hers forever. Ever since she was a child she wanted to become Pandya Family’s daughter in law. And finally she is going to become one very soon.

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Shiva:

She was coming back today his Dhara Bhabhi told him early in the morning while asking him to behave properly around her because she was going to become a part of Pandya family. But what they did not know was that he was not going to be at home. She had mocked and laughed at him with her friends before leaving Somnath.

There was a time when he was so confident in himself and his appearance but now he did not have any strength in him to look at her or be in the same place as her. But he knew that maybe his brother loved Raavi so he had to adjust and sacrifice his love for his brother. Yes, he loved Raavi, a lot. To the point that he looked at her taunts as a form of love, he had given her “haq” over him. She could mock, laugh and insult him and he would still love her. But that hap was only booked for her so when she misused it and laughed at him for being uneducated in front of her friends while they were gossiping about others in Somnath. His heart and confident left him. He was living but he still felt like a corpse.

She misused his trust and his “haq”, he has given her but he also knew that she did not know about his feelings, so he did not hold a grudge against her.

Ever since then he maintained distance between them. He ignored her and controlled his anger and rage. She did try to annoy him but he was hurt beyond repair and to save himself from another embarrassment and heartache he ignored her existence. But he kept his eye over her, for his sanity, he had to know if she was safe or not.

Even though she broke his heart, he would always keep his promise. The promise he made to himself. A promise to protect and love her with his whole soul, heart, mind and body. He was, is and will always be hers.

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A girl just tried her luck on a fan fiction. And I know it’s shittyyyy as f*ck

Aaawww😭

Reading this made me sad. Poor Shiva He's been hurt and he's still in love with Raavi, and continues to protect her from the sidelines. But Raavi is still after Dev💔🥺

This is new, and I want to read more of this. But please make Raavi see sense soon, okay!

Nice Start... I hope there was a Misunderstanding.

Get Shivi together please.

I am in love with the story 😍

The way you wrote Shiva’s emotions I felt sad 😢 but I am super excited how the story will unfold.

Please update the first chapter soon 😁

Poor Shiva! I can't wait to read more. Please do not be too hard on yourself. This is great premise and has me intrigued to read more. 👍🏼❤️

interesting...felt sad for shiva

"A girl just tried her luck on a fan fiction. And I know it’s shittyyyy as f*ck"

Trust me girl, this was not anything you imagine it to be. I am intrigued by the direction you'll be taking this, and I know it'll be better than whatever the CVs are doing to the show.

This was a unique blend of interesting and sorrow. Couldn't help but feel bad for Shiva, but also am very hopeful that this will lead to something promising between them :)

Can't wait to read more ❤️!

Very different concept👏

It was interesting as well as emotional😭

Feeling bad for Shiva, he loved Raavi and wants to protect her by staying in shadow🥺

Waiting for the first part

shiva with no confidence??????😲 hard to imagine but a different take

den y he didnt work on learning things....not to woo her but be better at it and shut her mouth......y he has to run away.....

for once i thought i was reading about rishita😔

m hating raavi here.....thats also an alien feeling but the moment i read she insulted HIM........oh boy.......dimag mein tandav shuru........

whoever hurts shiva will just get hatred from me......

majburi mein shiva raavi ki shaadi mat karna........

I can never imagine Raavi insulting Shiva in front of outsiders.

Shiva loves her

Would be waiting for the update

Starting is quite nice