Shivi OS: Mine Forever - Page 3

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

lovely os

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Originally posted by: vivpri

Fantastic 👌👏 Thank you 🥰🙏

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Hmm!! Well its my pleasure!! And thank you for appreciating!!

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful os❤️

Loved Shivi's relationship❤️

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Awww!! Glad to know!! Me too loved it!!❤

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

This was really cute! loved reading it! Loved how shiva got raavi to confess.. and bechaara dev 🤣

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Aww Glad to know that you loved it so much!!

yeah poor dev!! Hahahah

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful 😍😍

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Originally posted by: Scarysea

Yeh possessiveness dekhna show mein bi

Beautifully written

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Haa!! I wait for that to happen too!!

Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

I don't even know where to start! This was such a treat to read! I loved everything from getting a glimpse into Shiva's feelings to reading about Raavi and Shiva confessing their feelings for each other, to Dev... poor Dev, Rishita is not going to be happy when she sees his black eye...

This truly was a wonderful read!❤️

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It means a lot to me!! Thank you!! Glad to know that you loved it so much ❤!!.

Aww!! I loved to write those parts!!

hahaha!! Well that is true rishita won't like it.. but she could offer him her color corrector and concealer.. hahaha

😲🤭 damn that punch to Dev took me ages to get over! I had to read it over and over to see if it really happened

Shiva was not possessive about his girl, he was also so straight to the point. It was nice seeing a glimpse of Dev's relationship, because it was a nice contrast to ShiVi's one. One was worried about what his brother would think, the other straight away said this girl is mine so stay away. Raavi and her version of 'he loves me, he loves me not' was adorable!...and he came! Their confessions was so cute and felt really personal...it was just them letting each other know they're made for each other 😳, and straight after they're ready to tell everyone to stop any damage 🙌.

Loved it! ❤❤❤

Originally posted by: Miss_SR

😲🤭 damn that punch to Dev took me ages to get over! I had to read it over and over to see if it really happened

Shiva was not possessive about his girl, he was also so straight to the point. It was nice seeing a glimpse of Dev's relationship, because it was a nice contrast to ShiVi's one. One was worried about what his brother would think, the other straight away said this girl is mine so stay away. Raavi and her version of 'he loves me, he loves me not' was adorable!...and he came! Their confessions was so cute and felt really personal...it was just them letting each other know they're made for each other 😳, and straight after they're ready to tell everyone to stop any damage 🙌.

Loved it! ❤❤❤

Hey!! I was waiting for your comment!! Thank you for commenting and letting me know your views..

So sorry for replying so late!!

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Hahaha yeah Dev deserved to be punched for being so secretive according to me..

Hehehe yeah all that's to his insecurities and fear.. we got to see this side as well..

Glad you loved it!! One brother so shy and other too bold..hahaha what a combination...

Awwww!! Thank you so much❤❤!!!! Glad to know that you loved it so much, my characterization, idea and its execution !! It means a lot to me. ❤❤❤❤