ShiVi SS: Love Letter Part 5 Updated 29/5 Page 9 - Page 8

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Ooohh! Something so personal about him wanting to eat every last bit of the food she’s cooked! ♥️♥️

Your writing was amazing as always! 🤗

Thank you!! There's just something about food and love! We already saw heard Shiva eat all of Raavi's kebabs, can't wait to see him eat other dishes cooked up by her ❤️

Loved it!! It was amazing as usual. Loved the insight into 💄 dislike. It's nice to see this initial, coming to age,. Type of scenes with these two. So our man always was effected by her and definitely noticed things to the T. And the way he thought to prefer her no makeup look was 😂. Thank God Dev didn't see the lipstick colors. I swear Raavi came to show off her lipstick more to Shiva than Dev anyways.

And back to present time, again his opinion matters to her and she followed his advice. Aww, Raavi broke his heart bringing Dev again. He wants to be the center of her universe. Hope you write few years down the line when Raavi realizes her feelings and when they officially become a couple.

And for next part, am I reading this correctly? "Love Letter Scene in Shiva's POV, Shiva helps the boys in his class write some love letters. " Shiva helped other boys write love letter for Raavi? Was that even before her request to him?

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Loved it!! It was amazing as usual. Loved the insight into 💄 dislike. It's nice to see this initial, coming to age,. Type of scenes with these two. So our man always was effected by her and definitely noticed things to the T. And the way he thought to prefer her no makeup look was 😂. Thank God Dev didn't see the lipstick colors. I swear Raavi came to show off her lipstick more to Shiva than Dev anyways.

And back to present time, again his opinion matters to her and she followed his advice. Aww, Raavi broke his heart bringing Dev again. He wants to be the center of her universe. Hope you write few years down the line when Raavi realizes her feelings and when they officially become a couple.

And for next part, am I reading this correctly? "Love Letter Scene in Shiva's POV, Shiva helps the boys in his class write some love letters. " Shiva helped other boys write love letter for Raavi? Was that even before her request to him?

Aww, thank you! I've honestly been liking these pre-marriage scenes that I've been writing since I imagine these two to have a history together even on the show. And all that potential is being missed by the CVs unfortunately. So maybe I should just envision more pre-marriage/childhood scenes myself.

Unfortunately, this story will end in another two chapters, so there isn't much time for Raavi to realize her feelings. Next chapter was described in the preview and the following chapter is an epilogue where they are already married.

As for the bold, I was hoping someone would catch on to it, but yes, it's exactly how you think it is 🤣 Poor Raavi doesn't even know exactly who wrote all those love letters to her

ufff this post script is so good

having more insight on shiva's thoughts are a blessing and I love how it's so natural - he's confused about that random feeling but otherwise is clear about his annoyance with her which is very realistic in my opinion

raavi downright a riot 😆 I love how she just keeps going on and on, unaffected by shiva's frustration - only she can handle him

shiva finally admitting that she is super pretty was just ufff ☺️

eager to see how he got all these boys to write the love letters - mans is a certified simp 🤣

update soon my milkwa jaan 🤗

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Aww, thank you! I've honestly been liking these pre-marriage scenes that I've been writing since I imagine these two to have a history together even on the show. And all that potential is being missed by the CVs unfortunately. So maybe I should just envision more pre-marriage/childhood scenes myself.

Unfortunately, this story will end in another two chapters, so there isn't much time for Raavi to realize her feelings. Next chapter was described in the preview and the following chapter is an epilogue where they are already married.

As for the bold, I was hoping someone would catch on to it, but yes, it's exactly how you think it is 🤣 Poor Raavi doesn't even know exactly who wrote all those love letters to her

I have no idea with premarriage childhood scenes. And if you write about their married life, it should be suffice too.

Aww. Hope she realizes it the epilogue. Haha they can reflect back to this time.

And now that this ff is ending, what's the status on our first ever ShiVi ff? Can't wait for the proposal in that story.

I was going awww at every third line in this

It was beautiful, adorable little inner turmoil Shiva had growing up❤️

Awesome update, it was so adorable

Shiva's inner turmoil about Raavi was beautifully explained❤️

Raavi is a riot and she is unable to understand Shiva's frustrations😆

Raavi listened to Shiva and didn't wear any makeup, she always care for Shiva's opinion😉

Raavi's Dev jaap ruined Shiva's mood😆

Shiva just want Raavi's attention

Shiva's pov during the letter part, excited to read about it😊

Shiva made the boys to write letters to Raavi😲

Shiva is full of surprises

Waiting for next

Love these scenes so much ♥️♥️

Shiva is so confused and angry it’s adorable!!
And Raavi is just hilarious - no care in the world 😆

Update soon

Awsome update 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Loved it , yes Shiva you are obsessed with her.

Plzzz cont soon , want to read more n more ❤

Awesome update

Cant wait to read Shiva's pov