Meant to be yours- A meerasim FF(Tere Bin) Part 4 update 7/3 - Page 3

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hi Neha, pls update this now. Let the man meet his biwi 😳

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Part 4

Hope


Time is relative, he remembered his physics teacher saying in school but today he understood what it meant. It felt like he hadn’t seen Meerab for a year when he had woken up a couple of days ago.

Nurse Fatima bustled out fairly quickly but he believed time had stopped as he waited for the door to open again. And then with a slight creak the door opened and there she was.

Dressed in black, her face pale and a small bandaid on her forehead, she was there. He felt like he could finally breathe. Like he had been holding his breath the entire time he waited for her to appear.

She stood there frozen, her eyes searching his face. And his drinking in her sight. He didn’t know what he should feel- relief that she was here, anger for all that transpired or just sheer happiness that she was unharmed.

“ Murtasim..” she said softly “ Tum…” she swallowed hard and looked away. “ Tum theek ho?’


He sighed.

“ Ab kyun aayi ho? “

She faltered, a cloud passing through her face. She swallowed again and straightened up

“ Tum bhi… main chali jayungi. Abhi chali jayungi.” She started to move and then stopped “ Isme Fatima Baji ka koi kasoor nahin hai. Maine insist kiya sirf isiliye…”


“ Kyun insist kiya?” He interrupted her and she colored and raised her voice.

“ Tumhe dekhne liye Murtasim. Bas ab dekh liya main chali jayungi- Tum Sab ko lagta hain ke yahi meri saja hona chahiye..”

He stepped forward in aggression

“ Tumhari Saja? Aur mujhe Ki baat saja de rahi ho tum? Main Jo tumhe dekh ke liye pal pal mar raha tha, uska Kya? Tum itni der se kyun aayi ho?”

His sudden movement had jolted his arm and he felt a cracking pain on his arm. He flinched. Suddenly her soft hand was over his, slowly soothing it.

He froze . Her touch was so overpowering that he momentarily couldn’t feel the pain. Her soft fingers traced circles on his bandaged arm and she said softly

“ Takleef ho rahi hai bohut? “

He shook his head staring intently at her. She held his gaze.

“ Kyun nahin isse pehle? “


“ Woh aane nahin de rahe the, Murtasim”

She whispered “ Ma begum ne kaha ke Meri wajah se tumhari yeh halat hui hain- mujhe tumse door rehna chahiye.”


He clenched his teeth.


“Phir bare baba-“ she stopped and corrected “ Anwar Chacha ne huqum diya ke tumse na milon. Ke hum bhi koi beghairat toh nahin hai ke bar bar toheen ke baad wapas aate rahe”


He pressed his fingers against her cheek and he could have sworn she leaned into his touch.

“ Ajeeb hain na Humari family? Kabhi zarbaasti nikah karwate aur kabhi mil bhi nahin sakte”


She was so soft, so complacent and there was something in that moment that felt right. His heart felt like it could calm down. The last few days had been torture- the constant urge to see her, the utter emptiness that her absence had caused. Without thinking he pulled her closer, ignoring her gasp of surprise,and encircled her body with one arm holding her against him, breathing in her smell.


“ Murtasim..” she protested


“ BAs ek minute. Ek minute ke liye mujhe mehsoos Karne do ke tum mera paas ho Meerab.”


To his utter surprise she stopped fidgetting. In fact she relaxed against him and took a deep breath. Did she need this as much as he did? The almost loss had caused this need for reassurance and in some ways he had the inkling she did too.


And as he held her, everything started falling into place. Her smell, her feel - clicked everything into place. Suddenly his brains clicked into gear.


“ meerab” he said against her hair


“ Hmm..”

“ Tum Yahan kaise aayi? Itni raat ko? Kis ke saath?”


She shifted back but he still held onto her.

“ Maine khud se aayi hoon..” she whispered

“ What?”


“Tumse main miloon yeh koi nahin chahta. Isliye main khud hi aagayi. Fatima Baji mein kaha ke woh mujhe tumse..” she stopped. “ Itni raat ko kyunki Subah tumhari pehredaari chalti hain.”


“ lekin tumhe ma ne aise kaise raat ko nikal ne diya? Aur saare guards..”


Her expression hardened “ Main Ghar mein nahin hoon.”


“ What?”

She sighed. “ main aur kuch nahin kehna chahti hoon. In fact mujhe jaana chahiye..”


He held on. But the moment was gone. She pulled her hand away.

“ Tumhe jaane nahin doonga..”

Her gaze flitted back to him.

“ Tum koi haq nahin hain mujhe rokne ha. Koi haq nahin hain mujh pe..”

He had heard the words a thousand times before. But this time it lacked her usual fire. It was like she was saying it to test his reaction.


“ Ok. Then why are you here?” He asked gently” Kyun itni raat ko, kisiko na batake, khud Ki safety Ki parva na karke tum yahaan mere paas aayi ho?”


She wasn’t expecting that. She was expecting him to turn away in anger as he did when she rejected his right on her. She flushed and then looked away. He could feel hope blossoming in his heart.

“ Tumse maafi magna tha.” She fumbled


He lifted her face to look into her eyes.

“ I was driving Meerab. If anything, I am sorry ke main control nahin parya aur.. I should have been more careful.”


She swallowed and looked up.

“ Mujhe kyun bachaya?”

Did she really not understand still?

He smiled “ Tumhe na bachaya toh khud bhi Zinda na reh pata.”


Her lips trembled and tears slipped through her eyes. He tightened his hold on her.

Edited by Neha_S - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Omg I'm crying 😭


This is so beautiful and romantic and at the same time sad💔 This has all the perfect angst that we needed .. continue soon

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Read all the parts. Very beautifully written.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#25

Beautifully written! Loved it 👏❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Great writing 😍😍😍😍💖🔥🔥👍👍👍👍

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bad_Karma

Omg I'm crying 😭


This is so beautiful and romantic and at the same time sad💔 This has all the perfect angst that we needed .. continue soon



Awww!!! Thanks. Glad you liked it so much. ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Love how you’re staying true to characters. Very believable. Glad they met at the hospital instead of meeting at home like in the show. Waiting for the next one

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Posted: 2 years ago
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loved it,waiting for the next update

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Originally posted by: Sp_25

Read all the parts. Very beautifully written.


Thank you ☺️

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