Extended Scene Humsafar: Ashar's Apology

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-Grace-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

^ LOOOL ikr i feel like an idiot for writing a cheesy scene i had to edit it 10 million times lol...but i guess the scene wud be incomplete w/o the cheesiness ahaha

Thanks for reading!

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Anam

@sweetcharms

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awww i love it...😍...reading it was a treat😳...keep such beautiful scenes coming😊

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sana.B
Finally, i got time to read it, and Wow Iqra, Such a magnificent writer you are. You should consider doing something in literature, your writing style is really intriguing. The apology was so well written.. Thank-you for writing this.. I love love love it, and i wish it was dramatized.. ❤️ Why don't you go into script writing, maybe we can get better stories? 😛

P.S, you did not go cheesy at all!

omg sana! your comment made my horrible day!😳🤗

thank youu so much!!!😆

i wud love to go into script writing but then not taking sciences wud feel like something is missing big time..LOL..oh well lets see maybe my side [?] profession lol😆

Thanks again sana!

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BlackStar

@BlackStar.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Grace-

omg sana! your comment made my horrible day!😳🤗

thank youu so much!!!😆

i wud love to go into script writing but then not taking sciences wud feel like something is missing big time..LOL..oh well lets see maybe my side [?] profession lol😆

Thanks again sana!

Make it a side proffesion..im already depressed, need something to cheer myself up too 😆

And no problem..

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

like uni tension wasnt enuf ...

and u never know side prof kia main prof hi banana parjaye lol

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

reserveddd.

editted.

Cheesy?! :O

u kidding me? this is PERFECT! 😳

OMG I LOVEEE IT! <3

ufff i was waiting for a hug though ;) :P LOL cz the drama tarpaas us so much, no hugs in the serial too :| i mean not the eew wale. the cute, intense, romantic, but graceful and pure hug 😍

this scene was amazing, im waiying for moree! [:p]

Edited by Reenoo. - 13 years ago

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Reenoo.
reserveddd.

editted.

Cheesy?! :O

u kidding me? this is PERFECT! 😳

OMG I LOVEEE IT! <3

ufff i was waiting for a hug though ;) :P LOL cz the drama tarpaas us so much, no hugs in the serial too :| i mean not the eew wale. the cute, intense, romantic, but graceful and pure hug 😍

this scene was amazing, im waiying for moree! [:p]

Finalllyyy😆

thank you sooo much reeno!

ahahaha i didnt add higs cus i just didnt wana show any physical contact lmao im sorry LOL

emmm more scenes...im not sure if ill be writing any but im working on a story right so maybe tht will cheer u up?😳

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mary78613

@mary78613

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wowww! This was great!😃 Keep writing more!

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Hira

@-Hira-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Wow I just love it

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Mehwish

@-Mrs.SKMehwish-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

I know its too late but Swear I read that now .. 😛 Ohh God that was too good I wish in that show we had the same scene .. But unfortunately we had not .. But you're a very fine writer 👏👏 Keep it up ... 😃 Awesome work 👏

Khisher Rockxx 😃

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