OS - Nee yennaku matum thaan

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This my first OS romba mokka innu theriyum yetho try panniken, please excuse if any mistakes. .

So after Meesai tells Raji about wedding to Raji and Karthi, Anbu Mamar blast Karthi and Raji blasts Kamal. Madhavi hears this and goes to Raji and tells Raji that Karthi and her are getting married, and Madhavi's father is ok with it all and sir said yes. Raji was shocked to the core and didn't believe at first but Madhavi cunningly showed a photo of her dad and Karthi shaking hands and said ellam mudinchipochu, naan thaan Sirku ellam and walked away with a cunning smile. Raji stood rooted to the place and cried.

After a while in,

In Raji's home:

Raji's mind voice: "Karthi ye, ippadi panna? Naan unnaku mukiyume illaiya? Appo Vishnu kathina video poiya? Yen da yenna urigi urigi love panna, anniku naan vesham saptene annikiya yenna sava vitrukalam, yennda yenna ippadi love panni yemathunaa?" Raji didn't know what to do and sat down and cried her eyes out and after a long thought Raji and made her mind up to leave VData and the house and go somewhere else without telling anyone.

In Karthi's home:

Karthi mind voice: "athan vename innum solli divorce vangiyachu ilaa, approm ava yaaru kalayanm panna yennaku yenna? Yethuku ippadi feel panni ookaathuthu iruken? Raji illama iruka mudiyatha? Ava naaluthukaga thane divorce pannum. Aana ava veetu vitu ponna naalu irunthu avala pathi matum thaan yosikaren, yenga parthalum ava matum thaan theriraa, yenna seiya?"

Raji went to Office the next day and told Vichu Sir her decision and packed her things and went to Kamal's room and apologised for her outburst and walked out. Went to Anbu Mamar and told her to look after Karthi and then Raji went to Vishnu's room and advices Vishnu and ask him to take care of Karthi. Vishnu as usual does his mokka jokes and finally says: "innum neenga avana vizhuburinga athuku piragu yethuku evalavu pidivantham?" Raji just smiles and doesn't respond and walks away, Vishnu is confused with Raji's behaviour but doesn't say anything and continues with his work.

Lastly, she goes to Karthi's room.

Karthi: "Come in."

Raji walks in and says "Sorry are you busy?"

Karthi looks up at her first confused as to why she is here and second as to why she has been crying, her eyes are swollen and Karthi notes that.

Karthi: "Ilaa yenna vishiyam innu sollu."

Raji: "athu athu vandu"

Karthi just waiting for Raji to say something... "yenna?"

Raji: "Karthi nee, sorry Karthik neenga unga odumbu parthukonga, thaivasenji kuditchi odumbu kedukathinga, vela veliku sapudunga, vandiya parthu oothanga and velila romba nerum irukathinga, vetuku timeku ponga. Naan yethavuthu thaapu senjithirtha yenna manichidunga, innume naan ungaa vazhkaila varamaten kavala padadinga, neenga nimathiya irutha pothum."

After saying this Karthi didn't know what to say and just nodded while Raji silently walked out the room and out the office leaving a confused Karthi in his seat.

Outside Madhavi was silently watching all this being happy but this was noticed by Pavithra and Ashwin. Pavithra asked her: "yenna sirupu? Avanga pesarathu othukekarathu thapa therila unnaku?"

Madhavi being Madhavi said: "no and said innume naan yethuku ottu keka poren? Athan avanga velaiya vitu poitangaile, yennoda route clear and sir yennaku matum thaan" with a cheeky smile on her face. Pavithra and Ashwin were shocked and asked what is she saying and Madhavi narrates everything that happened and tells her how she is the reason why Raji has left VData and the conversation she had with Raji and started to laugh and turned around and held her cheek.

Everyone got up and saw that and were shocked to see that Karthi had slapped Madhavi across the face. "Yenna sonna? Yenna sonna, naan unnaku thaan ennumeya? Sethalum nadakathu! Yenna nanechithu iruka yenna pathi? Naan yenikiyavathu solirkana naan unna love pandrenu? Neeya vanda, pesuna, urimai yedukkutha aana yenikiyavathu naan athuku pudi kuduthurpena? Sollu?

Chinna ponnu chinna ponnu sonna purijipaa innu vita romba overa nadantharaka? Rajiya pathi yenna theriyum unnaku? Naan avala yevalo vizhumburenu unnaku theriyuma? Ava naluthukaga thaan divorcesuku samathijen. Kadhal naa yenna innu theriyuma unnaku? Kadhal romba punithamanathu, yennoda Raji mathiri yarum yenna kadhilaka mudiyathu. Yenthana sacrifice, yevalu poratham, yevaluvu sanda, aana yeppavum yenna ava vitu kudakveilaa. Counselling sessionsliyum naan avaluku venum innu thaan sonna aana naan thaan avala kevalama thitti, sollakudatha solli avala noga adichen. Unnaku naala theriyum Raji inga iruntha naan unna Kadhalika maten innu, athu naala avala velaiya vitu matum thaan unnala annapaa mudiyum aana yen manasula irunthu aanapa mudiyathu!"


Saying so, Karthi breaks down thinking what he has done and cries and says sorry Raji, Vishnu sees this and tries to calm him down and Madhavi stand rooted to her place in shock and cries. Karthi realises now what Raji said and thinks how Raji addressed him in third person manner. Karthi gets up and says "Raji illama yennala iruka mudiyathu da, Vishnu naan Raji ya theda poren naan varen da" but Vishnu stops him and says he will go with him. This is all noticed by Kamal who realises he does not have a chance of marrying Raji ever and quietly moves to his cabin.

Karthi and Vishnu go to her house first and look but find out Raji has left the house and given the keys to the house owner. Karthi then says to Vishnu to go bus stand and he will go to railway station to look for her. Karthi reaches the platform and rushes inside looking for her. Goes to the waiting room and doesn't find her and keeps running when he sees her standing on the platform looking at the screen board.

He walks up and stands in front of her and Raji sees him and thinks it's her imagination and says:

"Aiyo yen Karthi yenna ippadi thola pandra unna maraka mudiyama thaan naan velaiya vitu and ooru vitu poren. Nee illama yennala iruka mudiyathu. Unnoda santhosam thaan yennaku mukiyum nee naala iruntha serii, antha madhavi kudathan nee santhosama irupa innu yennaku therinchu pochu, naan poren karthi, but i will always love you."

Saying so Raji turns around to walk away but is stopped with a pull on her shawl and turns around angrily and slaps the person, only to realise after that she slapped Karthi. Karthi just looks at her holding his cheek and starts to laugh thinking about the first time in office, when Karthi pulled her shawl and Raji blasted Karthi for it. Raji is shocked to see Karthi there and does not understand how he is there and

Karthi says:

"yenagaiyo poren sonniya poo! Aana ithu ketuthu poo, yennoda vazhkaila naan nesicha orai ponnu nee thaan, ippo matum illa yeppaiyum nee matum thaan. Naan madhaviya eppadi kalyana pannipen innu nee nanitcha? Avaluthaan illaa nee yenna nambarathu? Ithey thaan Susan and Angel vishithiliyum panna, aana yennala unna thaviraa yaariyum yethaka mudiyathu di! Yennaa,i am truly, madly, deeply in love with you Mrs Raji Karthikeyan."

Saying so, walks up to Raji and hugs her and both cry in happiness and Raji starts to hit Karthi but Karthi just hugs her tighter and says again "I love you Raji nee yennaku matum thaan" and Raji cries and says"I love you to Karthi"

The End.


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Gayathri30 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Daffodilee

good one gayu
loved it



Thank you daffi. Its my first try and naala moka innu theriyum but thanks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic story Gaya3 !! 😉

Yaaro eludha theriyaadhu nnu sonna maadhiri irundhuche... Hehe... But it was really awesome, romba interesting ah irundhuchu... 😆

The way Madhavi has been shown here... Not surprising at all... 😛

Karthik - Raji mindvoice la pesuradhe velai pa... Good Dialogues throughout... 😃

Even if Vishnu came here and there, it was apt... 😊

Karthik's outburst at Madhavi -- Well deserved for her... 😛

Karthik and Raji... Over feelings ah irukke... Hehe 😆

When you mentioned Karthik pulled her shawl, the first sight that came into my head was that scene on their first day... 😉 And you mentioned it in the very next line... 😛

The final touch was really cute... 😳

Super Super Super Gaya3 !! 😉

Edited by SushK16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gayu sis...First Welcome to the writers club...👏👏
Ennanu theriyala..I loved this OS very much...current situationa vechu supera story koduthurukeenga...Thanks a lot for that...👏

Madhavi..Grr...how dare she was?...Rubbish...😡😡

Raji's mv...pavam ava...romba manasu udanchu poita pola...oh...compaya vittu po porala...😭
K's mv...hehe...loved it...ivan eppavum ippadithan...thapu pannitu feel panradhu...😆

Raji ellortayum poi kadaiseeya pesa pora..vishnu pavam...confuse aaitan pola...but karthikta neenga vaanganu pesum pothu enake etho maathiri irunthuchu...😭

Hurray...Karthik slapped madhavi...sema timing.👏...nalla venum..ippadi pesina...
Karthik...than manasula ullatha kotti theerthutan...Good boy...But sema thittu...hehe...😆

Kamal...lol...pavam avane othungitan ethuku vambunu...😆

In RS...rajiku appayum karthik ninaiputhan ...avan nerla paarkum pothum kanavunu ninaikara..😳
But karthik...over kusumbu...shawla pidichu illuthutan...adiyum vaangitan.🤣..oh...FB...aww...athalam oru kalam...😳
KR last moment...chooo cute...❤️

Enjoyed this OS thoroughly..Next venture FF thana??😆


Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one gayathri...👍🏼

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Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Gayu sis...First Welcome to the writers club...👏👏

Ennanu theriyala..I loved this OS very much...current situationa vechu supera story koduthurukeenga...Thanks a lot for that...👏

Madhavi..Grr...how dare she was?...Rubbish...😡😡

Raji's mv...pavam ava...romba manasu udanchu poita pola...oh...compaya vittu po porala...😭
K's mv...hehe...loved it...ivan eppavum ippadithan...thapu pannitu feel panradhu...😆

Raji ellortayum poi kadaiseeya pesa pora..vishnu pavam...confuse aaitan pola...but karthikta neenga vaanganu pesum pothu enake etho maathiri irunthuchu...😭

Hurray...Karthik slapped madhavi...sema timing.👏...nalla venum..ippadi pesina...
Karthik...than manasula ullatha kotti theerthutan...Good boy...But sema thittu...hehe...😆

Kamal...lol...pavam avane othungitan ethuku vambunu...😆

In RS...rajiku appayum karthik ninaiputhan ...avan nerla paarkum pothum kanavunu ninaikara..😳
But karthik...over kusumbu...shawla pidichu illuthutan...adiyum vaangitan.🤣..oh...FB...aww...athalam oru kalam...😳
KR last moment...chooo cute...❤️

Enjoyed this OS thoroughly..Next venture FF thana??😆





Ada yenna shiny ivalavu periya comment? Welcome eriters cluba? Hahaha this is firt and last shiny hehehehe
but thank you so much for the comment naan mokka podalunu innu nanikaren and your comment makes me happy eah partum naala rasitchi padirchikinga innu therithu athuku thanks shiny :)

Im happy now :)
Oh no FF btw😆
Edited by Gayathri30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathyakrs

Nice one gayathri...👍🏼



Thank you Sathya :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SushK16

Fantastic story Gaya3 !! 😉

Yaaro eludha theriyaadhu nnu sonna maadhiri irundhuche... Hehe... But it was really awesome, romba interesting ah irundhuchu... 😆

The way Madhavi has been shown here... Not surprising at all... 😛

Karthik - Raji mindvoice la pesuradhe velai pa... Good Dialogues throughout... 😃

Even if Vishnu came here and there, it was apt... 😊

Karthik's outburst at Madhavi -- Well deserved for her... 😛

Karthik and Raji... Over feelings ah irukke... Hehe 😆

When you mentioned Karthik pulled her shawl, the first sight that came into my head was that scene on their first day... 😉 And you mentioned it in the very next line... 😛

The final touch was really cute... 😳

Super Super Super Gaya3 !! 😉


Adaa nee vera Sush, yennaku yezhatha theriyuthuthaan😉
ithu semma mokka innu theriyum aanalum intha commentku romba nandri :)

Yeah i thought about the shawl scene and thought to bring it in so i did 😆 Thanks Sush😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one gaya3!!!!! Mrng ezhundhadhum enaku oru sweet surprise ennanu ninaikreengala unga os dhaan
Os pathi solla varthaye illa.really feeling nice after reading this. Dialogues are superb!!!!!

Innum nerya stories ezhudha try pannunga pa.ipdiye vitradheenga. Shiny kita no ff nu solirundheenga.adhellam chelladhu chelladhu...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gayathri you rocked to the core...
I loved raji confession and karthik as usual love dialogue..Evalavu naal achu idhellam kettu..Love you for this😳😳

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