SS:Azhagana Tharunangal :CHAPTER 11(B) UPDATED IN PG 80

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#531

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porumai...porumai...iniku thana naan freeya iruken...kandipa two daysla koduthuruven...ok?😆

Sis two days la inoru update sis diary la note panniten 😆

Ivange ellam vaaku kapathure family aiche sis so kandipa update undu 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: Archana03

Sis two days la inoru update sis diary la note panniten 😆

Ivange ellam vaaku kapathure family aiche sis so kandipa update undu 😊

Archu na tangachisa namburen ana avanga Anna doubthan pa . Parpom Don vaaka kapathurara illayanu 😆

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Archu na tangachisa namburen ana avanga Anna doubthan pa . Parpom Don vaaka kapathurara illayanu 😆

Hehe...dont worry...kandipa update panniruven two daysla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Shiny bro eppo update bro... waiting bro for ur NN and AT... hehehehehe

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#535

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Shiny bro eppo update bro... waiting bro for ur NN and AT... hehehehehe

Sis.hehe...puriyudhu..nethithan exam mudinchuthu.,.nalaiku update panniruvennu ninaikaren..paarpom😃

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CHAPTER 10(B)

In KV home...

"Vishnu..dei Vishnu..ennada pannikittu iruka??"K knocked the vishnu's room door by saying so..there Vishnu was standing before dressing table by adjusting his dhoti..
"veshiti kattikittu irukenda..veshti.."v
K's mv:"ivanuku enna aachu theedernu?..ippadiyeva office ku vara poran...hmm...appa namma velaiya aarambika vendiyathuthan...hehehe..."
"oh...sir veshti katikittu irukara?...aana ippa ethuku ithalam kattikittunu ketkaren?"K
"vera ethuku...enaku pidichuruku katikaren...ketkaratha paaru..."V
"mmm...veshti idupula nikkuthaa illai...??"K
"dei...dei..enda vaiya vaikara...naane kastapattu kattikittu iruken..nee vera ...summa iruda..."V
"etho periya malaiya puratra maathirila scene pottukittu iruka.."K
"pinna,ithalam satharna vishayama enna?..romba kustam da.."V
"serithan.."K
After a min..
"dei ennada innuma veshtiya katikittu iruka?"K
"iruda..nee vera thona thonanu.."V
"un kalyanathulam ippadi late aakkathada veshti katren per vazhila...ponnu pavam da.."K
"inga paaruda comedya..hello...naangalam perfecta irupom appa...moreover ponnu asanthu podium enna veshtila paartha.."V
"oruvela veshti manadapathula kelandruchuna enna pannava?"K
"adapaavi ..enna oru nallennam...neeyalam nalla varuvada...nalla varuva.."V
"thank u...thank u...hehehe...ippa naan ulla varalama?"K
"tharalama varalam..."V
K opened the door n went inside...
"appuram..."V stopped suddenly as he was shocked to see karthik dressed in pant n shirt with tie around his neck..
V's mv:enna ivan..iniku intha dress a pottukittu irukan?..inikum office pora palakathula dress a maatikittano...onnum puriyala.."
"ennada appadi paarkara?"K
"hehe...onnum illaiye..summa than ...hehe.."V
"serida rendu peroda ammavayum enga aala kanom..kalaila irunthu thedikittu iruken.."K
"avanga kovilku poirukangada .."V
"kovil ka?"K
"aamada..kalankathalaye kilambiyachu..nee vera asanthu thoongikittu irunthaya athan enta sollitu ponanga..."V
"enna theedernu kovilku poranga ippo?K
"ketene..namma rendu perukum seekarama kalayanam nadakanumam...athan perumal a sevika porangalam...sorry sorry avara pottu imsai panaa poranga.."V
"ennada solra?..ithuka kovilku ponanga ippo?"K
"ada aamada...avangaluku marumagala paarkanumam seekaram..avangalta porupalam opadichutu freeya iruka porangalam...innum neraya planlam pannikittu irukangada.."V
"hmm..pannatum...pannatum...avanga velaila correct a irukanga.."K
"seriya sonna.."V
"athu irukatum nee seekaramava eluntha?..aachariyamala iruku.."K
"nee vera...enaku theedernu pasi eduthuruchuda 5.30 maniku...athan elunthu utkaarnthu parle mik sakthi biscuit saapitukitttu irunthen...enaa naan paal nirathula irukenla...athan...hehehe.."V
"sutham..kalankathalye pasi vanthurucha unaku?..athu eppadida thookathula pasi varum??..visithramala iruku..ithuku naduvula,paal niram..palli niram nu.."K
"ennada poramaiya unaku...hehe..."V
"pesu...nalla pesu...unaku irukudi appuram.."K
"athayum than paarthuruvom.."V
One click sound was heard in K's phone..
"ennda msg a ??"V
"aamada..."K
"yaarta irunthu?"V
"appa ta irunthuda..saaptengala pa nu keten...athuku than reply pannirukaru.."K
"oh...Good...Good..appata msg panni touchlaye iruka pola..."V
"ellam ne kodutha idea thanda..ammava paarthukitte irukom...appata pesavathu seiyanum...avarum pavamnu nee thana sonna?"K
"aama aama...antha nalla ideava naanthana sonnen.."V
"enda..oru maathiri solra?"K
"atha en ketakara da,appa ta jollya thanada pesikittu irunthen.."V
"haan...appuram enna?"K
"intha rendu naala manusan enna pottu kolraruda.."V
"enna solra Vishnu?"K
"aamada..avar hair coloring pannika poraram.."V
"Vishnu??"K
"nee enna solla varanu puriyuthu...intha vayasula en ithalam panrarnuthana ketaka vara?"V
"aamada.."K
"enna avar youth a irukanumam...color panathan smart a,handsome a therivaram.."V
"aana appa ithalam panra aal illaiye da.."K
"panra aal illai than..but avarkoda sila vettiyana aasamigalam irukula...athugathan thoondi vitrukuga..."V
"appa ve sonnar a atha?"K
"aamada..athugala paarati pesinaru..appalenthu purinchukitten vishayatha.."V
"mm.."K
"ithula innoru koothu ennana,hair coloring a naanlam pana kudatham...enaaa enaku mudi kotti poi chhotai thalai aaidumam..."V
K laughs..
"intha siripuku artham enaku puriyudhuda...appa avarku mudi kottathanu thana ketkavara..athayum ketene...athuku avar bathil solrar paaru..mudiyala...una maari youthslam ippadi panni panni thangaloda illamaiya nasam pannikaranga...aana naan atha panikitta illamiya jolipen nu solrarda.entha company ippadilam oru tag a pottu sale pannuthu sollu..?."V
K now laughed louder..
"sirikaraya?...enaku siripe varalaida...kaduputhan vanthuchu...ethathu logic iruka paarthaya avar solrathula?..haan..neeye sollen..rendu naala itha pathithanada pechu..businessmanku intha vishyathulalam moolai velai seiyatha?...illaipa,ungalukum athalam othukathupa,solratha kelungapana...manushan pecha kaathula vaangi kittathana?..mom a pottu pada padutharda ...aana mom othukittathana...avarum vidratha illai...ethukulam poratam nu paarthayada.."V
"hahaha...puriyudhu da un kastam..appa thana...freeya viduda..aana unga appa..hehehe."K
"appa mattum illaida..neeyum appadithan iruka.."V
"ennada solra?"K
"pinna ennada,ethukuda iniku pant,shirtlam pottu kittu iruka?..athuvum tiptop a?"V
"ennada loosu maathiri pesara...iniku office iruku...theiryumla..naanga correcta than irukom..neethan veshiya maathikittu thiriyara llosu maathiri...hehe.."K
"loosu thanda..loosuthan...unaku friend a iruken paaru...adei...iniku office leaveda...maranthutaya?V
"ennada olara..?..iniku eppadida office leave a iruka mudiyum?"K
"athan solrathu,..romba velai panni moolaiya strain panikathanu...ippa maaru athuve kulambi poiruchu.. mothalla calendar a paaruda"V
K looked at the calendar in his phone n shocked..
"hehehe...aamada..iniku leave than..hehe.."K
"aiyeee..asadu valiyudhu...thodachuko.."V
"hehehe..sorryda.."K
"appadi matta appavayum,ippadi patta friendayam vechukittu naan padre paadu iruku paaru...sothanai kaalam.."V
"romba salichukatha da..vaa polam.."K
"mothalla nee un tie a kilattuda.kodurama irukuda athoda coloru..."V
"hehe...seri...seri...kilatren vaa..polam..."K
"officeku illai la?"V
"illai...illai velilathan porom..hehe"K
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Bala Old age home.

V'smv:"iniku laxmi inga vanthurapala?..avala meet panniye aanum eppadiyathu...avalta pesiye naal aachu..ennamo theiryala avalta pesama iruka mudiyala..."
Vishnu came near one grandma..
"paatima...eppadi irukeenga?"V
"Vishnu...neeyada...nalla irukenda...enaku enna kuraichal sollu?..inga enna ellorum nalla paarthukarangada..aana petha pillaigathan enna kandukalai.."Granny
"paatima...enna ithu??..ethuku ippa ippadilam pesareenga?..ungaluku naan illai gavanichuka?"V
Granny moved into tears..
"Vishnu.."Granny
"aama paatima...ungaluku naan iruken,karthik irukan..en ellorum irukom...engala unga perapasangala ninachukonga..."V
"seripa...kandipa ninachukaren..."Granny..
"appo vaaku thavara maateengala?"V
"maatave maaten...inime naan varuthapadavum maaten.."V
"oh..love u granny...u r so cute..hehe"V
"poda nee vera..."Granny blushed..
"hahaha...granny ku vetkatha paaru."V
"seri karthik engada...aalaye kanome konja naal a?"Granny
"illai paati..avanuku sema velai...overnightlam utkaarnthu velai panran...athan inga avalavathu vara mudiyalai..athan enna anupirukan.."V
"seri...seri...velaiya parkatum...onum prachanai illai.."Granny.
"paatima neenga laxmiya iniku paartheengala?"V
"laxmi yava?...ethuku ketkara..."Granny
"illai...summa than keten..hehe"V
"yeiii...enaku theiryum nee ethuku ketkarenu.."Granny
"enna theiryum?"V
"avala nee paarkanum,pesanum,...athukuthana ?"Granny
"athu vanthu...appadilam.."V
"poi solradha paaru...paatiku theiryatha unna pathi..aana unmaiya sollanumna ,laxmi unaku romba poruthamanava da."Granny
"paatima...enna neenga ippadilam solreenga?"V
"aamadapa...neenga rendu perum super Jodi than...athula entha doubtum illai.."Granny..
"ponga paatima..."V
"hahaha...vetka pattathu pothum...po laxmi dinning hall a than iruka...poi paaru.."Granny
"enna solreenga?..laxmi dinning hall a irukala? Really?"V
"aamada aama...po...paaru...pesu...then love pannu...hahaha.."Granny
"paatima...enna neenga?...ponga.."V
"seri...seri...po poi pesu avalta..appuram onnu sollanum unta,ava kalailaye vanthutalam,aana innum saapidalaiyam...ennu theiryala nu mam ippothan konja nerathuku munnadi sollitu ponaga..naan avala paarkathan kilambinen.athukulla neeye vanthuta...po pa..ennanu poi kelu,ethathu prachanaina avala samathanam paduthu...ok?..poitu vaa.."Granny
"ada appadiya?..ennachu laxmiku...seri paati naan poi ketakren..varen"V
In Dinning hall
Laxmi was standing on the terrace with her folded hands..vishnu came near her..
"Hi laxmi..."V
Laxmi was super shocked to spot Vishnu there...she wiped her tears soon with her forefinger..
"Hi Vishnu.."L
"enna laxmi azhareengala?"V
"athalam onnum illaiye"L
"illaiye...unga kannu kalankiruku..unga moonchiye sevanthu poiruku..ennaachu laxmi...any problem?"V
"..."
"laxmi...enta ennanu solla maateengala??...ethayum manasu vittu pesirunga,appathan manam amaithi adaiyum.."V
"onnum illai Vishnu...pls..enta ennanu ketkatheenga"L
"mm...seri laxmi...appo naan varen...neenga azhuthukitte irunga...vena nerya hanky vaangi koduthu anuparen...ungaluku useful a irukum...bye.."V
V was about to leave having saying so..
"Vishnu..."L
V turns with a smile after hearing laxmi's voice..
"sollunga laxmi..."V
"Vishnu...athu vanthu...athu vanthu..."L
Laxmi began to sob..
"ada enna laxmi...ippa ethuku azhareenga?..first enna problemnu sollunga azhama...azhutha onnum seiya mudiyathu.."V
"Vishnu...naan trail testla thoothu poiten Vishnu.,."L
She began to sob harder..
"trial test?..ethula?"V
"chess la..first testlaye thoothu poiten...enaku manase ketkalai...ketta sagunama amanchu pochu...atha ennala thaangiga mudiyalai..azhugaya varuthu Vishnu"V
"mm...nalla azhunga...kanla kanner theerara varaikum azhunga...vena oru kutty kulatha create pannirunga...meenlam thulli vilayada usefula irukum.."V
"Vishnu...enna ippadi pesareenga??"L
"vera eppadi pesa solreenga laxmi,sollunga?..ungalta itha naan sathiyama ethirpaarkalai..sema boldana ponnunuthana konjam neram munnadi varaikum ninachukittu irunthen..but next secondlaye neenga ippadi pannuveenganu naan ninaikalai.."V
"Vishnu..."L
"pinna enna laxmi..ithukulam yaarathu varutha paduvangala?..athuvum neenga?...trial test thana?..appuram enna?"V
"athu illai Vishnu...first testlaye naan thoothu poitene..."L
"thothu ponna enna?.."V
" Vishnu.. ?"L
"aama laxmi...vetri,tholvi yaarukum nirantharam kidaiyathu...maari maari than varum... tholvi vantha,atha paarthu bayanthu pogama atha ethirthu vetirya nooki oodanum..athuthan intelligence..tholvi namaku oru experience than..adutha vaati namma correcta pannuvomla ethayum...I mean...innum konjam perfecta pannuvomla.. ennala mudiyumnu nambikai varanum...athu ungaluku varalaiya innum?"V
"Vishnu...neenga.."L
"paarunga laxmi...ithu oru game than...ithukulam odanchu pona eppadi..vaanga...confident girl a maarunga..appuram paarunga ellathayum"V
"Vishnu...irunthlaum enaku manasu ketkalai.."L
"manasu ketkalaina manasa maathunga..neenga unga manasa controla vechurkanum...atha ungala control panna vaika kudathu.."V
Laxmi remains silent..
V's mv:"mmm...madam amaithiya aagara maathiri theriyalai...namma trick a kaata vendiyathuthan.."
"ungaluku oru super vishayam solava?"V
"ennathu?"L
"konja varusham munnadi nadanthathu...enna aachuna,en pakkathu veetula oru kutty ponnu iruntha,ava eppayum ennoda vilayaduva..oru naal enna aachu,theedernu kaila ethayo eduthukittu vantha...enna nu paartha,kutty kuruvi..enaku sema shock..enna ithalam kondu vanthurukanu keten...athuku ava sonna paarunga reply...anga nikara ava.."

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"uncle,neenga konjam thalaiya kuniyungalen.."kutty
"ethukuma?"V
"ethukuna...intha kuruvi kutty enga veetula irukara kootula irunthu keezha vilunthu kidanthuchu...pavam kutty...athuku iruka idam venama?..athukuthan ungalta vanthen.."Kutty..
"enta enga idam iruku?"V
"athan unga thalai iruke,kuruvikodu maathiri...athan kuruviya ungalta kondu vanthen.athu anga bathirama irukumla?"Kutty..

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Laxmi burst into laughter...
"Vishnu...eppadi ippadilam ??"L
"paartheengala laxmi en nilamaiya?.."V
"hahaha...romba kastam than...seri appuram enna achu?"L
"solren kelunga.."V

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"illada kanna,ennalam atha vechuka mudiyathu..nee kilambi po.."V
"mudiyathu...unga thalailathan veipen..kaaminga...seekaram"Kutty..
V's mv:aiyoo..ippadi pidivatham pidicha eppadi??"
"nee samathu ponnula...sonna keluma"V
"neenga samathu uncle la,naan solratha kelunga"Kutty.
"ahaa..en plate a enake thirupi podrale.."V's mv
At that ime,group of kids gathered there with their pet birds..
"yeii...yaaruda neengalam?"V
"ivanga en friends than uncle,..ivanga veetulayum birds valakarangalam...unga thalaiya pathi sonnen...athan inga bathirama irukumnu ellorum avangaloda pets a thookitu vanthutanga..."Kutty..
"ennathu??...ella birdsayum en thalaila vida porengala?"V
"aama uncle..aama.."One kutty paiyan
"ithalam unake nalla irukada?"V
"summa irunga uncle,neenga itha panna social service panna maathiri irukum.."Kutty paiyan
"ennathu?..social service a?...ellam en neram."V
"aama aama...friends,vaanga namma velaiya start panuvom.."Kutty..
"aiyoo...aala vidungada..naan essuuu..."V rushed from there..

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"hahahahahahahahahaha...vishnu...aiyoo ennala mudiyala...sema comedy ponga.."L
"comedy a?..enaku tragedynga.."V
"appuram enna achu..?"L
"naan anga irunthu oodinavan than...vera ooruku poiten..."V
"Vishnu...hahahahaha...u r too much..enaku vairu valikuthu sirichu sirichu"L
V admired her..

"laxmi..neenga sirikum pothu romba azhaga irukeenga"V
"enna?..."L
"sirikarathu azhaga irukunu sonnen..."L
"thanks.."L
"ippadiye sirichukitte irunga laxmi...kavalailam paranthu poidum.."V
"correctthan n thanks..enna sirika vechathuku..inime naan enna maathikaren"L
"appo madam inime kavalai pada maateenga?.. "V
"aama..."L
"appa keta sagunamnu sonnenga first?"V
"parava illai...atha nan next testla nalaltha maathi katren.."L
"appo sure a win panniruveenga next roundla?"V
"damn sure..."L
"super...super...laxmi...ithathan naan ethirpaarthen ungalta irunthu.."V
"..."L
"laxmi...enna onnum pesa maateengranga?"V
"pidichuruku"L
"enna pidichuruku?..etha pidichuruku?..yaara pidichuruku?"V
"athu vanthu...unga comedy,unga advice"L
"mm...appa en comedy,advice ellam pidichurukuna?...ennayum pidichurukunuthana artham?"V
"athu vanthu...athu vanthu...naan solla maaten ponga.."L
Laxmi's face turns into pink n within a second,she ran from there..

"laxmi...nilunga..nilunganu solrenla.."V go behind her saying so..laxmi stopped at that place as Vishnu came in front of her..
"bathil sollamalaye ippadiya oodrathu?..haan?"V
"ennala solla mudiyala"L
"en?"V
"unga mugatha paartha vaarthai vara maatengathu.."L
"en moonchi avalavu bayangaramava iruku?"V
"cha..cha...athalam illai.."L
"appuram"V
"onnum illai"L
"oh...seri...aana enaku ungalta solla onnu iruku.."V
"enna?"L
"enaku ungala pidichuruku.."V
"Vishnu!!"L
"aama laxmi...ungala naan first kovila thana paarthen..appo neenga enta pesina vidham sandai podra maathiri irunthalum,enaku antha thudukana pechu pidichathu...appuram namma santhichukittathu konja naal than..aana intha konja naalulayum enna fulla maathinathu neengathan...neenga mattum than..neenga enta pesatha ovavaru naalum enaku naragam than...unmaiya sollanumna,ungalta pesarathukagave inga adikadi varen...ennu theriyala,ungalala enakulla oru puthu maatram...athu ennanu solla theriyalai..aana ungala enaku romba romba pidichuruku.."V
"Vishnu...enna neenga?"L
"ungaluku enna pathi ellame theiryumnu ninaikaren,veetuku ore pillai,nalla padipu,nalla velai,sambalam ellam perfect a iruku enta..amma...avanga ennapola sema jolly type...appa..avaru pesina pesikite irukalam...appadipatta nalla manushan..ivalathanga en family..athula neengalum oru member a varanumnu enaku aasaiya iruku..enga veetuku vilaku etha varuveengala?"V
Laxmi was startled on this different proposal n couldnt let out a word..

"laxmi...ungalathan ketkaren.."V
"Vishnu...athu...athu.."L
"puriyudhu laxmi..avasaram venam..nalla yosichu mudivu edunga...en virupatha unga mela thinika maaten..unga mudivu than final..then,ungalta phone iruka?"V
"iruku..ethuku ketkareenga?"L
"mothala kodunga...solren.."V
Laxmi passed her cell to V..
"enna panreenga?"L
"onnum pannalai..en number a save panren...avlothan.."V
"Vishnu.."L
"ethukunu ketkareengala?..neenga edutha mudiva enta solrathukuthan..naan wait panren...neenga unga mudiva sollalam enta,entha mudivanalum..seriya?..appo naan kilambaren...appuram dhairiyama irunga,santhosama irunga..naan varen..."V

Vishnu vacates the place n laxmi was stood rooted to the place,with her unblinking eyes n unbelievable ears..

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K dialled raji's no..she attends the call..

"Hello,My dear"K
"hello my dear karthik"R
"enna pannikittu irukeenga madam?"K
"ungalathan ninachukittu iruken"R
"oh...really?"K
"aama...ungala ninaika ninaika neram porathe theiryalai"R
"mm..ippadi love panna,naan enna aarathu?"K
"neengalum enna appadi love pannanum"R
"paaraah...aana naan atha.pannikitte thana iruken.."K
"R blushed..
"raji...unta oru mukiyamana vishayam sollanum.."k
"enna vishayam karthik...sollunga"r
"en mom unna nerla paarkanumam.."K
"karthikkk!!!"R
"yei...ippa ethuku kathara?..naan appadi enna solliten?"K
"illai karthik..aunty a nerla paarthu pesarathuku enaku bayama iruku.."R
"bayama iruka?...avanga enna peiya,pisasa bayapadrathuku?"K
"aiyooo naan appadi sollalai...aana etho bayama iruku karthik..."R
"bayapadalam venam raji..dhariyama iru..avanga nallathan pesuvaanga"K
"nalla pesuvaangala?..enna thitta maatangale"R
"haha...ethuku thittanum unna ippo?"k
"illai karthik...naan ungala love pannathuku..avanga enna..."R
"raji...raji...naanum thana unna love pannen...appa eppadi unna thituvanga sollu..solla ponna,en mom rendu perayum thitta maatanga...kavalaipadatha.."K
"seri eniku meet pannanum...nalaiku illaila?"R
"nalaike than.."K
"karthik.."R
"aama raji..nalaiku than meet pannanum..ready a iru"K
"nalaike va?..aiyoo ennala mudiyathu"R
"enna raji nee?appa nee ammava parka venama?"K
"athu illai karthik"R
"raji..."K
"aana karthik ithuku ans solra munnadi ungalta onnum ketkanum"R
"kelen.."K
"enna ungaluku unmaiyave pidichuruka?..ungaluku naan poruthamanava thana?"R
"shabbahhh...unaku theeder theedernu enthan intha maathiri vetti thoughtslam varumo?"K
"karthik...bathil sollunga mothalla"R
"ithuku bathil thana...solren...ore bathil than ippavum eppavum...unna enaku romba romba pidichuruku...unna thavira vera yaarum enaku poruthamanavangala iruka mudiyathu..nee enaku yezhezhu jenmathukum manaiviya varaporava.."K
"enna yezhezhu jenmathukum a?"R
"pinna illaiya?...yezhezhu jenmathukum nee than en pondati,nee mattum illai...Vishnu than en friend,appuram en parents than ithana jenamathukum amma,appa..."K
"unmaiyaveva?"R
"oho...madamku ithula doubt vera iruko?serithan"K
"unga aasai kandipa niraiverum karthik"R
"appadiya...appa naan sonna first bonding athula irukuma?"K
"kandipa...neenga than enaku..."R
"unaku?"K
"ponga...solla maaten..."R
"haha...raji...raji...athan sollitaye..appuram enna solla maatenu illuvai..."K
"purinchuruchula...pothuma?"R
"pothum...seri ippa sollu ammava parka nalaiku readya irukaiya illaiya?"K
"readya iruken.."R
"en samathu kutty...naan solratha udane ketrathu...ippadithan irukanum.."K
"seri...seri..pothum konchinathu..."R
"pothuma?..innum naan konchave aarambikalai..athukulla nee enadana"K
"ponga karthik...neenga vera"R
"cha...koncharathuku koda urimai illai..kodumai.."K
"karthik...enna neenga?"R
"seri vidu..naan intha matter a appurama deal pannikaren..irukatum.."K
"karthik"R
"enna?"K
"kovama?"R
"illaiye.."K
"poi solreenga..kovam than.."R
"illai nu solrenla"K
"Karthik.."R
"mm..."K
"ILU"R
"really?..enaku theriyama poche.."K
"karthikkk..seri ok,..sorry...neenga enna konchikalam...ippa sirikalame"R
"en rasathi...appadi vaa vazhiku..hehe"K
"appada samathanam aaitarupa oru vazhiya.."R
"ippadithan un lover a cool pannanum..ok?"K
"hahaha. Double okay..."R
"appuram raji nalaiku kalaila readya iru...naan unaku phone panren...pakkathula irukara parku vanthudu..anga meet pannalam.."K
"karthik...naan nalaiku enna dress pottukittu vara?"R
"enna dress venalum pottu vayen...I mean unaku comfortable a irukara dress a "K
"appa saree kattikitu varava?"R
"appa naan gaali nalaiku.."K
"karthik..."R
"unmaiya solren raji...seri tharalama kattikitu vaa"K
"appuram malikai poo vechukittu varen"R
"appa naan confirm a gaali than"K
"konja neram chumma irungalen "R
"seri iruken..sollu"K
"then,simple makeup,appuram thalaiya pinnitu varen..."R
"hahaha...raji...raji...nee un isthapadi vaa..seriya?"K
"aana auntyku pidicha maathiri dress pannikitu varen e"R
"thevai illai...nee neeya va..pothum.."K
"appana seri...nalaiku naan saree kattikittu ready irupen...neenga phone panathum vanthudren"R
"super cute...ippadithan palichu palichunu pesanum..":K
"aana karthik..ennanalum enaku lesa bayamathan iruku"R
"ithu seri pattu varathu...naan kilambaren"K
"enna karthik...ippadi solrenga...manasala pattathana sonnen"R
"raji...inga paaru...nee un varungala maamiyar a parka pora..maamiyarnale appadi ippadinu ninachukatha...un ammava ninachuko avangala..casual a pesu avangalta...avangaluku unna kandipa pidikum..pidikum enna pidikum?..erkanave pidichuruche unna...ippa innum pidikum.nee kavalaipadatha."K
"neenga solrabadi nadanthupen karthik...naan bayapadalai...jollya varen...unga ammava...illai illai en mom a nalaiku meet panna varen..."R
"raji na rajithan...ennoda raji nu prove pannita ippa...poi thoongu po...nalaiku paarkalam..GN.."K
"GN,karthik...bye.."R
"Bye"K
K cuts the call..

K's mv:"venki,...nalaiku en lifela maraka mudiyatha naal...en lifela important roles play panra rendu pengal meet panna pora naal...eppadi irukumnu theriyalai...athu unaku mattum than theiryum...athanala naan unta ketakrathulam nalaiku ellam nalabadiya nadakanumpa..avlothan.."

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In Park

"karthik...enga auntya kanom?ungakoda varalaiya?"R
"illai...nee muunadi po,naan pinnadi varenu sonnaga..."k
"ennam?'R
"enna keta?..avanga sonnathana?"K
"oh...seri naan eppadi iruken?..ok va irukena?..ellam seriya iruka?"R
"unakena,ellam perfect a iruku...iniku romba azhaga iruka "K
"aana karthik...enaku lesa kai nadungura maathiri iruku.."R
"raji...enna ithu?..pls be confident..."K
K's mv:"iva vera bayanthukittu iruka,naan aaruthal solren...enaku yaaru aaruthal solluva ippa?..tension eruthe.."
Meanwhile k's mom came there..
"raji..mom vanthutanga...casual a iru..pls"K
"is it?..seriii...seri...iruken...aana"R
"aana aavana paadathalam appuram nadatharen..nee konjam naan solratha mattum kelu.."K
"seri.."R
Now..K's mom come closer to KR n throw a glance at raji..
"vanakam aunty"R
K's mv:"kadavule,convo start aaychu..nee thanpa enna kaapathanum"
"vanakam ma"k's mom
K's mom mv:"karthik sonna maathiri raji devathai maathirithan iruka..avalavu amaithi,avalavu latchanam..jodi porutham arumaiyo arumai..."
"en ma nikkara...vaa utkaarnthu pesalam benchla.."K's mom
"paravaillai aunty,neenga utkaarunga.."R
"neeyum utkaaru ma..naan solrenla.."K's mom
K signaled raji to sit n he too seated near mom..
"karthik unna pathi neraya sollirukan..mukiyama eppadi unna love panna aarambichanu.."K's mom
Raji blushed a little..
"athan avan love panna ponnu,eppadi irukanu paarkanumnu than naan unna vara sonnen"
Raji smiled..
K's mv:enna ithu,normal convo than a poikittu iruku..main point ku innum varalaiye..."
karthik's mom turned to K..
"dei karthik...nee poi konjam popcorn,panchumittalilam vaangikittu iru..po.."K's mom
"seri maa,naan vaangittu vanthudren"K
"unna yaaru vaangitu vara sonna?..vaangitu angaye engayathu suthikittu iru...naan rajiyoda konjam thaniya pesanum"K's mom
KR become shocked..
"amma...aana...aana...naanum kodave irukene.."K
"onnum venam..pombalinga aairam pesuvom...nee ethuku naduvula?"K's mom
"appo enna nanthinu solreenga..appadithana?"K
"appdiye than..kilambu.."K's mom
"amma...naan vera oorama utkarnthu neenga pesaratha ketkaren...pls."K
"thevai illai..nee kilambu..15 mins kalichu vantha pothum.."K's mom
"amma...pls..pls.."K's mom
"kilambanu solrenla..po pa.."K's mom
"seri ennamo panunga...naan kilambaren.."k
K's mv:"aiyooo...amma enna pesa poranga rajita thaniya?..bayama iruke enaku."

Now,Only Raji n K's mom r there..pindrop silence prevails between them.
R's mv:enta ethuku thaniya pesanumam?..karthik vera koda illai...enaku ore tension a iruke...enna panrathu ippa?"
"enna raji,romba nervous a rukara maathiri iruku?"K's mom.
"athala...athalam illai aunty.."R
"karthik a naan en velila anupinena,un koda naan konjam mansasu vittu pesanum.."K's mom
"pesunga aunty"R
"raji..azhagana peru...un full name raji prabaha thana?.."K's mom
"aama aunty"K's mom
"romba azhaga iruku peru..enaku pidichuruku"K's mom
r's mv:"haiyaa...aunty ku en peru pidichurukam...appadiye ennayum pidicha nalla irukum"
"karthik sonnan,nee veetula romba chellamame,ore magalame.."K's mom
"aama aunty..en amma appaoda pet naanthan..enna avanga romba nalla paarthupaanga.."R
"hmm...super parents than pola.."K's mom
"aama aunty..appa ammavum romba comedy pannuvaanga...pesina pesikitte irukalam.."R
"that's nice..appuram karthika pathi nee enna ninaikara?"K's mom
"aunty?.."R
"un manasula ninaikaratha sollu raji.."K' s mom
"seri solren...karthik...intha pera ketaudanaye enakulla oru kuthugalam varum paarunga...atha vaarthaiyala vivarika mudiyathu..enna antha pera keta udana avar face than en kann munnadi vanthu nikum..unmaiya sollanumna,naan avar mugathakoda first paarkalai,avar voice than keten...appuram avara nerla paarkum pothu than enaku therinchuthu,avar evelavu azhagu nu..avara naan first first nerla parkum pothu,en manasu entaye illai...avartaye vittu vantha maathiri oru feeling...appuram naan avara paarka nerntha santharpangal maraka mudiyathu...avarmela ulla mathipu koodikite pochu enaku...koda kaathalum than...intha maathiri oru aambalaiya paarthathe illainu en manasu sollichu...avartaye en life opadachurulamanu thoonikitte irukum...atha naan ippa niraivethavum senchuten...avar enta love panrenu sollum pothu,enaku peche varalai,aunty...avalavu santhosama irunthuchu...avar pechu,avaroda siripu,avaroda paarvai ellam...ellam enaku romba pidikum...avar en lifela kidacha pokkisham..avar a vittu ennala vazhave mudiyathu...appadi oru life a ennala ninachukoda paarka mudiyathu..."R
Raji was lost in her prince thoughts by saying so..K's mom was awestruck on hearing her speech n her heart was filled with full of joy..

"seriya thappanu theiryalai...aana ithuthan aunty naan karthika pathi ninaikirathu..."R
"raji...nee karthika pathi sonnatha ketu en manam appadiye poorichu pochuma.."K's mom
"aunty"R
"aamama...ivalavu thooram purinchu vechurukaye en magana pathi...ithavida oru thaaiku enna venum sollu?"K's mom
Raji smiles..
"ippa oru ammava naan unta karthika pathi sollanum...karthik engaluku kidacha varamnu than sollanum.enna ivan engalauku thavamai thavam irunthu pirantha kuzhanthai...athan ivanuku avalavu chellam..avan piranthathula irunthu padu sutty type than...eppayum jollya pesuvan...romba kushi paduthuvan yaarathu upset a iruntha...naanga avana paarthu paarthu valarthom..school a romba samathu paiyanu peru vaanginan...varusha varusham,ivan than class first...ivana yaaralam beat panna mudiyathu..appadi padipan paiyan...appuram than vanthan vishnu...avan than karthiku close friend..modern ram-laxman nu sollalam avangala...appadi irukum avanga uravu..appuram colg padipu nalla pochu...avanuku auditor aagamnunu aasai...athanala CA padika aasai pattan...naangalum ok sollitom...nalla padichu second rankum vaangitan national level a...engaluku perumai mela perumai sernthukitte irunthan...appuram office velai...ippa adutha kattam...avanoda life...avan select panna nee...avan selections eppavum perfect a than irukum...ithuthan en karthik...illai...illai...nammaloda karthik.."
R was speechless
"avan love panna neeyum perfect match than avanuku.."K's mom
"aunty unmaiyaveva solreenga?"R
"aama raji..avan unna pathi ennaena sonnano,appadiye iruka nee,azhaga,latchanama,amaithiya,anba,mariyathaiya,...ellam ellam enaku romba pidichuruku..unna marumagala adaiya naan kuduthuvechuva than.."K's mom
"aunty..."R
"aama raji...naan mudivu panniten,nee than en maganuku etha ponnu.."K's mom
"aunty,ungala paarkarathuke naan bayanthen,but neenga ivalavu softa,casual pesuvenganu ethirpaarkalai.."
k's mom softly hold raji's hands..
"enna paarkara..itha naan pannalamla?"K's mom
"kandipa.."R
"raji naanum oru ponnuthan...un vayasalam naan thaandi vanthava than...naan unaku maamiyar aaga porava than..athukunu unna kastapadutha mudiyuma sollu?..enaku magal illai...unna naan en magala ninachuka poren..inime karthik un porupu...avana nee bathiram a paarthupela?"K's mom
"kattayam paarthupen,aunty.."R
Tears were streaming down from raji cheeks..
"ippa ethuku azhara raji...azhatha ma"K's mom
"ennala control panna mudiyala,aunty...thank u so much ellathukum"R
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K was walking restlessly here n there..
"aiyoo...enna pesarangalo rendu perum?..onum theiryalaye...enna mattum thaniya anupitu apapdi enna pechu?...iru...15 mins aayachu...seekaram karthik...sekarama poi paaru avangala.."

Having thought so,he puts his long strides n proceeded towards the place where they both seated, as much as he can..after arriving there,he shocked to the core on seeing that sight...there raji was wiping her tears with her hands n his mom was warning raji with his forefinger..

"aiyooo...enna nadakuthu inga?..raji azhara.mom vera kovama pesaranga avalta...enna nadanthuchu?...venki...ennapa ithu sothanai??"
Karthik advanced towards them hastily..
"amma...enna aachu ma?"K
"enna aachu na enna artham?"K's mom
"athu illai ma...raji ethuku azhara?"K
"athuva,atha nee avalta than ketkanum"K's mom
"enna raji aachu?"K
R signalled him through her eyes as nothing bad happened n he felt releived..
"ippa un santhegam clear aayacha?..seri popcorn,panchumittailam enga??"K's mom
"atha naane saapiten ma...hehe"K
"paarthaya raji..evalavu nalla pillai ya irukanu...namaku vaangitu varama avane saapitanam.."K's mom
R smiles..
"amma.."K
"solluda"K'smom
"ungaluku rajiya pidichuruka?"K
"illai.."K
"AMMAAA"K
"aamada enaku pidikalai.."K's mom
"ennama solreenga?"K
"aamada...nee keta kelvi enaku pidikalai.."K's mom
"mom??"K
"pinna ithu enna kelvi?..pidichurukanu?..enaku rajiya romba romba pidichuruku...unaku thaguthiyana manaivi iva than...iva mattum than..ippa unaku santhosama?"K's mom
K goes near his mom n clung to her neck..
"amma...u r my sweet mom...thank u so much"K
"paarthaya raji...paiyan en mela evalavu paasama irukanu.."K's mom
"mom..."K
Everyone laughed

"seri vaanga rendu perayum photo edukaren...seekaram.."K
"ok..vaa raji.."K's mom
"itho varen aunty.."R
"enna aunty nu koopidra...athai nu koopidu inime.."K's mom
"seri athai."R
"en pakkathula vaa raji"K's mom
K's mom n raji stood closer..
"adada...intha kankolla kaatchiya paarka enaku innum rendu kannu venum polaye...ippadi patta maamiyar marumagala naan paarthahte illaiye..."K
"dei...hari..."K's mom
"hehe...unmai ma.."K
"irukatum...nee mothalla engala photo edu.."K's mom
"ok..readya nillunga..smile pls..."K
K didn't even said ok for few seconds
"dei...ennada pannikittu iruka ivalavu neram?"K's mom
"illaima.unga rendu peroda 32 teethum velila theiryuthu...athan atha paarthu santhosapattukittu iruken.."K
"seri..santhosa pathathu pothum..seekrama edu.."K'smom
"ok..1...2...cheese..eduthachu.."K
"neenga rendu perum ippadiye kadaisee varaikum iruntha,enaku perum prachanai illai...mukiyama naan naatamai somba thookittu theerpu solla venam paarunga..hehe"K
K's mom came near him..
"paarthaya raji...pulla ennama yosikaranu.."
Now she carressed his head ,twisted her ear n said.."ennada kannu sonna?..haan..?"
"amma...amma...haaa...kathu valikuthu ma...kaiya edunga...ellorum paarkaranga"K
"paarkatume...kurumbu paiyana amma adakaranganu ninachupaanga..illaya raji?"K's mom
R laughs..
"raji neeyum vaa...avanoda innoru kaathai pidichu tirugu..vaa."K's mom
"illai athai..venam.."R
"appadi sollu raji..paarthayama rajina raji than.."K
"vena,naa avar kaiya kilren athai.."R
"appadi solluma raji...ippa ennada solra kanna nee??"K's mom
"raji...neeyuma?...rendu perum sernthu enna oru vazhi panniruveenga pola...nadathunga.."k

Raji was pinching his hand n his mother screwing his ear continuosuly,but karthik didn't even felt the pain as he was in a state of ectasy..

K's mv:"venki..intha tharunam en vaalnalla maraka mudiyatha tharunam...mazhichiyana tharunam...en lifela play panra rendu ladies oda meeting romba nallabadiya mudinchuthu..
Amma...ennai petraval...en vaazhkaiyil oli etriyaval..
Raji...en idhayamaanaval...en vazhagaiyil sudaram oliyai anaiyamal innum pragasika vaipaval..
Ivanga rendu perum ippadiye santhosama,sirichukitte irukanum pa...enaku itha vida vera santhosam illai..ellathayum nallabadiya nadathitapa...unaku kodanu kodi nandrigal.."

To be contd..

Ufff...ithukumela ennala type panna mudiyala..kai valikuthu..update eppadi irukunu sollunga friends,waiting..

Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago

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Prema

@prema27

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#537

I am first... Hi shiny superb as usual ... wow so nice and relief pa .. karthik amma likes raji.. so expo kalayanam... mamba serial mathiri illai la... pls shiny bro anther mathriri venam ok va... as usual so nice and calm... ur story is super and athukum mela... Hehehehe👏

and small request expo my darling NN update😉 waiting pa

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#538

Wow...shiny...wonderful update... 👏

KV conversation...super...aama, K edhukku ippadi leave naalunnu kooda theriyama ready agiyirukkan...hmm..

Wow... Kuruvi kooth thalaikku, neengha kodutha FB scene.. Super O Super... 👏

Wow, Vishnu proposed- Lovely dialogues..

R n K's Mom conversation , nice... Raji ya pidikkalai nu pre cap paathapo bayandhutein...

Thanks for this lengthy update, Shiny

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Wowww!!! Excellent, beautiful, marvelous, chanceless update! Azhagana tharunangal-na idhu thaan!! I just fell in love with every reaction, every convo, every word uttered by each of your characters. There's love oozing through out this update. How beautiful will life be if everyone approaches life this way!!!

The way R described about Karthik was just so realistic and adorable. I am not sure if any daughter in law can open up so much with a MIL, but that is Raji right? She speaks her mind and expressed how much she cares for Karthik very beautifully. As a mom, I can understand how K's mom must have felt hearing this. Lovely lovely all the way!!

Thank you thank you thank you! 👏

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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Thank u for d super dooper update 👏👏

KV convo super "elunthu utkaarnthu parle mik sakthi biscuit saapitukitttu irunthen...enaa naan paal nirathula irukenla...athan...hehehe.."V after reading dis na i was 🤣🤣 eno oru thought super nandhu.. ithe vide periye highlighte V dad sonne reason youth ah irukarethuku omg i juz cnt stop laughing appadiye scenes wer cumng infront of me while reading..

VL convo was nice athuvum anthe FB ena oru FB 😆😆

KR phone convo rombe nalla irunthuchu nandhu😊 remembered d old convo wen R cums to K house was nice la.. atlast mamiyarum marumagalum meet panniachu😊..i really like R and K mom convo nandhu super..d way R told abt K was so nice and K mom abt K was also nice.. rendu perum nalla purinji vechirikange..all went nicely...

Precap parthethum yethuku R pudikale nu avange amma sonnange nu nenaichen so inthe pudikale meaning dhan athuva😊.. so all is well and all is going well nu nenaikeren but K venki kitte pray panrethe partha etho something is on d way nu therithu😆😆..

Parpom nandhu wats gonna happen in d cuming updates

Edited by Archana03 - 10 years ago