NiBir TS- I AM SORRY !!![COMPLETED]

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Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Guyz maine yeh OS ke form mai doosre couple par likha hai but mujhe useh nibir feeling ane lgi so I thought to share it with you all . So I am writing this in detail here.. and guyz if you want to throw tomatoes and all so you can and criticism is allowed 😉

NiBir-Ts

I AM SORRY!!!

SHOT-1

Nisha was getting restless after that incident happen. She pushed Kabir kumar who is her favorite dancer and choreographer she was like paglofied fan of him but she pushed him only because her parents don't like dancers and choreographers they don't like the Bollywood related people but they don't know that their own daughter loves and passionate about dancing...

Flashback:::

There was an open chance for all the fans of kabir kumar to dance with him but there was a task in which nisha win so she got the chance to perform a couple dance with kabir...
At 7:00pm every gathered there to whatch their performance...

Mareez-e-ishq hoon main kar de dawa
Mareez-e-ishq hoon main kar de dawa

Kabir forward his hand in front of nisha. She keep her hand slightly on his hand lil hesitating...

Talab hai tu, tu hai nasha
Ghulam hai dil yeh tera
Khul ke zara jee loon tujhe
Aaja meri saanson mein aa
Talab hai tu, tu hai nasha
Ghulam hai dil yeh tera
Khul ke zara jee loon tujhe
Aaja meri saanson mein aa
Mareez-e-ishq hoon main kar de dawa
Hath rakh de tu dil pe zara
O haath rakh de tu dil pe zara

He started to twirl and spin her while she was matching step by step with him...
Then he hold her tiny waist by his one hand and one fidget with her one of the hand while her one hand was on his shoulder and they started to flow with music looking in each other eyes...

Tujhe mere rab ne milaya
Maine tujjhe apna banaya
Ab na bichaadna khudaya
Tujhe mere rab ne milaya
Maine tujjhe apna banaya
Ab na bichaadna khudaya
Mohabbat rooh ki hai laaz-vizaa
Hath rakh de tu dil pe zarae
O haath rakh de tu dil pe zara
O hath rakh de tu dil pe zara

Then he started to perform individually while she started to follow him step by step and now her hesitation was vanished in thin air...
and after some more steps they again started to dance together...

Chaha maine tujhe wafaa se
Manga maine tujhe dua se
Paaya tujhe teri adaa se
Hmm.. chaha maine tujhe wafaa se
Manga maine tujhe dua se
Paaya tujhe teri adaa se
Karam had se hai zyada mujhpe tera hai
Hath rakh de tu dil pe zara
O haath rakh de tu dil pe zara
O hath rakh de tu dil pe zara

He again started to twirl and spin her at that time her eyes fell on her parents who were coming for a walk on beach she started to getting hipper and just before the song end up she pushed kabir and run away from there...

FLASHBACK ENDS:::
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Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb 👍🏼

Very interesting start😊

All together a different concept

Very nice

Continue soon😃

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb start ansh ki bacchi 😆 👏

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Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you guyz for liking my story...😳😳😳

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Anshika

@TASYAM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

SHOT-2

At 9:00pm
Nisha was feeling very very guilty so she decided to ask kirti and sukku for help as she want to say sorry to kabir for her such behavior...
Kirti and sukku reached in her room. They were breathing heavily as they come running from their room...
"what happen nisha tune hume intni jaldi mai kyu bulaya" kirti asked in mid of her heavy breaths "nothing just i am feeling restless after that incident" nisha said marching in her room and narrated all the incident "and why are you feeling restless" sukku asked and sit on couch "I want to say sorry to kabir" nisha said in her one breath "What??" sukku and kirti shouted and acted like they are fainted...
"help me guyz don't react like this" nisha said sitting on couch near sukku "nisha whatever you have done after that he don't even want to look you ever in life" kirti said and she also comfort herself on couch "I know but any how I want to say him sorry I have done a great mistake so at least I can say him sorry" nisha said
"ok let me think" kirti said and start to think for an idea...
"IDEA!!!" sukku shouted so loudly making nisha and kirti to keep their hands on their ears...
"sukku lil slowly me and nisha are not in other room" sonam said "so what you also shout like this" sukku said "I use to do that sometimes but you always shout like this" kirti said lil loud "from next time i will record your voice whenever you shout" sukku said "ya a..." kirti was about to reply but nisha keep her both hands on her ear "see nisha is closing her ears because whenever you talk it feels like you shout" kirti said with a winning smile...
sukku was about to say something but nisha interrupt in "shut up you guyz you both are here to help me not to fight sukku tell me your idea" nisha said...
" so my is that we will buy a flower basket for kabir and will keep a sorry note in that after that nisha will keep that basket on the door of kabir's house, will ring the bell and will hide in any corner and after that kabir will took that basket in and nisha will come back home" sukku explained his plan and start looking towards nisha and kirti...
"so how was it" he asked "its awesome by this nisha will also not come in front of kabir and she will also say sorry to him" kirti said happily "ya its quite nice so now lets go" nisha said getting up from couch "where" sukku and kirti asked her in unison "to buy flower basket and to say sorry" nisha said "not now yaar its too late we will execute this plan tomorrow" kirti said and yawned "no today means today if you don't wanna go kirti then you can rest but i know my brother sukku will not refuse to come with me" nisha said blackmailing sukku...
"yes i will go with my sis if you wanna join us than you can" sukku said getting up from couch "then what will i do all alone here i am also coming with both you brother sis" kirti said and she also get up from couch "aww i love you kirti" nisha said and hugged her tightly...
"ok ok now no more melo-drama lets go" kirti said breaking the hug and trio marched towards kabir's house...

At Kabir's House:::

Nisha follow the plan as decided and hide behind the pillars. After few seconds kabir open the door and look towards flower basket with confused look "at 10pm which kind of people send flower basket to anyone" he thought and pick up the basket. In the mid of the flowers there was a note. He pick up the note and read it...

NOTE

I am sorry kabir for pushing you in mid of dance i know now you don't even want to whatch my face but i thought that at least i can say sorry to you.I am sending you this flower basket I don't know your favorite flower so sending my one...

Your Dance lover
Nisha

Now after reading the note his anger vanished in air he smiled lil at that time some sounds of whispering come from the pillar were nisha is standing. He understood that nisha is standing there...
"nisha i know you are standing behind pillars" he said loudly and tried to hide his smile. Nisha come out behind the pillars and stand in front of him looking down. "i..i..a..am..s..sorry..ka..kabir" she said fumbling looking down playing with her fingers...
"i will accept your sorry but you have to complete our incomplete dance" kabir said smiling "ok i am ready" she said happily with a bright smile "ok so come in" he said and move towards practice hall while nisha followed him...

Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke juda sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

Kabir forward his hand in front of her and music started to flow in air she keep her hand on his and they start to flow their body with music...

Main toh tere rang mein rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera

he started to twirl and spin her...

Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri bann chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, Sab tera..
Sab tera, Sab tera..

she started to dance separately and he started to follow her. He was amazed by her such steps but was happy too...

Phir dil ke raasto pe
Teri aahat jo hui
Har dhadkan jashn mein hai
Yeh inayat jo hui (x2)

They again started to dance together and he again started to twirl and spin her...

Main toh tujhe mil ke jee utthi hoon
Teri dhadkan mein chupi hun
Mera mujh mein kuch nahin
Sab tera, Sab tera..
Sab tera, Sab tera..

He hold her one hand and keep his one hand on her waist while she her one hand on his shoulder and one on his waist and they start to flow with music looking into each other eye orbs...

Jis pal tu saath mere
Uss pal mein zindagi hai
Tujhe paake paaya sab kuch
Koi khwaahish ab nahi hai (x2)

He spin her and leave her hand and start performing individual while she stand there admiring him...

Main toh bas tujh se hi bana hoon
Tere dil mein bewaja hoon
Mera mujhmein kuch bhi nahi
Sab tera, Sab tera..
Sab tera, Sab tera..

Now he hold her waist and took her up and start twirling while she open her arms...

The song ends and place her down "so you accept my sorry" she asked smiling while he nodded positively...

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Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago