NiBir Os-$$ CHAL VHA JATE HAI $$

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Hola peeps just song sunkar yeh Os brain mai agya ishliyeh I am representing it silent readers ko agar acha lge toh wo like karskte hai😉

NIBIR-OS

!!!CHAL VHA JATE HAIN !!!

A girl of 24 lay down on her bed.Tears were beaming in her eyes she tightly hugged a teddy bear placed nearby her.
Girl-where are you Mr.K ?

FLASHBACK 3years ago...

A girl of 21 enter in her college. At that time a boy of her same age was standing with a support of a pillar and a lady of 32 was shouting on him.Girl move towards them and start watching scene in front of her and a smile came on her lips.
Lady-Kabir tumhara dhyan kidhar ko rehta hai college ke topper ho aur dhang chal nhi pate sabko push karta huva chalta hai abhi hum gir jata toh yeh sara foodstuff bhi humare sath gir jata
Kabir (making cute puppy face)-solly mam next time seh no pushing
Lady-ok but next time seh no mistakes or any kind of misbehave while walking.
He nodded and Lady left messing his hair. He was about to left but his eyes falls on that girl while she was smiling. She was in white sleeveless top and deep blue knee length skirt.She left from there while Kabir started following her.He was lost in her black eye balls,her heavy eyelashes,her beautiful breath taking smile,her light pink lips,her pink shade cheeks and her pony style combed hair.

Aasman ke parre ek jahaan hai kahin
Jhooth sach ka waha qyeda hi nahi
Roshni mein waha ki alag noor hai
Saaye jismon se aage jahaan jaate hai

she enter in her class room and took a seat. Kabir follow her and sit at back of her...

Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyaar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain.. (2x)

Lecture was over and she left the room while Kabir followed her. She left for her home and Kabir left for his but totally lost in his thoughts...

Seenein se tum mere aake lagg jaao na
Darte ho kyun zara paas toh aao na.. (2x)

Dhun meri dhadkano ki suno


Next day...

she entered in college and Kabir was chatting with his friends.He look towards her and started moving in her direction with a smile she look towards him and give him breath taking smile and both introduce themselves.Kabir was doing winning dance in his mind...

Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyaar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain.. (2x)

Chal jaate hai..

They left for attending lecture together. In way Nisha was talking with him while he was adoring her and felt like he was in love with her but throw out this thought from his mind...

Koi subha wahan raat se na mile
Ud ke waha chalo aao tum hum chale..

They attend lecture and lecturer announced that there is a party for their seniors and they will do prepration for it. Everybody took leave for preparation and discussion for party in preparation hall...

Koi subha wahan raat se na mile
Ud ke waha chalo aao tum hum chale..

Pankh laaya hoon main ud chalo.

They discussed about it and chose Kabir and one of the for dance preparation.When they were practicing it at that time Kabir started to imagine that girl in place of the girl with whom he was practicing.After lots of work they all left for their respective homes.Girl was about to left at that Kabir stopped her and ask her that can he drop her? She smiled and nodded and they both took leave

Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyaar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain.. (2x)

Kabir was happy and was ridding with her on his bike with full speed. She said him to plz decrease the speed of bike but Kabir realized that brakes are failed. He wont told her and order her to come near him.She nodded back hug him tightly in order to come near him. He smiled and told her to took out his helmet and wear it. She nodded and did that whatever he told her.
After 10 min
Kabir's bike was crashed and one was alive and one was taking high breaths and was near to death and that one was non other than Kabir.Girl was trying to save him but now it was not possible.Tears was flowing from their eyes.She took Kabir on her laps and he order her to bent down as now he can't say loudly.She nodded and bent down.Kabir took his last breath and in that breath he said "I LOVE YOU NISHA" .

FLASHBACK END...

Nisha was crying her heart out
Nisha (in high peach and bold voice)-I LOVE YOU TOO KABIR

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks dear 😃
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Thanks Bhaiyu 😃
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Originally posted by: nibir143

Awesome update kabir😭


Thanks dear 😃
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Awsm update bt dat was too emotional.
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it was beautifully written-so emotional
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Hi ansh...nice modification ...
I loved,it...
Do write more...
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A complete story in limited words👍🏼
However it was sad... But was really good !
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Thanks dear 😃
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Thanks dear 😃

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