NIBIR SS : Damsel In Distress (Part 2 updated)

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Damsel In Distress

Prologue

Woman...One of the most beautiful creation of god

# Who has a power or who can give birth to a new life

# Who has a strong will power

# Who has a different way of thinking

# Who is mentally strong

# Who can manage a home as well as a multinational company

But still she is Damsel In Distress because according to this superb world she needs a man who can protect her...REALLY...BUT WHY I mean she is stronger than man in many ways still she wants a man who can protect her...Chalo well enough BUT what if that saviour is an MCP (Male Chauvinist)...then what

Hmm...THEN...Let's see

What Happens when Damsel In Distress Nisha Rajput Meets Mr. MCP Kabir Malhotra
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Part 1

Delhi

A Small Flat

(A lady in her late 40's seeing a pic n sobbing silently)

Lady - Happy B'day Kabir I wish this year will bring so many positive things for u...wish u a very happy b'day beta hope main aaj tumhe dekh paati par chalo door se hi dekh loongi(n she switches on the TV)

(Outside A huge office many news reporters were gathered)

A Reporter - so frds today is a huge day for Mr Kabir Malhotra because today is his b'day n this year he got Best Business of The Year Award that too in an International Award ceremony...he is the first Asian who have got this prestigious award n he has got Best Youth Icon's award too n today he is coming back to his country after 4 long months

Other Reporter - aaj Mr Kabir Malhotra ki wajah se hamare desh ko itna bada sammaan mila hai yeh hamare liye bohot garv ki baat hai ki woh asia ke pehley aise insaan hai jinhe yeh award mila hai aur

(they all heard a chopper's voice...they all saw upward n they saw Kabir's chopper)

Reporter - so finally Mr Kabir Kumar is here

(Kabir came out from his chopper n all the reporters ran towards him n starts asking questions...suddenly a lady reporter asked something)

Lady Reporter(LR) - First of all happr b'day sir

Kabir - thanks

LR - sir how r u feeling today u got such a prestigious award so

Kabir (with a taunting look) - woman woman woman n their stupid questions

LR - excuse me sir

Kabir - excused...come on dear...I have got the most prestigious award n still u r asking how am I feeling...really

LR - no sir I meant that

(Veer...kabir's manager cum best frd saw this)

Veer - shit kabir what r u doing...debating with reporter on girls V/S boys

(he ran towards them n interrupt them)

Veer - guys guys guys that's it for today we have to leave now sorry but next time...let's go kabir

Kabir - have a nice day to all of u

(he n veer left from there)

(in the car)

Veer (with angry tone) - what were u up to bro

Kabir - that reporter asked such a stupid question

Veer -wait reporter or lady reporter

Kabir - meaning is same

Veer - no dude the meaning isn't same...the question was so common but just because a lady had asked it u found it stupid...Simple

Kabir - if u know the reason then why the hell r u asking

Veer- dude she was a reporter...do u have any idea that ur one mistake was enough to destroy our image

Kabir - accha m sorry but u know that I can't stand women

Veer - bas ho gya na kabir now its been 20 years maaf kar de na Vasu aunty ko...she is ur mother

Kabir - noo that woman isn't my mother she had killed my dad...I won't forgive her...NEVER EVER

(back to small flat...that lady switches off the tv)

Lady - I know kabir I m the sole reason of ur hatred towards women but I assure u that one day you will respect women n their efforts but for that u need a woman in ur life who will taught u to respect a woman...tabhi main sukoon se mar paungi...bas tumhari zindagi mein ek aisi ladki a jaaye beta

(Somewhere outside Delhi)

(Outside a huge mansion)

A guy - di wo kahin nhi hain...poora sheher dekh liya

Lady - aise kaisey nahin hai...how is it possible agar wo nhi mili na toh main kisi ko nhi chodungi samjhe tum sab...dhundho usey

(on a railway station...a girl in her early 20's came down from a train n goes to a stall keeper)

Girl - bhaiya ji yeh konsa station hai

Stall keeper - Mathura Junction hai behen ji

Girl - accha delhi kab tak pochegi

Stall keeper - 3 se sade 3 ghante lag jayenge behenji waisey ye toh aap net par hi chk kar leti

Girl - wo wo mera phone kharab hai

Stall keeper - ohh toh TT bhi bta deta yeh toh aap bina wajah neeche utar kar ayi

Girl - haan par wo aye nhi aur mujhe kuch lena bhi tha...thanks bhaiya ji ek chips ka packet dijiye or newspaper bhi

Stall keeper - ji behen ji

(that girl came back to her seat n starts reading news paper)

Girl - jobs in Delhi n Delhi NCR...hmm

(she starts reading the job vacancies n shortlisted some jobs)

Girl - yahaan try karte hain par call kaisey karenge

(After 4 hours...train reached New Delhi station...that girl came out from car n starts searching for taxi)

(she sat in a taxi n said)

Girl - bhaiya ji koi sasta sa hotel milega aur ek mobile sim bhi chahiye

Taxi Driver - ji madam ji sim bhi le lijiyega aur sasata sa hotel bhi mil jayega

(After an hour...outside a hotel...that girl to taxi driver)

Girl - thanks bhaiya ji

Taxi Driver - ji yeh toh hamara kaam hai

(that girl goes to her room n starts unpacking her stuff)

Girl - Abhi toh hum hotel ka wi fi use kar lenge but job ki meeting ke liye ek call toh karni padegi hamara resume toh select ho gya hai but meeting ka confirmation toh chahiye...hotel se hi kare ya bahar jaaye...bahar hi jaate hain yahaan se safe nhi hoga

(she goes to a telephone booth n made a call)

Girl - tomorrow at 10:30 in Malhotra Enterprise...ok mam I'will be there thank you(n she disconnected the call)abhi hotel nhi jaate hain 2 -3 ghante baad jayenge taaki kuch gadbad na ho

(at 9:30..that lady was going back to her hotel suddenly some goons came there n starts misbehaving with her)

Goon 1- madam ji kahaan ja rahi ho hum chod de

Girl - nhi thanks hum chale jayenge

Goon 2 - arey madam ji aisa bhi kya hai hum chod dete hain na

(that girl starts running n by mistake she took a way to some isolated place)

(those goons caught her in no time)

Girl - leave me I said...chodo humein

(at some distance)

Kabir - driver how much time

Driver- sir its almost done...5 more minutes

(then they heard someone's scream)

Driver - sir someone is screaming for help

Kabir - tum car thik karo I'll see

(he walks to some distance n saw some goons who were trying to misbehave with a girl...kabir goes to them)

Kabir - kya chal rha hai yahaan

Goon 1 - hero tu nikal chal...abhi tere lecture ki zaroorat nhi hai

Kabir - us ladki ko chod kyunki agar main chudane par aya toh tujhe mujhse koi nhi chuda payega

Goon 2 - accha teri toh

(he goes to kabir but he gave him a tight punch n he fell on the ground...all the other 3 goons goes to kabir but he fought with them n in no time they all ran from there...that girl came to him n said)

Girl - thank you ji wo main

Kabir - agar tum ladliyaan apni help nhi kar sakti toh ghar se akeli nikalti kyun ho agar main nhi ata toh kal tum poorey country mein famous ho gyi hoti wo bhi bohot hi wahiyaat head lines ke saath...tum ladkiyoon ki yehi problem hai kar kuch sakti nhi ho but independent hona hai

Girl - listen Mr MCP u helped me n m thanking u for that but u can't insult me like that dekhiye

Kabir - ohh plzz don't give me this Jhansi ki rani wala lecture tum kitni brave ho yeh toh main 5 min pehle dekh chukka hoon miss damsel in distress

(his driver came there)

Driver - sir I have fixed the car

Kabir - in madam ko jahaan jana hai chod do I'll manage

Girl - I don't need ur he

Kabir - m going

(he went from there)

Driver - behen ji yeh delhi hai yahaan ki haalat poora desh jaanta hai chaliye main aapko chod deta hoon

(That girl agreed for his help n she was going back to her hotel)

Girl(monologue) - kismat se ladkar sabkuch chodkar hum yahaan aye hain ab bas hamare ateet ka saaya hum par na pade kyunki yahaan se kahaan jayenge

(On New Delhi Railway Station)

A guy - Nisha tumhe toh humney dhoond hi lena hai

(To Be Continued)

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Part 2

Malhotra Enterprise

(in Kabir's Cabin , Veer entered)

Veer - good morning bro

Kabir - morning veer...dude where is our new PR manager u were about to interview some candidates right

Veer - yeah I was supposed to do that but I was busy

Kabir - with what or with whom(kabir smirked at veer)

Veer - funny...but hassi nhi ayi

Kabir - really...that was a joke dude

Veer - really was that...sorry but I dint find it funny...KB ur sense of humour is so damn dull n bad dude

Kabir - (with an I don't care look) I think I have asked something

Veer - ohh that...do u remember yesterday u have given some awesome interview

Kabir - (with a so what look)

Veer - bas toh I was trying ki wo jada scandalise na ho...KB tu na on camera kam bola kar

Kabir - tu hai na mera frd cum manager to take me out from such kind of disaster

[ray (kabir's PA) came there]

Ray - may I come in sir

Kabir - yeah come ray

Ray - veer sir the candidates r already came for PRM's post

Kabir - kitne candidates hain

Ray - sir 14 to 15 candidates n

Kabir - n

Veer - 5 are girls...Right

Ray - right sir

Veer - ray ask them to assemble I will be there in 5 mins

Ray - okk sir...have a nice day sir

(ray goes from there)

Kabir - girls...dude r u out of ur mind

Veer - ladkiyaan acchi PR maintain kar sakti hain n don't u dare to interfere...yeh mera kaam hai I'll handle it...bye

(Outside interview hall , some candidates went inside n came)

Receptionist - Miss Ratri Sharma

Girl - yes I m Ratri Sharma

Receptionist - mam next is ur turn be ready

Ratri - m ready

(receptionist got a call)

Receptionist - mam u may proceed now

Ratri - ok

(ratri knocked on the door)

Ratri - may I come in sir

Veer - yeah

Ratri - good morning sir (she handed her bio - data to veer)

Veer - a very good morning miss...(after seeing her name) Ratri Sharma...nice name...plzz be seated

Ratri - thanks sir

Veer - so u r from Kanpur

Ratri - yes sir

Veer - so miss ratri tell me about urself

Ratri - Sir my name is Ratri Sharma basically I m from Kanpur but currently m staying in Delhi...I have done my schooling from DPS n BBA from LOU

Veer - LOU...Really

Ratri - yes sir as in London Oxford University

Veer - seems like u r quite rich miss sharma

Ratri - no sir I had got some scholarship from my school

Veer - okk..So what do u think about PR management

Ratri - sir Public Relations r a huge part of any organisation...its like the soul of ur business if u want to gain success then u have to built up a strong Public Relation with ur business associates or most importantly with ur customers because at the end of the day he is the one who will consume ur goods or enjoy ur survices I mean we r making product for them...u have to satisfy ur customer n for that u have to maintain ur PR...sir in my opinion India is a free country n here people have different taste different choices which mostly depends on their upbringing so we have to pick that one thing which connect us or should I say associate us with them n their taste n that one thing we can find easily

Veer - really how can we find that one thing

Ratri - by seeing their up bringing Simple

(Kabir s cabin)

Kabir - I don't believe that veer ne ladkiyon ko bulaya but not to worry m damn sure koi bhi ladki yeh interview round clear hi nhi kar payegi after all girls r dumb

(Back to IV room)

Veer - Miss Ratri Sharma I really liked ur pov n m highly impressed with ur communication n convincing skills so welcome to Malhotra eneterprise...we will provide u appartment also n if u don't want to stay in office's appartment toh we will provide u tranportation cost

Ratri - no sir I'll choose the staying facility

Veer - cool then I'll go n tell Ray to print ur appointment letter but u have to give us ur ID

Ratri - ID

Veer - yeah anything voter ID , Aadhaar card , Electricity bill

Ratri - electricity bill is fine...I mean wo mere dad ke name par hai n uspar photo bhi

Veer - yeah electricity bill is fine...further u can go n ask Ridha...the receptionist

Ratri - okk sir

(Veer goes from there n ratri came to receptionist n took further details from her)

Ratri - I hope ab koi problem na aye

(veer goes to kabir's cabin)

Veer - KB KB KB finally I have got a well educated n well mannered PR manager she has done her BBA from LOU

Kabir - girl...dude r u out of ur mind...u have chosen a girl for such a reputed post

Veer - yeah i have n I don't want ur anti women gyaan on that (with a cute smile) so no comments

Kabir - tu pachtayega

Veer - we'll see that

(at hotel)

(ratri went to hotel's reception n cleared her bills)

Receptionist - come again mam

Ratri - thanks

(ratri goes to the office n complete her legal fomalities)

Receptionist - mam here is ur apartment's keys...office premises se 2 mins ka raasta hai...watchmen will tell u the exact way n wahaan building ke pas jaakar aap yeh letter dikha dijiyega watchman aapko aapke flat tak pohochva dega

Ratri - thanks

Receptionist - my pleasure mam

(a guy came to that hotel n asked the receptionist)

Guy - where is nisha

Receptionist - sir who is nisha...I don't know any nisha

Guy -pichle do din ki entries check kar...jaldi kar

Receptionist - sir I cant give u information regarding other guest

(that guy took out his pistol)

Guy - main pyaar se bol rha hoon chk kar

(that lady starts stammering)

Receptionist - sur sure sir

(she checked the whole register)

Receptionist -sir yahaan koi nisha naam ki ladki nahi ayi hai...yahaan sirl 5 ladkiyaan ayi hain...Deepti...manpreet...shonali...divyanka n pari...koi nisha naam ki ladki nhi hai

Guy - pakka

Receptionist - pakka sir aap khud chk kar lijiye

Guy - (he checked the whole register) thik hai

(he goes from there)

Guy - nisha agar tum zameen ke andar bhi sama jao na tab bhi main tumhe wahaan se dhundkar nikaal lunga

(To be continued)

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start πŸ‘
Sound interesting... Continue soon !!!
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Sonal the story is damn awesome πŸ‘
Really you rocked
A full different concept πŸ‘
You nailed it
But please update soon this story now i can't wait for this please
Aur ha maine sab res par advance mai like kardiye hai 🀣
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome back sonal
saw you after long time dear
the story looks nice
diff concept
and most imp totally different characterization of kabir as an mcp

Waiting for next update
plz pm me
Ritika

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start sonal πŸ‘
MCP kabir n brave nisha πŸ‘πŸΌ
loved the beginning
waiting to read more

P.S. sonal I didn't get the pm πŸ˜” next se plz pm me na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome...
kabir is so rude..
just hope ki jaldi hi uske views about women change ho jaen
what is d past of nisha???
will wait for d nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello sonalπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒwelcome back😊
loved it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒu wrote it amazingly πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
do update soon😊😊😊
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awesone start and nice concept update soon 😊

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