NiBir Ts-$$ GUITAR $$ [INDEX UPDATED ON PAGE 3] (SHOT-3 UPDATED) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Thanks dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Congo niya .U were awsome loved the segments .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
]for part1
Kabir ne subah k sadhe ek Baja diye 😆
BT still part was quite well written n story is gripping. . .

for part2
yeah in our society being a Guitarist is never thought to b as a gud profession bt sort of hobby or tym pass.
u hv described it nicely 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Guyz miss writer miss super pdahku ban chuki hai ishliye ushne mujhe order diya hai ki yeh update mai krdu jo ki ek bet harne ke baad krna pad rha hai pms koi bhi bhej dena aur phone seh update kr rha hu toh mistakes maf ho...
Tashu note= hi guyz part thoda long ho rha hai ishliye abhi ishke do parts hai toh mahan kabir sirf ek update karenge doosra mai wapas akr krungi...
SHOT 3
I GOT SOMEONE FAMILIAR TO ME
I wake up and saw myself on sofa again the things of past night flashed in front of my eyes i controled myself get up and follow my all routine
At 1. 30 am
Today i thought that i will wont go there because today i cant face those things today those entertainment became a headache for me i tried to sleep but alas that entertainment became my drug of this emptiness and lonliness and if today i sleep at 1. 30 then i will disturb my routine so it will be better for me to sleep at 2. 30am but for 1hr what will i do i dont like to waste my time so i took any book aur novel and start reading them but i cant divert my mind from that drug so what should i do oh god plz help me at that time my phone ringed it was call of my pa i pick up her call
. "sir i want to tell you that a mistake have been done by our employee in parcelling order materials so those people wanna talk to you i tried to explain them but they wont hear a single word... " she said i reply her to tell them them to call me now... She replied ok and cut the call
Oh because of this stupid employee how much i have to suffer by the way what is the time i saw my phones lock screen oho its 1. 45 when these fools will call me ok i recived a call from them i made my voice being good and to hide fustration.
I sort out their problems and at 2. 30 am they cut the call i again look at the front screen of my phone to see the time it was 2. 31 i thanked god god pass my time and dozed off.

Next day at 1. 45 am
Today when i was enjoying their songs and tunning of guitar without looking on it at that time suddenly girl stop playing guitar. She stand up and i treid to hide anywhere she turn around and came near me caught my hand and took me near her group. Her group was staring at us curiously.
Group member gm
Gm1- hey nishu who is he?
Gm2- you know him?
I was totally shocked and in that shockness i wont even notice her face
Girl- he is a great person who hide somewhere where we cant notice him and hide there at least 1hr enjoying our get togather i think i am correct mr. Rathore.
I wont reply becuse i was hell shocked she waved her hands in front of me and my teranse of akwardness brocken. I nodded
Gm2-Why are you doing this
Gm3-do you wants somethings from us
Gm1-di wants nhi want
Gm3-you understand na
Girl-ab kuch bolenga bhi ya gunge ho gye ho itne salo mai mr. Rathore
How she know that i am rathore aur itne sal what did she means yeh kya mujeh janti hai
G-are you here mr. Rathore.
Again my terans brocken and i replied looking down how you know me
G- mr. Rathore ap hume bhool gye hume your 16 years ago best freind ko its unbelievable.
I looked up at her face i cant belive it she was my best friend my hidden crush aur may be my love my nisha. Her eyes are now also pure and full of confidense her lips were now also have that sweet old confident smile. She left Jaipur as her father got transfered to mumbai.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Res
Unrs
Ansh meri behna i am missing you re 😭
Come back soon 😉
Kabira jaldi se isko irritated karke online la ok 😉
Coming back to update
Awesome update 👏
Loved it 😳
Update soon
And pm's sended 😉
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Superb update
loved it
cont soon


thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update 👏
Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update 😊
Ab kabir ki pov's kardiye to please
Nibir ko mila do
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
beautifully written
finally nibir met...
n nisha was kabir's crush..
waiting for nxt part to know about dere feelings..

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