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Posted: 9 years ago
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I actually don't know what I am writing but I badly wanted to write something as everyone's been doing it. So here it is, not at all upto the mark but I need honest reviews from all of you 😉 Criticisms will be highly appreciated.
P.S. It is fast-tracked and really abrupt. Everything is going to be straight-forward. I will be really sorry if I disappoint you and don't meet your expectations 😊

Regards,
Krishi


-Prologue-

The cold was already taking toll on me. Even the warmth of the fire lit lamps all along the street didn't help. I was walking down the lane pretty fast. I had a feeling in my gut I was being followed. Surely it was one of those goons from whom I had narrowly escaped a few minutes ago. Amidst my long strides and racing heartbeats, all I could think was 'Why wasn't the goon attacking even if I was walking alone? Was he scared of me?' I began feeling elated with myself when I heard rustling behind me. It grew louder with the passing second. Suddenly I smelled something like a drug and everything grew fuzzy. I started feeling dizzy, weak and the next moment I lay on the road, a little conscious as I heard something like a single-handed fight with swishes of punches. I had convinced myself that it was a dream and I slipped into a slumber.

-TBC-

Ok so this is the first time I am trying something like this (It won't be mysterious for long enough anyways 😛).
I don't know how long it will be but I am pretty sure I won't be able to write more than 8 parts. My brains have stopped working. Writing this needed some whacks and blows to my head.
I need your reviews please 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aha121

Please continue
It's awesome

Thanks 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
Please continue soon



P.s-isse complete karna aur shaandaar ko bhi update karo 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Nice
Please continue soon



P.s-isse complete karna aur shaandaar ko bhi update karo 😉


Thanks😊
I'll definitely complete this and give an update for Shandaar before I start preparing for the finals😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Liked the way it is written continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome yaar pls continue yaar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was good...😊...I wish it were longer...😆
Continue soon 😉

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