NiBir OS || Unki Kahaani || - Page 5

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Sorry for a late comment...
But this was amazing Niya. So emotional. I have no words to express how superb it was. 😳

Niya yaar sacchi mai rula diya yaar 😭
Awesome os niya 👏
emotional 😭 😭

Originally posted by: naina.majik

Niya yaar sacchi mai rula diya yaar 😭
Awesome os niya 👏
emotional 😭 😭

I didn't cried niyu mamma...
Shayad isliye coz u said in PM k emotional OS h phir before story also written that read at ur own risk types...
So I was prepared for the emotional attyachar... 😆
But I wasn't that bad... 🤣
Mujhe toh ulta HANSI ayi kuch scenes me... 😛
Kanika ke scenes me.. I was smiling throughout... 😊
So cute & innocent...
"Papa mamma ne do bar shaadi ki par mujhe nai bulaya" 😲
And jab start me kanika k bade papa Likha tha first I expected it to b viraj but then ramesh uncle nikle and then pata chal hi gya tha k nibir ko mar dala h tune!! I guessed it before reading further 🤣
But I was curious to know kaise hua ye?? Then USNE aisa kyun kiya jab laxmi aunty said .. I was like kon?? Kisne kiya?? Then newspaper read...
"Mom killed his son & DiL"
I was shocked...
Waaat?? Vasu aunty??
And wo last wale dialogue vasu aunty ka full on psycho sound kiya and I was laughing hard on it 🤣
Mein nai royi iss OS me bilkul b 😛

superb naani...

Originally posted by: angelanju

superb naani...

i knw ki maine bahut late comments diye hai..

par itni acchi likhi hai to comments dene hi padenge na?

and all other writers ko bhi ...i will surely read and comment on ur stories..bus thodi busy hu...exams ke baad aaram se sab stories padhungi

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Thanks, All the best for the exams 🤗