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Ramesh was sitting in the verhanda of GH reading a newspaper a smile was playing on his lips as he read the headlines
International choreographer Mr Kabir Kumar dedicated his award to the love of his life
Ramesh was happy that his son-in-law had fulfilled all his dreams actually nt only his bt also nisha's dream to see him as a famous choreographer he kept the newspaper aside n sat thinking about how time flew so fast he had a sad smile on his lips when his dear wife came to him
Laxmi-kya soch rahe ho ramesh
Ramesh-soch raha tha ki waqt kitni jaldi beet gaya...kal hamari nishu ki shaadi hui thi aur aaj nishka ki sagai h
Tears were brimming in his eyes laxmi placed her hand on his shoulder
Laxmi-ramesh sambhalo khud ko
Ramesh-kaise sambhalu ma khud ko laxmi...aaj nishka itne saalo baad london se aa rahi h...meri jagah koi aur nanu hota to kitna khus hota par ek ma hu man ma ek dar h...aaj jab vo phir se apni un aankho se vahi sawal puche gi to ma kya kahuga
Laxmi-ramesh vo hamari nishu ki beti h bohot strong h vo...aur phir daksh bhi to h na uske saath usko sambhal ne keliye
Ramesh-shayaad tum sahi ho
L-chalo ab chalte h vo log aane waale honge
Kabir-aane waale honge nhi maa aa Gaye
Laxmi-kabir nishku
Nishka ran n hugged her nani nanu
Nishka-Nani nanu aap dono ro kyu rahe the
R-kuch nhi bacha...bas aise hi
Kabir-nishku u go n take some rest
Nishka-par papa aapne promise kiya tha
Kabir-pata h beta...aur ma use pura bhi karuga tum jaao aur rest kar lo
Nishka-ohkk papa
N she left
Ramesh-kabir tum...
Kabir-haa papa ab time aa gaya h ma use sab bata dunga
Laxmi-par beta aaj itne bade khushi ke din pe
Kabir-maa agar aaj nhi bataya toh kabhi mauka nhi milega
Ramesh-matlab
Kabir-kuch nhi papa aap ghabraiye mat...ab vo samajdar ho chuki h...khudko sambhal legi
Ramesh-thik h beta jaisi tumhari marzi
Kabir-maa ma fresh hokar aata hu
Laxmi-thik h beta jaao
After some time in RL room
Laxmi was sitting on the bed checking a list when nishka entered the room
Laxmi-nishku tum yaha
Nishka-haa nani vo thodi ma bechaini si ho rahi thi toh socha aapke pass aa jau shayad thoda dhyaan bat jaye
Laxmi-aao na baitho
Ni-nhi naani maa
L-matlab??
Ni-naani maa ma aapki god ma sar rakhke soona cahti hu...so jau???
L-yeh bhi puchne ki baat h aa jaa
Nishka went n kept her head on her lap n laxmi placed her hand on her head rubbing it
Ni-naani ek sawal puchu???
L-pucho na
Ni-papa kehte h ma bilkul maa ki tarah hu sach h kya
L-bilkul sach h...uski aankhe uski muskaan uska pagalpan uski samajdari sab kuch uske jaisa hi h (in mind)kaash uski jitna takat bhi to
Ni-hai naani maa
L-kya beta??
Ni-mujme maa jitni bardash karne ki taaqat h...yahi soch rahi thi na aap
L-tu sach me meri nishu ki chavi h...bilkul uski tarah
Suddenly kabir entered the room with a paper n a packet in his hand nishka got uo seeing him
Ni-papa
K-sahi kaha maa bilkul meri nishu ki chavi h yeh
Ni-papa main maa ki tarah hi jiddi bhi hu
K-jaanta hu...aur aaj tumhe taaluga bhi nhi
Laxmi understood that the father-daughter duo needed sometime together so she left
Kabir handed the paper to nishka n tell her to read it
Nishka opened it n read
Hiiee princess,
Congratulation princess aaj meri princess ki life ka bohot bada din h uski sagai I wish ma waha hoti apni beti ko apne haato se sajane ke liye...tumhe is naye rishte ka matlab samjhane ke liye...tumhare sir pe haat rakh ke tumhe gale lagane ke liye par koi baat nhi ma tumhara hasta hua cehra jarur dekhugi haa tumhe chukar aashirvad nhi de paugi bt tumhe haste dekhkar muskura lungi
Aaj tak tumhari shararaot par tumhare kaan nhi khich payi...tumhare dukh ma tumhare aasu nhi poch payi...tumhare school ke bahar tumhare aane ka wait nhi kar payi...tumhari jeet ma tumhe shabashi nhi de payi...tumahre bimaar hone pe tumhara khayal nhi rakh paayi bohot buri maa hu na ma par aaj ke is khaas din ke liye tumhare liye kuch chodke jaa rahi hu agar pasand aaye to aaj pehen lena...jabrdasti bilkul nhi h ma jaanti hu shayaad tab tak old fashion jo chuka hoga aur aaj ke khaas din pa har ladki perfect lagna cahti ha isliye mujhe bilkul bura nhi lagega
Ma tumhari life ke har pal ko tumhare saath enjoy karna cahti thi par meri kismat ma hi nhi tha to mere cahne se kya hota h bt ma jaanti hu kabir h na usne tumhe acche se sambhala hoga ma bas tumhe yeh batana cahti thi ki I love my princess a lot
Tumhari maa
Nishka had tears in her eyes she knew her mom loved her a lot n even she loved her a lot she couldn't control herself anymore she just hugged the lettrr n started to cry kabir knew what his daughter was feeling he embraced her in his arms n started rubbing her back to calm her down soon nishka stopped crying n broke the hug
Kabir then gave her the packet nishka opened it n found a beautiful lehnga she cherished it with her hands she had a sad smile on her lips
Ni-kitna sunder h na papa
K-yeh tumhari maa ka h usne aapne sangeet pe pehna tha...bohot sunder lag rahi thi vo
Ni-meri maa thi hi bohot sunder
K-haa vo toh h...dunya ki sabse khubsurat khawab jo thi
Ni-papa maa ko kya hua tha
K-tumhari mom 8 months ki pregnant thi ma aur tumhari mom dono bohot khush the aur tumhare aane ka wait kar rahe the
FLASHBACK
K-nishu dheere dheere chal yaar...doctor kahi nhi jaane waali
N-kabir ma dheere hi chal rahi hu aur kitna slow
K-aur slow mere baby ko aaram karne de
N-baap re kabir saamne h yaar office vaha tak normal speed ma chalugi to kuch nhi hoga
K-nhi matlab nhi
N-thik h phir chal kachue jaise...ma ja rahi hu
K-are nishu yaar ruk dekh ek to tu moti ho gayi h ma tujhe utha nhi sakta aur upar se tu jaldi jaldi bhaagna cahti h
N-(crying) kabir ma moti ho gayi na isliye ab tu mujse pyaar nhi karta
K-are are ro kyu rahi h yaar aisa kuch nhi h...ma tujse abhi bhi utna hi pyaar karta hu yaar...accha thik h le kaan pakad ke sorry bas
N-(smiling) shoo cute
Saying this she pulled his cheeks n he side hugged her
K-dekh hum pohoch bhi gaye
N-chal andar chale
Kabir n nisha entered cabin n sat there
N-doc meri reports aa gayi
Dr-haa nisha aa gayi h ek min ma abhi laati hu
N she left
K-nisha ma abhi aaya ek phone karna h n yaha network nhi h
N-thik h
Nisha was waiting for the doc n kabir to arrive they were taking too much time as doctor entered nisha saw her serious face so she asked her about the reports
N-doc kya hua h sab normal h na
Dr-ek buri khabar h nisha
N-kya???
Dr-nisha tumhare pregnancy ma kuch complications h jiski vajag se agar tum is baby ko janam deti ho to shayaad tumhare pass jyada time naa ho...aur shayaad tum phir se conceiv nhi kar paogi
N-doc yeh aap Kya bol rahe ho
Dr-nisha dekho khudko sambhalo
N-doc agar ma is baby ko janam deti hu toh mere pass kitna time hoga
Dr-may be 1 month yaa max to max 1 year
N-doc aapse ek request h...yeh baat aap kabir ko mat batana plz
Dr-bt nisha ma ya nhi kar sakti
N-doc plz ma is bacche ko is duniya ma laana cahti hu plz
Dr-bt nisha...
N-doc plz...mere pass jitna waqt hoga ma usme hi apni life ji lungi plz doc kabir ko mat batana
Dr-nisha I can't do this
N-doc baby ke aane ke baad ma khud use bata dungi bt abhi nhi plz doc
Dr-thik h
After sometime kabir entered the cabin n asked about the reports n nisha said that they were normal n everything was fine
PRESENT
k-bohot badi k thi vo ...mujse jhut bolti gayi bolti...tum 6 mahine ki ho chuki thi aur nisha ki haalat din par din bigadti jaa rahi thi bt usne mujhe kuch nhi bataya ek din kaam karte karte vo acchana behosh ho gayi ma bohot Dar gaya tha kyuki mujhe pehle se shak tha ki nisha thik nhi h jab ma use hospital le gaya tab mujhe pata chala...par tab tak bohot der ho chuki thi doctors ne javab de diya tha ki nisha ke pass sirf kuch ghante h
FLASHBACK
Kabir entered the hospital room n found nisha lying on the bed trying not to face him
K-(teary eyes)nisha kyu kiya aisa tune???
N-ka..ka kya hua kabir
K-nisha tu sab jaanti thi na phir bhi
N-kabir samjne ki koshish kar
K-(crying vigorously) kya samjhu ma nisha yahi ki mere pass sirf kuch ghante bache h apni jindagi jeene ke liye
N-kabir kuch log pyaar karne ke liye hi bane hote h par jaruri toh nhi na ki vo jindagi bhar unke saath rahe haa
K-jaruri h mere liye jaruri h...tere bina rehne ke baare ma soch bhi sakta ma nisha...kaise jeeuga
N-kabir tujhe jeena hoga mere liye aur princess ke liye...aur vada kar tu meri princess ko hamesha khush rakega
K-nisha kyu kar rahi ha tu aisa kyu meri jindagi mujse cheen rahi h
N-kabir tu cahta h ki ma rote hue sabko byee bolu nhi na...phir kyu rula raha h mujhe k kahika
K-thik h ma k hu duffer hu ghada hu pagal hu jo bolna h bol par mat jaa plz nisha mat jaa
N-kabir tu jaanta h na ma kuch nhi kar sakti kyu mere dard ko aur bada raha h ...accha chal yeh sab chod aur meri baat sun mana hamare kamre ke drawer ma kuch letters or gifts rakhe h meri princess ke liye use uske bday ke liye uski shaadi ke liye uske school function ke liye use de dena ohkk??
K-nhi nhi duga ma tu khud de dena
N-kabir meri itni si baat bhi nhi maanega tu
K-nhi ma nhi maanuga
N-ma jaanti hu tu maanega...mujhe apni princess ki koi fikar nhi h ma jaantu hu tu use maa aur papa dono ka pyaar dega
K-tu itni acchi kyu h nisha
N-kyu tu mera hubby h
Kabir kept quiet as he didn't knew what to do time was slipping from his hand
N-Sabka khayaal rakhna aur ek bohot bada choreographer banke dekhana ma tera sapna pura hote hue dekhna cahti hu samjha??
Kabir hugged nisha tightly
K-I love you nisha mat jaa plz
N-I love u too kabir...accha meri ek aakhri wish puri karega
K-kya?
N-yaha aa
Kabir did as she said nisha cupped his face with both her hands and kissed him passionately kabir too reciprocated the kiya with the same passion hot tears were flowing through their eyes
Nisha knew it was her last time now she had to leave even though some of her wishes were yet not fulfilled bt she was sure they will be together again n that time she will fulfil all her wishes as no one will be able to separate them then
She broke the kiss n hugged him tight there she took her last breath in his arms she had a smile on her face even at the last moment of her life her soul left the body saying the words "I will wait for you"
PRESENT
K-tumhe pata h vo hamesha kehti thi ki tum love marriage hi karogi kyuki tum pyaar se bani ho...mere aur uske pyaar se...dekho kitni sahi thi vo
Nisha hugged kabir
K-tum hamesha puchti thi na mujhe baarish kyu pasand h...kyuki baarish ma bhi paani ki bonde baadal ka hisasa hi hoti h par vo unse alag ho jaanti h...jab unhe dekhta hu na tab lagta h ki ma akela nhi hu jo khudse alag hua hu
Ni-(crying badly) papa I love her
K-she loves us too beta...chalo ab tumhari sagai ka waqt hone wala h jaldi taiyaar ho jao
Nishka did as kabir said she wore nisha's lehenga daksh was mesmerized by her beauty while ramesh n laxmi felt as if their nishu was standing there the engagement took place properly it was a simple engagement as nishka didn't wanted any kind of taam jhaam
Aftre the engagement nishka went towards nisha's photo to take her mom's blessings as she closed her eyes she felt cold wind kissing her forehead
Here kabir went to talk to Daksh
K-daksh
D-ji papa
K-daksh aaj ma apni beti ki responsibility tumhe de raha hu hamesha uska dhyaan rakhna
D-I promise papa usse hamesha khush rakhuga
K-I trust u
Saying this he left nishka asked about him after returning bt no one knew where kabir was except one n that was nishka
Nishka told daksh that she was going to KN house n left as she reached there she saw her dad sleeping peacefully with a photo in his hand n a smile on his face
Nishka went to him took the photo from his hands it was their only family photo which was taken when nishka was born she hugged the photo n cried closing his eyes
Nishka-maa apna intazaar pura hua...I love you both
She felt a hand on her forehead n a whisper "we love u too our princess"
It started raining again n somewhere in the heaven to souls were meeting aftre a long time n this time no one could separate them
Doctors couldn't find out what happened to kabir only nishka was the one who was aware of it
FEW YEARS LATER
Nishka was standing on the terrace of her house when daksh came n back hugged her
D-kya hua nishku mom dad ko miss kar rahi ho
N-haa...tumhe pata h aaj bhi jab koi thanda hava ka jhoka mujhe chukar jaata h na mujy usme unke hone ka ehsaas hota h
D-bohot miss kar rahi ho
N-haa...par koi baat nhi vo log vapas jarur aayege aakhir ek aur love story jo likhni h aur issue baar puri jindagi saath rehne ke liye
Time passed like flowing river years changed n here two persons were fighting with each other
Girl-duffer kahika
Boy-tu hogi duffer akkal toh h nhi mujse behes kar rahi h
Girl-ma duffer hu khudki shakal dekh aaine ma
Boy-roz dekhta hu bohot acchi
N here started a new love story

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome vaishu... got teary eyed... loved it
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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Superb OS vaissy😊

nishka ki engagement😊

kabir ne nishka ko nisha ka sacrifice btaya😔

nishka in nisha's sangeet wala lehenga❤️

tune bhut rulaya yr😔 😭

Nishka told daksh that she was going
to KN house n left as she reached
there she saw her dad sleeping
peacefully with a photo in his hand
n a smile on his face
Nishka went to him took the photo
from his hands it was their only
family photo which was taken when
nishka was born she hugged the
photo n cried closing his eyes
Nishka-maa apna intazaar pura
hua...I love you both
She felt a hand on her forehead n a
whisper "we love u too our princess"
It started raining again n
somewhere in the heaven to souls
were meeting aftre a long time n
this time no one could separate
them
Doctors couldn't find out what
happened to kabir only nishka was
the one who was aware of it


@bold it was so touching❤️

Time passed like flowing river
years changed n here two persons
were fighting with each other
Girl-duffer kahika
Boy-tu hogi duffer akkal toh h nhi
mujse behes kar rahi h
Girl-ma duffer hu khudki shakal dekh
aaine ma
Boy-roz dekhta hu bohot acchi
N here started a new love story


@pink finally a happy ending😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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unres above😉
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Vaishsi... Rula dia yaar...🤔

BEAUTIFUL👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Rem Kuch Kuch Hotha hai in b/w😊


U wrote Journey of Souls perfectly 👍🏼& Title as usual PERFECT👏👏👏👏👏

NiBir - Made 4 Eachother Proved once again...!!!!!❤️

Rain ka connection with Kabira I loved it👏

Nishka-Daksh😳

Superb... Superb.. Superb...!!!!!!!!!👍🏼

Thanks4 PM😳
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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😭 😭 😭 😭
No words to say anything 😭 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res😭
unres
sabse pahle bda wala sorry late k liye.😉
superb os
very emotional
heart touching
perfectly written 👏 👏 👏
amazing 👏
Edited by naina.majik - 9 years ago
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Have no words to say ...
Rula diya yaar 😭😭😭
Just this, it was truely awesome 👏
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

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awesome vaishu... got teary eyed... loved it

thank you so much mansi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

😭

No words to say anything 😭

itna hi kaafi h mere liye niyu...thank you

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