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Originally posted by: mishrialways

Lovely update vaishu

kabir expected a slap and got thanks as reply wow

nisha told about her story to kabir loved the trust they have on each other

raghav and vivansha convo was also nice

dono ladkiyan ko official proposals chaiye the aww

thanks for the pm

sorry for the late comment

ritika

thankx ritika
no need to be sorry I also give late comments sometimes

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Maasi🤗

Such a Longgg Update...😲😆🤣

Lovely Update...👏👏👏 Title was apt👏👏👏

NiBir Nok-Jhoks...🤣🤣🤣 Kabira bechara Tappad seh lega Nishu ke liyee..😳

Kabir searching 4 words to call her...🤣🤣🤣

Kabira kitni caring hai..😳 hayeee

Flashback scenes were soo cute😛 U wrote the Sisters' bond so welll👏👏👏
& Felt bad 4 Nishu's dida..🤔

Crying Nishu... Manofying Kabir.. Aww...🤗

NiBir Hugss...

Finally NiBir wl go 4 Party🥳

Saahil😡

Raghav & Vivansha too go 4 Party😆

Thanks 4 PM😳 Sorry 4 late comments😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

thank you bhanju 🤗
sisters wala part was the most difficult bcoz I don't have any real sister or brother toh I didn't knew ki sabko kaisa lagega
love your chotu comment ❤️

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

thank you bhanju 🤗
sisters wala part was the most difficult bcoz I don't have any real sister or brother toh I didn't knew ki sabko kaisa lagega
love your chotu comment ❤️

@BOLD 😲 Shackked U wrote so well dat no one wl believe this👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

@BOLD 😲 Shackked U wrote so well dat no one wl believe this👏

awww thank you bhanju 🤗

beautiful update dear
the flashback was too emotional
loved it

Originally posted by: nibirfever

beautiful update dear
the flashback was too emotional
loved it

ty aanchu 😊

Kamino finally I m updating mujhe pata h bohot late ho gaya isliye so sorry isliye compensation ke liye long wali update de rahi hu hope u guyz like it

Chapter 7-the effect on u

All the four reached their rooms and were too tired to ask about their day so they just wished each other good night and went to sleep
NEXT DAY
The beautiful sunrays entered the room to disturb her beautiful sleep she woke up stretching her hand and yawning as soon as she opened her eyes she smiled as she saw one of the best view soon this smiled turned into shock n she shouted
N-kabir tu kahan se aaya???
K-ye toh tujhe pata hona chahiye
N-mujhe kaise pata hoga
K-are tu hi toh cahti hai na ki tere har subah mere good morning se ho
N-mana kab kaha aisa?
K-kaha nahi par tu toh yahi cahti h na
N-aisa kuch nhi h ...aur tu nikal yaha se
She said pointing towards the door
K-par ma Kaise jau
N-kaise matlab jaise aaya vaise jaa
K-jab tu na chahe ma nahi jaa sakta
N-tu aisa nahi jayega
She was about to hit him when he disappeared
N-yeh kaha gaya...ma khuli aankho se sapna dekh rahi thi?...nishu kya hogaya h tujhe
K-tujhe nahi pata tujhe kya hua h??
N-tu yaha tha na
K-vaise subah ke sapne sach hote h...shayad kabhi yeh sapna bhi sach ho jaye
N-kuch bhi aisa kuch nhi hoga...vaise bhi tu yaha nhi h mujhe pata h...pata nahi kya ho gaya h mujhe
K-tujhe h na...
N-mujhe kya
K-tujhe mujhse...
N-mujhe tujhse
K-tujhe mujhse py...
N-bas kuch nhi hua h ma thik hu
She closed her eyes with a hope that he will disappear and the same happened
N-nishu tu pagal ho gayi h...jaldi se jaakar ready ho jaati hu...phir viyu ko bhi utha dugi
She went to get ready n here vivansha was in deep sleep when her phone rang.it was an unknown no she picked up the call
V-(in sleepy voice)hello
Other side-r u yet sleeping
V-raat ko log sote hi h...tum konse ullu h jo jag rahe ho
Other side-kya???
V-kon bol raha h??
Other side-raghav kumar
V-oh ragh...(she woke up shouting) RAGHAV
R-oh god subah subah kaan ke parde phadogi kya??
V-tumhe mera no kaha se mila
R-m the gs of clg...if u remember
V-yeh toh cheating h na...tum gs ho toh aisa thodi karte h
R-oh hello mujhe bhi shauk nhi h tumhe call karne ka...bas rehearsals ke bare ma baat karni thi
V-toh time to dekh lete
R-madam time aapko dekhna cahiye
V-ma kyu dekhu sirf...
R-sirf
V-baap re itna late ho gaya
R-thank god pata to chala
V-tum itni der se bak-bak kar rahe ho pehle nhi bata sakte the...itna time waste kyu kiya??
R-wow...ma yaha rehearsal hall ma aaya...mana wait kiya aur tumhara time waste hua??
V-ha...vo...vo sorry mana bas bol diya
R-it's ok...mujhe pata h tumhe ladne ki aadat h
V-haaww mujhe koi aadat nhi ladne ki
R-yaa I know
V-u r so bad
R-ty...vaise aur time waste karne ki jagah mudde pe aaye
V-haa bolo
R-toh aaj toh tum late uthi ho so ab ready hokar aane tak late ho jayega...so clg ma milke kal ke liye time decide karte h
V-cool
R-ohkk so see you in clg
V-yaa sure
R-byee
V-byee
R-meet u soon
V-yaa
R-byee
V-byee
They finally cut the call
R-kya raghav phone kyu nahi kaat raha tha...duffer
V-itni jaldi phone kyu kaata yaar...kya viyu tu bhi kuch bhi sochti h
Soon nisha came out n saw vivansha awake
N-tu uth gayi vo bhi aapne aap??
V-haa nishu vo nind khul gayi
N- yeh to miracle h yaar
V-haha very funny...vaise tu ab thik h kal teri tabiyat kharab thi na
Nisha got lost in yesterday's memories n started smiling
V-nishu tu thik h na
N-isse acchi kabhi nhi thi
V-matlab??
N-vo...vo...matlab...matlab ma bilkul thik hu
V-u sure na nishu...aisa lag raha h tere dimaag pe asar hua ho
N-ma bilkul thik hu viyu...tu jaakar ready ho jaa
V-ohkk ma abhi aayi
N-(monologue) thank you kabir ek khubsurat se din ke liye
AFTER SOMETIME
Vivansha and nisha entered the class which was full by now only two seats were empty one besides raghav and other one was kabir's seat n amaira was sitting besides it
V-nishu tu amaira ke saath baith jaa ma raghav ke saath baith jaati hu
N-par viyu tujhe toh vo pasand nhi na phir kyu pareshan ho rahi h
V-koi pareshani nhi h tu baith na ma sambhal lungi
N-magar
V-magar gaya paani me tu tension mat le
N-accha thik h tu baith jaa
V-(with a huge smile)ohkk
She went and sat besides raghav both smiled looking at each other n watching this nisha was having a confused look on her face she thought to ask vivansha later n went to sit
Amaira-excuse me...yaha kabir baithega
N-sorry I don't excuse such request or person
A-what
N-us din abhi aur krish ko lagaya tha aaj tumhe cahiye??
A-tumne aisa kaha bhi kaise
N-muh se
A-you...
N-hey...mind your language varna bhari padega
A-mujhpe bhari padega...do u know who I m
N-yahi problm h tum logo ki apni yaddasht ghar chhod aate ho
A-oh hello miss intelligence...
N-thank you so much miss duffer...n it's intelligent not intelligence
A-whatever...u be careful n b in your limits
N-abhi tak toh limit cross bhi nahi ki...agar kar di toh socho kya hoga
A-listen...
V-amaira itna insult kaafi nhi h kya??
A-I vl c u both
N,V-we know we r pretty
She sat on the bench prof came and started teaching n kabir was as always late
K-may I come in sir??
P(professor)-nhi Mr Kumar aap waha bohot accha lag rahe h... be there only
K-par sir...
P-shut up...u r late u can't attain this lecture
K-bt sir ma toh lecture ke liye aaya hi nahi...ma toh nisha ko lene aaya hu
N-mujhe kyu??
K-vo...vo rehearsals h na isliye
N-(low voice) mujhe toh bataya hi nhi
K-nisha kya soch rahi h chal na...gaya mam ke orders h yaar
N-haa...sir may I leave
P-yes u can go
N-thank you sir
She took her belongings n left
R-yeh kabhi nhi sudherga
V-kyu kya hua??
R-koi rehearsal nhi h...hall pehle se hi booked h
V-phir isne
R-time pass
V-really???
R-yes
V-wow so exciting n fun na
R-fun???
V-yaa even I vl try it once
R-ohkk...bt warn me first taaki ma lecture ma aau hi nhi
V-unbelievable
All this was heard by amaira as she on the bench besides virav's bench
A-(monologue) I vl have to save kabir
A-sir mujhe chakkar aa rahe h...ma .medical room chali jau??
P-ohkk u can go
A-thank you sir
IN CORRIDOR
N-kabir yeh rehearsals ke baare ma kab decide hua??
K-kabhi nhi
N-kabhi nhi matlab??
K-matlab koi rehearsal nhi h ma tujhe bhaga ke le jaa raha hu
N-kya???
K-dar mat cls se bhaga raha hu...shaadi karne ke liye nhi
N-kabir tu pagal h kya???
K-bachpan se
N-agar sir ko pata chal gaya toh
K-toh princi ke office
N-(horrified) kyaa?
K-abey oa princi h bhoot nhi
N-kabir tu pagal h ma nhi ma cls ma jaa rahi hu
K-oaa pagal h kya marvayegi
N-marugi toh ma agar sir ne pakad liya toh
K-kuch nhi hoga
N-kaise nhi hoga kabir...agar princi ke office jaana pada toh...ma toh gayi...acchi khaasi band baj jayegi...aur phir...
Before she could speak anything further kabir kept her finger on her lips...and told in a husky voice "do you trust me"...nisha closed her eyes at his touch n nodded her head in yes while kabir was lost on her beauty she looked like a dream for him kabir removed his finger n put a strand of her hair behind her ears nisha slowly opened her eyes and they got locked with his hazel brown orbs those eyes never failed to hypnotize her she always melted in intensity of those eyes kabir was even in same condition he didn't knew y he cant take his eyes off her always he saw her the time stopped for him n he just reached in his own world
N-(monologue) kabir ma jab bhi teri aankho ma dekhti hu toh apna bas kyu kho deti hu...chahkar bhi apne aapko ko tujhme khone se rok nhi paati hu...kyu teri aankhe mujhe pe jadu kar deti h
K-(monologue) kyu aisa hota h mere saath...jab bhi tu mere pass hoti h ma bohot khush hota hu aur jab tu nhi hoti toh tujhe yaad karta rehta hu...kya ho raha h mere saath...kyu ho raha h aisa
All the people there were watching them with wide eyes open bt these two were unaware of all their surrounding they just knew one thing and that was they wanted to be like this lost in the most beautiful feeling of their life their trance was broken by a harsh voice
A-kabir...kabir
K-oh god yeh kaha se aa gayi
A-kabir ma tumhe bachane aayi hu
K-(in low voice) bachane ke liye yaa pakane ke liye
A-tumne kuch kaha
K-nhi toh tum mujhe kisase bachane aayi ho
A-is nisha se
K-nisha se kyu??
A-kabir tumhe nhi pata yeh kitni dangerous h
K-vaise tum toh cls ma thi na yaha kaisee aae
A-kabir tumhare liye to ma 7 seas paar karke bhi aa sakti hu yeh to sirf cls h
K-(in low voice) yeh 7 seas paar karke aayegi aur ma 7 seas paar bhagke jauga isase bachne ka liye
Nisha giggled
A-tumne phir se kuch kaha??
K-nhi kuch nhi
A-kabir mujhe baby bulao na tumhare muh se bohot accha lagega
Nisha eyes got wide open anger evident on her face
N-oh amaira tum 5 saal ki bacchi ho jo tumhe baby bulaya jaye
A-tum nhi samjogi
N-sahi kaha ma 5 saal ki pagal bacchi ki baat nhi samjugi
A-tum...
N-tum chup karo kabir tumhe baby nhi bulayega
Kabir was enjoying nisha's jealousy
A-kyu nhi bulayega
N-kyuki...kyuki...ha tum baby nahi ho isliye
A-oh shut up miss gawar
K-enough amaira...what's this gawar
A-kabir mujhe pata h tum bohot acche ho bt aise log...
K-cut the crap amaira...she is better then u
A-kabir tum hi dekho na iske kapde aisi hi kuch dresses mana charity ma di thi
K-I m sure ye unmese nhi h varna bichari bina disinfect kiye kaise pehenti
A-what do u mean??
N-yaar jab bhawaan ji akal baat rahe the toh tum kya kar rahi thi
K-chane bech rahi hogi vo bhi pizza samaj ke akal jo nhi thi...sorry sorry akal jo nhi h
N-(laughing) sahi kaha
A-tum log mera mazak uda rahe ho???
N-jab samajh aa jaye toh bata Dena hume late ho raha h byee
They left
N-kabir hum kaha jaa rahe h
K-pata nhi
N-matlab tune kuch socha bhi nhi h
K-socha h na ek hot ladki ek jawan ladka dono saath ho toh kuch na kuch apne aap hi ho jayega
N-tu kitna k ha
K-aur tu mere k se kitni j h
N-ma koi...
She stopped in the middle
K-kya hua ruk gayi
N-ka...ka...kabir
K-kya hua bolegi
She turned to the other side
N-gaya mam
Kabir too turned to the other side
K-mar gaye
N-mana bola tha na
K-oaa ab yeh sab band kar aur bhaag yaha se
N-par kaha
K- dekhte h abhi chal to
He caught her hand and both started running while running they saw an empty cls room n ran inside it to hide themselves
N-kaha phasa diya mujhe
K-is class room ma
N-kabir
K-accha baba sorry
N-tera sorry bhad me jaye
Suddenly they heard some footsteps coming towards them n hid beneath the beanch
Gaya-oh my my yeh cls kyu khula h...suno is cls ko band kar do yaha ki saaf safai ho chuki h
Peon-ji madam ji
As Said the peon locked the doorn left
N-kabir isne toh lock kar diya
K-ab kya kare
N-yeh sab teri vajah se hua h
K-haa toh mana sorry bola na
N-sorry mera man kar raha h tera gala daba du
K-oaa dur reh mujhe itni jaldi marne ka koi shook nhi h abhi tak toh tujhe pataya bhi nhi h
N-tu nhi sudherga
K-chance hi nhi h
N-tujse baat karna hi bekaar h...ma viyu ko call karti hu
She called vivansha two to three times bt no one picked
K-ho gaya tera...vo cls ma honge kaisi uthayegi
N-toh ab
K-ab kya cls ka time khatam hone tak ruk
N-oh god
K-vaise yaha kitni garmi h na
N-hogi hi ma Itni hot jo hu
K-vaah mera dialogue mujhe hi maar diya
N-sangat ka asar
K-not bad haa
N-ty...ty
K-vaise pata h mujhe vo gana yaad aa gaya...hum tum ek kamre me band ho aur chaabi kho jae
N-mujhe bhi ek gaana yaad aa raha h
K-accha gaa na
N-ma tujko nhi chodugi
K-dekh shaant reh na yaar...mujhe bhuka maregi kya
N-bhuk lagi h???
K-bohot jor ki
N-ruk
She took her bag and took out the tiffin box
K-tu taffin laati h
N-haa toh
K-kuch nhi...bata toh kya h...mujhe bohot bhuk lagi h
N-bread butter jam
K-BREAD BUTTER JAM!!!
N-haa par tu itna chilla kyu raha h
K-kyuki yeh mera favorite h
He snatched the Tiffin from her hand and started eating it
N-oaa mujhe bhi bhuk lagi h
K-sorry sorry
He took one bread and forwarded his hand when nisha was about to take it kabir pulled his hand back
N-(confused) yeh kya kar raha h
K-khaana h toh mere haath se hi khaa le
N-kya...kyu ma khud bhi kha sakti hu
K-par ma cahta hu tu mere haat se khaye
N-are...
K-bhuk lagi h ya nhi
N-argh...ma dekh lungi tujhe
K-abhi bhi dekh sakti h...ab khaana h ya ma kha lu??
N-nhi mujhe bhi khaana h
K-mere haat se???
N-thik h
Kabir smiled at her and fed her he then told her to fed him first she refused bt kabir made cute baby face so she had to agree
K-pata h tere haat se yeh bread butter jam aur tasty ho gaya
Nisha just smiled n blushed a bit
N-(monologue)mera bhi
K-are waah...tere cehre pe ye pink blush bohot accha lagta h
Nisha blushed even more n turned to other side to hide her face
N-tu...tu kya...kya bakwaas kar raha h...ma kaha blush kar rahi hu
K-really?
N-haa
Kabir turned her to his side n started walking towards her while nisha walked backwards
K-tu blush nhi kar rahi thi? ?
N-na...nahi
Soon she was pinned to the wall
K-toh tujpe mera koi asar nhi hota h
N-nahi
He started coming close to her nisha could not control her senses her hands denied to push him away she just stood there clutching her dress tightly n looking in his eyes kabir moved even more close he was just few inches away from her she could feel his hot breath on her face it was fascinating the intensity in his eyes was soo deep that nisha couldn't stop herself from drowning into it he didn't even blinked for a second n just kept looking into her eyes nisha was unable to stop the small smile on her lips n the pink hues on her cheeks kabir saw the effect he had on her he smiled a bit n whispered in her ears
K-tujhe jhut bolna nhi aata
Nisha closed her eyes as she felt his breath on her ears she couldn't say anything now she was just lost in the moment he moved back n stood there smiling looking at a lost angel nisha opened her eyes n saw him standing away from her she looked everywhere bt not at him she felt awkward n cursed herself to lose all the controls there was complete silence in the room suddenly nisha's phone started ringing she took her phone it was vivansha
V-hello nishu tune call kiya tha na kuch kaaam h
N-haa...haa vo vo ma actually
V-nishu kya hua h tu thik h na
N-haa ma thik hu...ma bas yaha band ho gayi hu
V-band kaha
N-vo...vo ek classroom me
V-konsa cls room
N-vo pata nhi
V-pata nhi...tu band kaise hui
K-mujhe phone de mujhe pata h hum kaha h
N-viyu ek min
She handed her phone to him
K-hello ma kabir
V-tum dono saath ma band ho kya??
K-haa...tumhare aas pass bhai h ma use bata deta hu hum kaha h tumhe samaj nhi aayega
V-haa ek min ma phone speaker pe daalti hu
R-bol kabir
K-bhai left corridor ma room no 25B h na jo hamesha band rehta h hum vaha h
R-tu vaha kaise band ho gaya
K-bhai vo ma baadme batauga abhi tu hame yaha se nikal
R-accha thik h ruk hum abhi aate h
K-ohkk
They cut the call
N-kya kaha
K-vo log aa rahe h
N-ohk
K-vaise...
N-kya hua??
K-chi...chi
N-kya chi chi laga rakha h
K-chipkali!!!
Kabir started running here and there shouting chipkali while nisha was laughing like a mad n kabir climbed on a beanch
N-kabir tu chipkali se darta h
K-haa toh tu bhi kisi se darti hogi na
N-haa par yeh ek choti si chipkali h
K-choti h par kitni darawani h
N-darawani...ruk
nisha stamped her feet on ground due to which the lizard went away
N- niche aa jaa gyi vo
K-pakka???
N-haa baba
Kabir came down n signed in relief
K-haash gayi
N-kabir tu bhi na baccha h bilkul
K-ma ise compliment samjhuga
IN CORRIDOR
V-raghav inhe bahar kaise nikale yaha toh taala laga h
R-iski Dhabi toh gaya mam ke pass hogi
V-oh god ab kya kare
R-hume kuch bhi karke gaya mam se chaabi Lanier hogi
V-haa par kaise
R-sochte h
V-hmmm
Both were thinking of an idea when raghav saw at vivansha she was walking here n there thinking n tensed bt she looked too cute like this she was thinking of n Idea while was looking at her lost soon vivansha stopped walking and smiled widely raghav noticed the change in her expressions n smiled a bit looking her happy bt as soon as vivansha looked at him he hid his smile
V-mujhe mil gaya
R-kya mil gaya
V-idea
R-kya h jaldi bolo
She explained the whole idea to raghav with a mischievous smile on her face while raghav was having a horrified face
R-no I can't do this
V-you will have to...koi aur option nhi h
R-par...
V-raghav or koi idea h to batao varna rahi karna padega
R-kya kaha tumne
V-or koi idea h to batao varna yahi karna padega
R-no you took my name
V-ab...vo toh bas aise hi..filhaal plan pe focus karte h
R-ohkk
V-ready
R-agar ma naa kahu to
V-vo option nhi h
R-thik h chalo
They went to gaya's cabin n to their good luck she was not there
R-are waah ma bach gaya...chalo jaldi chaabi le aate h
V-tum yahi ruko mam aa gayi to unko rok lena ma chabi le aati hu
R-ohkk
Vivansha went inside n started searching for the keys while raghav waited outside n to his bad luck gaya was coming there
R-mar gaya
G-are raghav tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
R-mam vo ma aap hi ka wait kar raha tha
G-hamara wait kyu??
R-vo kya h na mam mujhe aapse kuch important baat karni thi
G-haa bolo na raghav
R-vo...vo mam
G-kya hua darling is everything alright
R-yes mam vo kya h na aapke jaisi khubsurat ladki ko dekh kar muh se aawaz hi nhi nikalti
G-(blushing)oh my my yeh tum kya yeh rahe ho
R-sach keh raha hu mam
G-oh darling tum bhi bohot handsome ho
R-mam aapke muh se compliment sunana it's amazing mam
G-oh raghav u deserve such compliments
R-thankyou so much mam
G-yeh kya mam mam laga raha h call me gaya
R-ohkk mam
G-phir se mam
R-sorry I mean gaya
Vivansha who was trying to control her laughter was finding it difficult now so she soon found the key n ran out of the cabin when gaya was busy with raghav she reached a safe distance n msged raghav
"Bas karo varna kal hi tumse shaadi kar legi"
Raghav read the msg n smiled a bit
G-kya hua darling kiska msg h
R-wo kabir ka msg h mam...use kuch kaam tha...may I leave
G-yaa sure darling...c u soon
He literally ran from there n met vivansha who was yet laughing
R-haso haso aur jor se haso ab se us gaya ke lectures ma baituga hi nhi
V-vaise bhi aaj ke baad toh vo tumhara attendance aise hi laga degi
R-tum bhi na
V-accha yeh sab chodo ab hum chalte h
R-ohkk
They reached classroom n opened the door n nibir came out
N-thank god tum log aa gaye...kabse band the yaar
K-vaise tum log gaya mam se chaabi kaise laye
V-gaya mam h hi itni beautiful ki unhe dekhkar muh se aawaz hi nhi nikalti
Rahgav glared at her angrily while nibir were confused n viva was laughing


P.S.-thank you k's pms send karne ke liye mana exams ki vajah se abhi tak updates pade nhi h bt ma jaldi hi padke comment karungi plz wait till then 😃

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Awesome update. Nishu ko to khuli aankh se Kabiraa k sapne aa rahe hai...not bad 😉 N the entire college scene... including the classroom scene+NIBIR locked in a room+ Gaya & Raghav scene...I just luved it. Nishu to apne app ko cntrl hi nahi kar paa rahi hai 😆
Waiting for the nxt update!! Update soon. N thank u so much for the pm 😊

Aww dat was a cute n funny update

Kitna cute update tha😳
NiBir class mein locked😳
Thanks fr such a grand comeback AajiMaushi🤗