Ekk Deewana Tha|| IMP NOTE on PAGE 70 & 72 - Page 17

Originally posted by: sam_premc

matlab day after tomorrow bhi ho sakta hain...!!😆😆😆

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Originally posted by: Niya_789

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Originally posted by: sam_premc

kya hua mumzz...!!??😆😆😆

You are doing cheating

Nisha and Sukku just reached gangwal house...they entered the house and walked towards the cousins room...they saw the cousins smiling on seeing nisha...nisha couldn't understand their expression...

Nisha: kya hua aap sab log aise kyun baithe ho...?? Aur mujhe aise kyun ghoor rahe ho...?? Mere shakkal pe kuch lagaa hua hain ya phir main aaj joker dikh rahi hun...??

They all were silent

Nisha: areeyy kya hua...??? Kuch to bolo...??? Muh mein chewing gum hain kya..??

Dolly: areeyyy nishu...!! Kaisa tha tera shopping..??? kuch khareeda...???

Nisha: nahee yaar...!!!maine kuch nahi khareeda...!! Waise ekk baat puchu..??

Saurav: haan puch na...waise humaare na kehne se rukegi thodi na...!!

Nisha: chupp karr sauro...waise mujhe ye puchna tha ki ye tum sab ke chehroo pe 10000 volt ka tubelight kyun jal raha hain..???

All of them were trying to hide their faces...!!

Umesh: nishu...tu kis tubelight ki baat kar rahi hain...kahaan jal raha hain tubelight...zaroor sauro ke chehre pe hoga ...hain na..???

Saurav: aaaeee...main kyun...???tere chehre pe hi jal raha hoga umesh...tune kahi mirror to nahi dekhliyaa...!!

Dolly: aap dono ladna bandh karooo...aaj to nisha ke chehree pe hi tubelight jal raha hain...kya baat hain nishaa...???

Sukku: wo to jalegaa hi...uss karan ki band jo bajjaake aayi hain...!!

Umesh:haan nisha aisa kya hua...??? Tu dolly aur saurav ko bataa...main aur sukku bas abhi aate hain..!!

Kabir...!!!' Shouted viraj

As kabir fell on the ground holding his head...viraj went running towards him...he was moving kabir continuously...but he wasn't replying ...he called out his servant.

Vasundhara and Stephen(servant) came running out of the house...

Vasundhara: kabir...kabir...utho...viraj, kya hua hain kabir ko...???? Why isn't he replying...???

She started shaking kabir...viraj was angry on her...

Viraj: Stephen...fast... go and call the ambulance please...he needs to be rushed to the hospital immediately...!!!

Stephen followed viraj's orders...soon, an ambulance arrived there...they made kabir lie in the ambulance...and viraj sat along with him...

Vasundhara: hum bhi aa rahe hain aapke saath...!!

Viraj: uski koyi zaroorat nahi hain...main akela sab kuch manage kar lunga..!!

Vasundhara:manage karne ki baat nahi hain...kabir mera beta hain...mujhe uske saath hona chahiyee abhi...!!

Viraj:ohhh...wow...maa ka pyaar...!!just cut it off now...!! Enough of your drama..!!aapne jo pehle kabir keliye kiya hain na wahi bht hain...abhi aapko kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hain...naahi kabir ko aur naahi mujhe aapki zaroorat hain...!!

Vasundhara: viraj...kabir ki jaan khatre mein hain...please mujhe aane doo...!!

Viraj:no ways ...mrs.kumar...I can't believe you...!!agar aapne phirse use kuch karne ki koshish ki to...???jaise pehle kiya tha...???uska accident..??? remember...???aap apna badla poora karne keliye kuch bhi kar sakte ho naa...yahaa tak ki apne hi bte ka accident bhi...aur jab wo theek honee lage to use memory loss hone ki medicines dena...!!

Vj was shocked to hear that viraj knows her secret...

Vasundhara: yy...yee tumhe kaisee pataa chalaa...??? Ki mainee usk...aa acc...ident...??

Viraj: ohh..let it be ...I always knew that you would never change...!!aur aaj agar mere bhai ko kuch bhi hua na...to main aapko kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga...no...actually ...aap maafi e laayak ho hi nahi...maaf karna to bht door ki baat hain...!!aap to ye socho ki aapka sachch pataa chalne par kabir kaise react karega..!!

Vasundhara: viraj...!!

Viraj was disgusted by vasundhara now...he now without wasting anymore time...sat in the ambulance and left for the hospital...while vasundhara was standing there...she was ashamed of herself..!!

Vj( monologue):maine khud ka badla poora karne keliye...apnee hi beto ke saath itna galat kiya...i should be ashamed of myself...kaash maine wo accident nahi karwaya hota...to aaj mere dono bte khush hote...main itni selfish ho gayi thi...!!

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***FLASHBACK***

3 years back (the day when kabir went missing)

Cousins, saurav, and nibir were just back to their hotel...they all were sitting in the lobby...while someone was watching them from a distance.

Kabir: areyy...aaj to mazaa aagaya...mujhe lagta hain ki hum logon ko aise trips par aate rehna chahiye...mazaa aayega...hain na nisha...!!

Nisha: haan...tujhe to mazaa aaya hi hoga...tujhe waha teri friend divya jo mili thi...uske saath mein ghumne mein to tujhe badaa mazaa aaya hoga naa...badaa chipak chipak ke gfhum rahe the tum dono..!!Rozy falls ke paas to badaa mazaa aaya than na tujhe aur ussee..!!

Sukku: (in saurav's ear): to aaj bht pitne waala hain ye nishu se...!!

Umesh: (in kabir's ear): mere bhai...kabir...maine tujhe pehle hi kahaa tha...ki mat jaa divya ke saath...pachtaayga baadmein...aur tab bht confidence mein gaya tha...ab jhel...dekh kabir...meri baato ko samjha kar...personal experience hain..!!

Kabir:(to umesh) : umesh...yaar...main khud thodi na gaya tha uske saath...ab wohi mujhe kheech ke legayi thi...,main kya karta...!!!

Kabir: (to himself) (facepalming) :abb to tu gaya kabireeyy...dhoond bahaane dhoond abb...!!

Nisha: oyee ...ye tum sab kya badbadaa rahe ho ekk doosre se...??? aur kabir tu...ab to tu mujhse baat karne ki koshish bhi mat kariyo...!!! Dekhle betaaa...dafaa hojaa tu yahaan se...warna main tera khoon kardungi..!!

And nishaa got up from there and walked towards their room in anger...kabir tried to stop her...but she banged the room's door on his face..he came back to the lobby and sat with the cousins again..!!

Kabir: samajhti kya hain wo apne aap ko...?? Kahin ki queen hain kya...???humesha aise hi karti hain mere saath...gussa karti rehti hain...!!! Main uska doggy hun kya...??? Areyy thodi der main apne friend ke saath ghumne chalaa gaya to kya hogaya...usme gussa hone waali kaunsi baat hain...??

Umesh: dekh kabir...maine to tujhe pehle hi warning di thi iss cheez ke baare mein...!!

Sukku: ab isme galti to teri hi hain...!!tu maan ya na maan...!!

Saurav: bhai dekh...isse pehle ki maamla aur garam ho jaaye kuch to karr...!!!

Kabir: yaar...lekin wo itna gussa kyun karti hain mujhpe...???

Saurav:dekh...sab ladkiyon ka yahin kaam hain yaar...lekin tu kaunsa kam bawaal machaata hain uski life mein..???

Dolly, kirti and jwala stared at him with anger...as if they would chop him off...!!

Saurav: areyyy deviyonnn...main tumhaare baare mein nahi bol raha tha yaar...chillax...!!!

Dolly: tera matlab kya hain...hum ladkiyaan nahi hain...??

Saurav: dolly maine aisa kab kahaan yaar...???

Kirti:tunee aisa hi kahaa saurav..!!

Jwala:haan...!!

They were fighting like kids...all the people were laughing at them...while kabir , sukku and umesh were fed up of their fight...!!

Kabir: SHUTT YOUR MOUTHS UP...!!yaar ab tum log ladna band karogeyyy...??? Koyi mujhe baatayega ki mujhe kya karna chahiye...??

Saurav: achcha theek hain...theek hain...chilla mat...!! Tu nisha ko surprise kyun nhi deta...???

Kirti: tu aur nisha kahin akele ghumne kyun nahi jaate...??

Saurav: tu usko dinner date par lejaa...kisi achche restaurant mein...!!

Kirti: to maine bhi to wahi kahaa...!!

Saurav: tune aisaa kab bola...??

Kirti: are u deaf...??? Tujhe sunayi nahi deta kya...terese pehle bola tha maine...!!

Saurav: hawww...kitnaa jhoot bolti hain yaar tu...!!!

Kirti: aaaeee...tu...!!

Saurav: ooo...kya main...kya...???

Kabir: just shut upp guys...!! Yaar tum log to khud ladne lag gayee...!!let it be ...mujhe tum logon ki help nahi chahiye...main khud hi manaa lunga useee..!!

And he walked out of the hotel in anger..!!!he was walking in the middle of the road...he was talking to himself.- ye log humesha aisehi karte hain...inn logon ko khudse ladne ke alaava doosre nahhi dikhaayi dete...main inn se kuchh puchunga hi nahi aage se...matlabi log...!!ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega...!!that road was deserted and secluded...there was no one ...!!

On the other hand,

Nisha: (to herself): yaar mainee kabir ko gusse mein thodaa zyaada to nahi bol diya...was I rude to him...wo bura to nahi maana hoga na...!!

Waise main uske baare mein kyun soch rahi hun...usse sochna chahiye tha uss divya ke peeche peeche jaane se pehle..!!!

Yaar naheee...shaayad main galat hun...wo uski friend hain...aur tune kabir ko kitna kuch bol diya nisha...!! Wo bura maan gayaa to...??? Mujhe ekk baar use baat karni chahiye...!!

And nisha walked towards the lobby from her room...her eyes were searching for kabir...she stood there while the cousins were still fighting...!!umesh noticed her standing there..!!

Umesh: yaar...nishu tu yahaan...??kabir ko dhoondne aayi hain...??

Nisha: haan...nhiii...mera matlab haan...!!

Umesh: galat time pe aayi hain...5 mins pehle aati to wo tujhe yahin milta...gusse mein chala gaya wo baahar...saurav aur kirti ki wajah se...!!

Nisha: gussa kyun..??

Umesh explained her the whole situation...

Nisha:umesh bhaiyya mujhe lagta hain ki maine kabir ko thodaa zyaada hi bol diya...wo kahaan hain...??

Umesh: baahar chala gaya wo...!!

Nisha: bhaiyya main abhi usko leke aati hun...!!!

Umesh: areyyy nishaa rukkk...wo aajaayega...!!yaar...tension mat le...!!wait karle 5-10 mins mein aajayega...!!

Nisha:bhaiyya...wo aa jaayega naa...!!!

Umesh: haan nishaa...wo aajayegaa..!!

On the other hand,

Kabir was walking on that secluded road...he didn't notice that a speeding car was coming from behind...he just turned back to return to the hotel, to his nisha...when that car hit him...and the car escaped from there...kabir fell on the road...he was bleeding profusely...he was taking nisha's name again and again...there was no one on that road...who could help him...tears escaped from his eyes...as he wanted to go back to his nisha...!!he wanted to live his life with her...!!

He was worried about nisha...what will happen to her if something happens with him. How would be she able to live without him...he knew that she loved him so much that she couldn't live without him...he just wanted to go to his nisha ...he tried to get up...his leg was broken...he shouted as he tried to stand up...it pained really hard...blood was oozing out of his head...his bones were in a broken state...he couldn't stand up as he fell on the ground unconscious.

Another car arrived there...and a middle aged woman stepped out of the car...she ran towards kabir...and called the driver out of the car...

Woman: Driver, uthaoo isee aur gaadi mein letaa doo...jaldi...!!

Driver: ma'am ye to kabir bhaiyya hain...kitna khoon beh raha hain...nisha didi ko call karna chahiye hume...!!

Woman: tum mujhe bataaoge ki mujhe kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi...???aur iss ke baare mein tum kuch nahi jaante...kuch nahi...samjhe...and she took out some cash and handed it to him...chaloo ab jaldi se uthaoo ise...!!

The driver made kabir lie in the car...and they started towards an old farmhouse.the woman was vj...!!

Now, nisha was getting impatient...she stood near the entrance of the hotel...she was waiting for kabir...she knew that he was angry...but he was such a person who could never be angry on a person for long time...nisha completely trusted him...but where was he ...nisha feared that something wrong may have happened to him...her mind was getting filled with bad thoughts..she needed to see kabir right now...

The cousins came searching for her, and found her near the entrance ...

Saurav: nishaa...tu yahaan kya kar rahi hain ...akele...??

Nisha: main yahaan kabir ka wait kar rahi hun...mujhe bht darr lag raha hain..!!

Umesh: kya bol rahi hain nisha..??? itni raat ho gayi hain aur kabir ab tak nahi aaya...??? Kahin humne usko kuch zyaada hi gussa to nahi kardiya...?? Kahaan chalaa gaya hoga wo...!!??

Nisha: umesh bhaiyya...wo itna gussa kabhi nahi hota ki wo bina bataaye kahin chala jaaye..ab mujhe kabir ko dhoondna hoga..!!

Umesh: nishaa...tu chintaa mat kar...main aur saurav abhi usko dhoond ke ate hain...wo aajayega nishaa...hum le aaenge use...!!

Nisha: nahiii bhaiyya...mujhe bhi aap dono ke saath hi aana hain...mujhe ekk baar kabir ko dekhna hain...mujhe use sorry bolna hain...!!

Umesh: hum usko leke to aaenge na...phir jitna sorry bolna hain bol diyo..!!

Nisha: nahee bhaiyya...mujhe aapke saath aana hain...!!

Umesh: theek hain phir chal...!!

Guys,, main nisha aur saurav abhi kabir ko dhoond ke aate hain...tum log apne apne rooms mein jaake aaraam karlo...hum bas aate hain abhi...!!

Umesh: theek hain bhaiyya...agar aapko kisi help ki zaroorat ho to aap hum mein se kisi ko bhi call kardena...!!

Umesh: theek hain dolly...!!!

Saying that umesh, saurav and nisha went in search of kabir...while the others went inside the hotel...!!they searched for him everywhere...but he was nowhere to be found...he asked many people if they had seen him...but everytime the answer was a no...nisha was getting more and more tensed...she was getting more and more weaker with every no'...!!

Nisha: kabirr...kahaan chalaa gaya tu...please waapas aaja...main tujhe kuch nahi bolungi...I promise...please aaja..!!!

She was pleading as if she was finding her kid...who hid somewhere...and is not coming out of his hiding.

Nisha: kabir...kahaan hain tu...please aaja...naaa...!! I am sorry ...!

Umesh: nishaa...please sambhaal apne aap ko...kabir mil jaayega...chill..!!

Saurav: tu hi bataa...jab wo aayega aur teri aisi haalat dekhegaa...to wo kitna pareshaan ho jaayega..aur wo hum sab ko bht maarega ki humne teri ye haalat hone kaisi di...!!areyy wo aajayega yarr...tu jaanti hain kabir ko kitnaa k hain...!!

They searched for him almost the whole night ...but all they could get is disappointment ...he was no where to be seen...umesh called dolly to find out if kabir went to the hotel...but NO"...!!

Suddenly...it started raining...there was no such sign before which told them that it would rain...it was all of a sudden...it rained so heavily that one could not see another person except himself..

Umesh: dekhkh nishaa...abhi hum hotel chalte hain...dekh kitni tez ki bearish ho rahi hain...tu bimaar pad jaayenge...kabir aa jayegaa...!!chal nisha...!! And he and saurav held her hand ...but she was trying hard to free herself..!!

Saurav: nishaaa...humne bola na kabir aajayega...!!abhi chal naa...!!

Vasundhara's phone conversation

Vj: thankyou so much...humaare plan mein saath dene keliye...!!

Person: ab ye kiya to maine apne liye hi hain...!!

Vj: maine tumhaare account mein paise transfer kardiye hain..!!

Person: agar aap paise nab hi deti to bhi main ye kaam karta...faayda to isme mera hi hain..!!

Vj: nishaa...ka kya hua...??? She said looking towards kabir...who was murmuring nisha's name again and again...!!

Person: ab aapko use kya matlab...?? Main uska kuch bhi karoo...aap ko isse koyi matlab nahi hona chahiyee...!!

Vj: paise diyee hain maine tumhe...ab itna haq to mera banta hain na..!!

Person: ohhh yeahh...money relations...!! Wahi kiya jo maine aapke bte ke saath kiya...!! Usko bhi udaa diyaa maine gaadi se...!!

Vj: agar use kuch hogaya to...???

Person: main use kuch hone thodi naa dunga...main sabki setting kari hui hain...aap fikkar mat karoo...wo jaise hi kal hospital mein jaagegi...wo kabir ko apne saamne nhi paayegi aur worried ho jaayegi...wo kabir ko dhoondenge...par wo unhe nahi milega...unko disappoint hoke waapas jaipur jaana hi hoga...aur nishaa kabir keliye paagal ho jaayegi...2 saal...teen saal...wo waapas nahi aayega...dheere dheere sab usko bhulne lag jaayenge and tab hogi unke life mein ekk naye hero ki entry...yaani meri entry...karan ki entry...!! Unn sabka pyaara beta ban jaaunga main...kabir ki kami main poora karunga...aur main nisha se shaadi karlunga..!!kaisa laga mera idea..??

Vj: masterplan...huhh...??? Aur police ka kuch problem to nahi hoga na..??

Person: uski aap chintaa mat karo...paisa kuch bhi kar sakta hain...ekk baar iss case ko shuru hone do...aur main isse aise dabaa dunga ki kabir ka naam aur nishaan mit jaayega..!!chalooo good bye...n all the best...I hope ki kabir kabhi nisha ki life mein waapas nahi aayega...can I trust u..??

Vj: tum uski chinta mat karoo...mere paas uska bhi plan hain...!! Ab hum rakhte hain..!! aur I hope that we will never meet again..!!

Nisha's injuries were very serious...they immediately rushed her to the hospital...she was in a critical condition...she murmured kabir's name again and again...!!they called the cousins to the hospital..!!they all were waiting outside as nisha was in the ICU...after an hour...the doc came out...!!

Umesh: doc...meri behn kaisi hain...wo theek to hain na...??

Doc: dekhiyeee hum abhi kuch nahi keh sakte...unka bht saara blood loss ho gaya hain...hume blood arrange karne ki koshish kar rahe hain...!!! Waise aapmein se kabir kaun hain...???

Umesh: doc...wo abhi yahaan nahi hain...kyun..???

Doc: wo baar baar unhi ka naam le rahi hain...achcha hogaa agar aap unko jaldi se jaldi bulaa le..!!

Umesh: ji...jii doc...!!

On the other hand,

Kabir was taking nisha's name again and again...vasundhara was guilty but irritated while his son took her name...they reached the farmhouse...he was in a very weak condition...he had lost a lot of blood...! Vj and the driver shifted him to a room in the FH...where stood a person clad in a white lab coat...a doctor...everything was arranged like a hospital room...he was immediately laid down on the bed..the doctor started his work.

Vj: doc...aapko pata hain na ki aapko kya karna hain..!!

Doc: yes...mam...sab ready hain...main wo drugs le aaya...!!bas jaise hi main inko theek kardu...aur ye thode thode theek hone lagee...hum inko dheere dheere karke ye drugs dena shuru kardenge...par jaise maine kahaa...shuru shuru mein bht problem ho sakti hain...jaise ki innko shuru shuru mein sab yaad hogaa...par dheere dheere karke sab bhul jaayenge...bas ekk mahine continuously ye drug dene ke baad...inn ko kuch yaad nahi aayega..!!aur kuch yaad dilaane keliye...inke dimag par bht pressure daalne ki zaroorat hogi..aur jo mujhe pta hain ki aap nahi karengi...!!

Vj: wo sab aap mujh par chod dijiye...main iski poori ki poori identity hi badal dungi...aur isko kabhi yaad nahi aayega...!!

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PRESENT

Viraj rushed kabir to the hospital immediately...he shouted out for the doctor...the doctors took him to the ICU...the doctors very well knew his condition as he was an old patient...they exactly knew what must have happened to him...viraj explained them the situation...!! After two hours of operation...the doc came out..

Viraj: doc...what has happened to my brother...is he alright...??

Doc: we can't tell you anything right now...his condition is very sensitive right now...according to our reports...we found a drug in his blood...which causes memory loss...!! Was he taking any...???

Viraj: no doc...he never took any drugs...(suddenly he realized what the doctor said) ( he remembered kabir taking some sort of medicines...when asked he said that...vj gave it to him...!!) now he could clearly understand...that it was a masterplan...!!

Doc: this drug is very dangerous...it can cause death too...and we've found this drug in an excessive amount in his body...we have to remove that first...!!it can sometimes damage the brain cells too..so we've have to be careful...we would be able say anything about his condition only tomorrow..we have to keep him under observation...!!

Viraj: as u say doc...i'm here only...tell me if anything is needed...!!

Doc: yupp...offcourse...and do not worry...we will make everything alright..!!

Viraj: thanks doc...!!

The doc took a leave from there...viraj sat on the bench outside the ICU...and took out his phone...and called umesh...!!

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res unres...yay first one to comment...amazing update yaar...each and every part was written so nicely...I can easily imagine the story...loved the flashback...karan and vj 😡...nibir nok jhoks were so cute...ty for the pm

Awesome update Annie maasi..👏🤗 And a long one too..😆

res

awesome update choti 👏

Aur kitna niche giregi yeh aurat..apne hi bete ka accident karva diya .. Usski jaan jaa sakti thi aisi daviyaan di usse aur abh usse pachtava ho raha hai ?? 😡

Originally posted by: maniwood

awesome update choti 👏

but u have posted story two times😆

loved it to the core 😉

iss vj ki to main 😡

loved nibir and cousins scene in flashback ❤️