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CHAPTER -3


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LONDON

Viraj and kushal just returned home , they both were hell tired after the trip of London...they almost covered all the good places in London...went to many eateries...ate like inhumans...they ate so much that they would just burst out now. after returning home, kushal just fell on the sofa with his hands up in the air and viraj just laid flat on the floor...they exactly looked like brothers now, brothers who just had a year gap between them...!!

Kushal rolled his eyes up...and looked towards viraj...and viraj looked towards kushal with the same expression on his face...and stared each other for a moment and then...laughed out loud..

Kushal: bade bhaiyya aaj to mazaa aagaya...bht dino baad...iss tarah baahar ghumne gaya hun...thank you so much...!!

Viraj smiled.

Kushal:bade bhaiyya...main aapse ek sawaal puchu to aap jawaab doge...???

Viraj:areyy pucho pucho...!!

Kushal: ye kabir kaun hain...aur nisha...??

Viraj: dekhiye kushal...main aapke curiousness ko samajh sakta hun...main aapko abhi kuch nahi bataa sakta...lekin aap bas itna samajh lijiye ki jis din aapko kabir ke bare mein pata chalega...nisha ke bare mein bhi automatically pata chal jaayega...!!kyunki nisha aur kabir to ekk hi hain...!!

Kushal: ekk...??? Bhai lekin nisha to ladki hain...n kabir ladka na...the...how...??

Viraj laughed out loud at his brother's crazy dialogues...he just said

VIraj: kushal...hum na fresh hone jaa rahe hain...humne apna phone charge hone keliye rakhkha hain...agar kisi ka phone aaye to receive kar lena...!!aur itne mein aap sochiye ki kaun ho sakta hain..!!

Kushal: hmm...theek hain ...!! Kyaa...???

Viraj walked towards his room laughing...

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JAIPUR, INDIA

Saurav: viraj sir ki help se...??? wo kaise...???

Umesh: hum seedha seedha viraj sir ko call karenge...kuch bhi ho jaaye hume nisha ko ye baat pataa chalne nahi deni hogi...hum bas kabir ko kisi tarah laake uske saamne khadaa kardenge...!!

Saurav: lekin kya viraj sir hume sab kuch bataayenge...???mujhe lagta hain ki ye idea flop hain...!!

Dolly:bhaiyya mujhe lagta hain ki aap sahi bol rahe ho...nisha ko ye baat abhi pata nahi chalni chahiye...hume viraj sir se confront karna hoga...!!

Saurav: umesh call kar viraj sir ko abhi ke abhi...!!

Umesh : (in mind- dolly ka chamchaa )- theek hain ...main abhi ke abhi call karta hun...!!

Umesh takes his phone out from his pocket and dials viraj's number, but the phone was switched off.

Umesh: guys, phone to switched off aa raha hain...!!

Dolly: ab kya kare...??

Saurav: yaar thodi der keliye wait karke dekhte hain...phir call karenge...shaayad abhi busy honge...!!

Umesh tried once more...but it was the same...

Umesh: abhi...phir ...5 mins mein try karta hun shaayad caal lag jaaye...!!

After 5 mins...umesh tried the call once again...and this time...someone picked it up...not viraj...!!

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NISHA, SUKKU AND KARAN IN THE SHOPPING MALL

Karan : nishu...please ye sari khareed lena...tujhpe bht achchi lagegi...!!

Nisha:maine bola na...mujhe sari nahi khareedni...mujhe saris pasand nahi hain...aur tu kaun hota hain mujhe nishu bulaane waala...wo mujhe sirf cousins aur kabir bula sakte hain..!!

Sukku: tujhe samajh nahi aata kya...ki nisha ko tujhme koyi interest nahi hain ...phir kyun uske piche padaa hua hain tu..??

Karan: saalee...tu chup reh...main nishu se baat kar raha hun na..!!

Nisha: how dare you call my brother like that...??? Teri himmat kaise hui...??aur tu mujhe nishu nishu bolna band kar ...warna...!!

She looks at karan warningly...

Karan:ab saale ko saala nahi to aur kya bolunga..?? aur warna kya ha..??tu mujhe dhamki de rahi hain...dekh nisha...main tujhse pyaar karta hun...tu samajhti kyun nahi...main bas tujhse shaadi karna chahta hun...tu maan na maan..abb kabir waapas nahi aayega...!!

Tears escaped nisha's eyes...this was noticed by sukku...sukku grabbed karan's collar...

Sukku: tu kabirr ka dost hain ya dushmann...?? Uske jaane ke baad hum logon ke baton ko support karne ke wajay tune to apni hi theory start kardi...usi ki wife ke saath shaadi karna chachta hain tu...?? Dimag hain bhi ya nahi tujhme ..??? tune kabir-nisha ko saath mein kitna khush dekha hain..??wo dono pyaar karte hain ekk doosre se...!! aur tu...uska dost..??aren't you embarrassed ...??

Karan: yaar dekh main samajhtaa hun ki tum log kya feel karte ho...kabir mera bhi friend hain...mujhe bhi bura lagta hain yaar...main bas nisha ka saath dena chahta hun...!!usse support karna chahta hun...!!

Sukku: use support karne keliye use kisi ki zaroorat nahi hain...wo bht strong hain aur wo khudko support kar sakti hain...and agar use kisi ki zaroorat hogi to hum cousins humesha uske saath hain...use kisi baahar waale ke support ki zaroorat nahi hain...aur wo bhi tujh jaise ki..!!jo...

He was about to continue, when nisha stopped him...and said him to leave from there as she wanted to talk something with karan..sukku left from there following her orders.

Nisha: aur karan tu...!! Tujhe kya lagta hain tu koyi god hain...jo sabko support karta phirega...agar tujhe aisa hi lagta hain na tu samajhle...mujhe kisi ke support ki zaroorat nahi hain...aur jahaa tak kabir ki baat hain...main uskeliye kitna bhi time lage wait karsakti hun...aur isme tu beechme kuch nahi kar sakta..!!

Saying so nisha walks away from there...throwing the shopping bags on his face.

Karan moves his face in disgust...he throws those shopping bags in the dustbin...and walks away in anger.

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LONDON

Viraj's mobile phone was ringing simultaneously... Kushal ignored it first but then he remembered what viraj said...he with a lot of effort got up from the sofa...and walked towards the phone...and was about to pick it up...when the call was cut off...he kept the phone back and then was again walking towards the sofa when the phone rang again...!!

He irritatedly walked towards the phone...it flashed something like "laddoo" on the screen...kushal smiled at it...!!

Kushal( to himself):- laddoo apna naam kaun rakhta hain yaar...badaa funny hain...aur ye itni baar call kyun kar raha hain...ho sakta hain kuch important ho...utha hi leta hun..!!

Kushal picked up the phone..

Caller(umesh):- helloo...viraj sir ...???aap kahaan hain itne saalo se...aapse baat bhi nhi hui...???sir mujhe aapse important baat karni thi...kab...

Kushal cuts him and says..

Kushal:hellloo...hello...excuse mee...kya main jaan sakta hun aap kaun bol rahe hain...bhai abhi yahaan nahi hain...wo fresh hone gaye hain...unke aane ke baad main call karwaata hun...aapka naam..??

Umesh recognized the oice of the person

Umesh: u..uu..meshhh...t..tumm kabbiiirr...??bolll rahe ho naa...???

Kushal: abee yaar...kaun hain ye kabir...itne dino se kabir sun sun ke mere kaan pak gayee hain...kuch naya sunaoo yaar...!!oopss...sorry...I am not kabir...my name is kushal..!!

Umesh: lekin...wahi awaaz...ye kaise ho sakta hain...???tum kabir ho...kushal nahii...!!! Kabirr...tumhe nisha yaad nahi...??

Kushal: kaun nishaa yaar...uss ke bare mein bhi suna maine...bhai bol rahe the...waise ye dono hain kaun...??

Umesh:kabir...nishaa tumharii

He was about to complete his sentence when viraj took his mobile from kushal...and glared at him...as if he wanted to know something..

Kushal: bhai...india se kisi umesh ka phone hain...!!

Viraj:u...umeshh aapne kya baat ki unse..??

Kushal: kuch nahi unhe aapse baat karna tha...kisi kabir-nisha ke baare mein bol rahe the...!!

Viraj: aap theek hain na..??

Kushal: haan bhai...mian theek hun...mujhe kya hoga..??

Viraj: theek hain...hum abhi call pe baat karke aate hain..!!aap jaake fresh ho jaaiye..!!

Kushal: ohhkk ...theek hain...!!

Kushal marched off to his room...

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SUKKU-NISHA IN CAR

Sukku: nisha...tune mujhe roka kyun...?? Main uss saale ko muh tod deta..!!

Nisha: aise logon ke muh na todne se chup nahi hote sukku...in logon ko seedha feviquik pilaana padhta hain..!!aur wo hum isko pilaake rahenge...!!hain na..??

Sukku: offcourse yaar..!! yaar mujhe ek cheez samajh nahi aati puchu...???

Nisha: haan puch na...aur waise mere naa bolne se tu rukegaa thodi na..!!

Sukku: heehee...achcha sun..!!

Nisha: sunaa...ab aati kya khandaala mat boliyo..!!

Sukku: abeyy yaar tu humesha mere flow ko kharaab kardeti hain..!!

Nisha: achcha chal bol...ab nahi bolungi kuch..!!

Sukku...theek hain sun...lekin main pehle hi bataa raha hun...bura mat maaniyi...aur agar tu phirse ronee lagi to main...tujhe car main lock karke bhaag jaaunga..!!!

Nisha: tu kabir ke baare mein puchne waala hain...??hain na..??

Sukku: haan...mera matlab hain nahi...tum dono ke baare mein..!!

Nisha : puch..!!

Sukku: tu royegi to nahi na..??

Nisha: nahee..

Sukku:to sun...yaar tu aur kabir ekk doosre pe itna bharosa kaise karte ho...?? Aur itna saara pyaar...??chahe sab kabir ko bhool chuke ho ...lekin tu nahi bhuli...wo kyun..??? aur kabir ki haalat ja tu uss building se giri..!!wo baawra ho gayaa tha...!!tere liye wo khud jail chalaa gay...jab usne kuch kiya hi nahi..! yaar main chahta hun ki kabir jaldi se waapas aajaaye..!!

Nisha: wo aayega sukku...wo zyaada der merese dur nahi reh sakta...ab to mujhe bhi lag raha hain ki wo bht jaldi waapas aane waala hain...to maine decide kiya hain ki main ab roungi nahi...bas khush rahungi...kyunki mera kabir ab finally aane waala hain...bht wait karwaaya na usne mujhe...aane do usko...jhaadu se itna maarungi na...aur ghar se bhi baahar nikaal dungi..!!

Sukku got emotional after hearing her talks.tears escaped his eyes...finally his sister was getting normal and that too because of kabir...he had to thank him..!!

Nisha: ab tu kyun ronee lagaa...?? Kabir ki yaad aagayi kya...?? Koyi baat nahi...jab wo aajayega na tab uske gale lag ke roo liyo...merese pehle..!!

Sukku: haan yaar...mujhe kabir ki yaad aagayi...waise tu mujhe uske gale terese pehle kahaan lagne degi...tu to hmm hmm...??

Nisha: sukku...tub bht bigad gayaa hain...kabir ke saath saath tujhe bhi jhaadu se pitna hain kya..?? chal lag liyo uske galee..!!

Sukku: chalee ab ghar...ghar jaake cousins ko bataana hain na ki tune karan ko apne baato se kitnaa peeta...!!

Nisha:haan...zaroor...kyun nhii..!!

Sukku:to chall..(in his mind- nisha main kuch bhi ho jaaye kabir ko waapas laake hi rahunga...and uss karan ko tere aas paas bhi nahi bhatakne dunga...ek baar bas kabir aa jaye ...hum dono milke karan ko aisa maarenge ki wo zindagi mein nahi bhukega..!!)

And sukku drove the car towards gangwal house..!!

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Viraj- cousins conversation

Umesh: virajj sir...wo kabirr hi tha naa...???

Viraj:haan umesh...kya nisha hain wahaape...?? Kaisi hain wo...??theek hain na...??

Umesh: wo bilkul theek nahi hain viraj sir...kabir ke jaane ke baad woe k dum chup chup rehti hain...n kisi se bi kuch baat nahi karti...bas aise hi kahi khoyi rehti hain...

Viraj: ye sab bht jaldi theek ho jaayega umesh...sab kuch...

( he explained everything that happened with kabir...and his condition..!!)

Umesh: ab hum bhi yahin chahte hain viraj sir...hum nisha ko aur sad nhi dekh sakte...aur gharwaale uski shaadi kabir ke best friend karan se karaane pe tule hain...aur wo nisha ke peeche pada hain...4 din baad uski shaadi hain sir...aapko aur humee milke kuch karna padegaa...!!

On the other hand,

Kushal went to his room...and saw the diary lying on his bed in the same position...he went near it...opened it and another photo fell from the diary...it was kabir-nisha's photo...kushal was shocked...as the person in the photo resembled him and he didn't knew the girl beside him...although he felt a connection...he slowly read the diary...kushal wanted answers for this...everything written in that small diary..!!he went straight to viraj...who was standing near the entrance gate...facing towards the garden...and he accidentally heard everything viraj spoke to umesh...kushal was kabir...he finally found out the truth of his own life...he was speechless...dumb founded was he...he couldn't understand anything...his head ached...confusion...anger...happiness...those moments spent with nisha...his love for her...the cousins...the gangwal family...the brother...everyone's love...hatred...vasundhara's deeds...he couldn't understand anything...the manali trip...moments...accident...and then BLANKKK...!!!

He holds his head...which ached profusely, extremely...he could feel the hot blood running through his veins...the world around him was slowly blacking out...his body went cold...and

Just then viraj turned to see kabir falling on the ground...

" THUDDD...!!!"

Kabirrr...' shouted viraj.

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Hehe...sorry...I did a little late to update it...that's why a long update...do like and comment...!!

Edited by sam_premc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
do comment people...it took me three days to complete it..!!🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsum update anniee
finally kushal ko patha chal gaya he is kabir😉he fainted again memory loss tho nahi hone wala🤣
woh karan uski ithni himmat😡😡 sukku bro u rock man😉😉
loved protective suku
nishu n suku convo👏
kushal pickng Viraj's phone n umesh kushal part was nice👏
RajBir👍🏼
waitng 4 Nibir maha milan😉😉
update soon(iss baar plz jaldi update karna OK😆😆) otherwise saru se motivation post banva dungi🤣
Edited by ammu4u - 10 years ago
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It was mindblowing yaar ... nisha n sukku's conversation was so cute... and the ending , it was superb ... 👏 👏 👏 ... plz continue soon this time .. plz plz plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
anniee...3 days is nothing...i'm still writing my upd8😆

btw...loved the upd8...i liked the rajbir part...toatlly imagined it.

and the end...cliffhanger!!!!!!! upd8 fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part...finally khushal ko pata chal gaya...update soon...n plz pm me next time if possible
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thank you myaans...!!!ameena, ammu, lekhu, vaishu🤗☺️
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Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

anniee...3 days is nothing...i'm still writing my upd8😆

btw...loved the upd8...i liked the rajbir part...toatlly imagined it.

and the end...cliffhanger!!!!!!! upd8 fast

thank u lekhu...will update soon..!!
and lekha...write jab tak hain jaan...!!!🤣🤣
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

awesome part...finally khushal ko pata chal gaya...update soon...n plz pm me next time if possible

didn't i pm u...??? sorry...i sent u buddy request ...please accept it...so that i am able to send u pms..😃
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Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

It was mindblowing yaar ... nisha n sukku's conversation was so cute... and the ending , it was superb ... 👏 👏 👏 ... plz continue soon this time .. plz plz plz

thankyou so much ...ameena...will update the next part soon...was struck in between school and tuition..!!😆😆

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