NIBIR SS-INCREDIBLE LOVE part 7(last part) updated on page 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Amazing update👍🏼... curiosity increasing... plz update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Awesome update... 😊
Edited by A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Superb update👍🏼👏👏
Eagerly waiting for next update😃😃
Continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
tysm I vl update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome story
May I know your name
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
tysm my name is vaishnavi u can call me vaishu or vish whatever u like
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5
Sorry for late update guys I was very busy with my clg
Dolly-kya hua nishu tu itni sad kyu h
Nisha-kuch nhi di ma thik hu
Dolly-yaha aa baith yaha
Dolly makes her sit or chair n sits in the other
Dolly-ab bata kya hua h
Nisha-kuch nhi di ma thik hu
Dolly-nishu ab ek aur baar jhut bola to dekh lena...kabir ki yaad aa rhi h??
Nisha- Haa di 3 saal ho gaya kya use meri yaad nhi aati 3 saalo me ek baar bhi usne mujse baat karne ki koshis nhi ki (almost crying )
Dolly-nishu aisa kuch nhi h ho sakta h ki usse aa bhi yahi lagta ho ki tu viraj se pyaar karti h
Nisha-ho sakta h ma kya karu di kaisa pata karu vo kaha h ??
Dolly-nishu tu tension mat le sab thik ho jayaga
Nisha-hmm
Here kabir was searching for navya and finds her talking with one of her clients he went there
Kabir-excuse me
Navya-oh aap...(to client) plz enjoy yourself I vl b back soon
Kabir-ha vo mera phone
Navya-Haa yeh lijiya ( handing him the phone ) bt plz thodi der rukiya party enjoy karke jaiya
Kabir-no plz
Navya-plz rukiya na meri frnd se bhi milkar jaiya
Kabir-ohkk vaisa aapki frnd ka naam kya h
Navya-nisha ga...
Before she could complete she heard sukku
Announcing
Sukku-hello everyone guyz hum yaha ek game khelne wala h ma aap sabko request karta hu ki aap log plz hume join kijiaya yeh gamebahut simple h hum aap sabko mask denge aapko usse pehenke apne partner ka saath dance karna h jaisa hi music change Hoga aap apne partner badatle rehna and end ma jo bhi lakda hamari bday girl ka saath dance kar rha hoga vo hoga winner plz guyz join us ondance floor
Nisha-sukku yeh tu kya kehkar aaya ma koi dance nhi karne wali
Sukku-nishu chal na yaar maza aayaga plz plz plz
Nisha-accha thik h bt partner ka kya
Sukku-are ma hu na
Nisha-or navya
Sukku-uska hi idea h vo mana nhi karagi
Navya (to kabir)-hey u should try
Kabir-no ty
Navya-plz mare liya mera vaisi bhi mera partner mera saath dance nhi kar payaga plz
Kabir -ok
The lights went off all were on the dance floor with mask on their face music changed and partner kept changing suddenly music changed and a guy twirled nisha and she collided with the music was going on they both can't see each others face bt their hearts recognized them they looked in each other's eyes n got locked
Kabir took nisha's hand in his hand and kept other on his shoulder his other hand was on nisha's waist thet didn't knew what they were doing bt they just wanted to live this moment fully they kept dancing not breaking the eye lock music changed bt they didn't changed the partner they were in their own world suddenly the music stopped n they came back to reality kabir didn't want anybody to see him with nisha so before the light got on he left the floor and everyone consided the boy standing beside nisha to b her last partner bt nisha couldn't believe it she knew he was kabir she could never do such mistake tears started foaming in her eyes she wanted to find him suddenly saurav came there
Saurav-nishu tu ro kyu rhi h kya hua
Nisha-saurav vo yaha h
Saurav-kon nishu
Nisha-kabir
Saurav-what?? Nishu yaha dekha tune use
Nisha- saurav mana use dekha nhi bt Mujhe pata h jo mera saath dance kar rha tha vo kabir hi tha
Saurav-tu ruk ma usa dhundta hu
Nisha-plz saurav ma usko phir S.A. nhi khona cahti
Saurav-kuch nhi hoga nishu tu ro mat
Saurav tells everyone about it all cousins start searching for kabir bt in vain coz he left
Nisha starts crying and run in her room and locks it
Nisha-mana phirse use kho diya phir vo mujse dur chala gaya ma kya karu kabir ki tu vapas aa jayae kaise batau ki ma tujse kitna pyaar karti hu...nhi nishu tujhe strong rehna hoga tu tut nhi sakti nhi aur kabir ma jaanti hu tu mujhe milega mera dil kehta h ki tu jarur aayaga
In kabir's room
Kabir-m sorry nisha bt ma tera saamna nhi kar sakta ma jaanta hu ki tune mujhe pehchaan liya tha ma yeh bhi jaanta hu ki mom na mujhe jhut bola tha par ma vapas tare life ma nhi aa sakta nisha ma tujhe deserve nhi karta tu kitni khus thi apni life ma sirf meri vajah se teri life inti difficult hui h m sry nisha m sry mujhme himmat nhi h tujhe face karne ki

here cousins think of ways to searc kabir
Sukku-guyz agar kabir mumbai ma to hume use kisi bhi tarah dhundna padega
Dolly-or guyz nishu ko sambhalna bhi utna hi jaruri h
Navya-aap uski tension mat ma dekh lugi
Umesh -thik h hum sab kal subha use dhundna shuru karaga
All cousins-ohkk
Navya- ma nisha ko uske favorite garden le jaati hu usse accha lagaga
Aman-haa yeh thik rahega
N Navya went in nisha room n found hr standing in balcony she knew nisha was shattered bt was trying to b strong
Navya-nishu
Nisha-Haa navya
Navya -mujhe garden jaana h chalagi mera saath
Nisha-ma jaanti hu tu yeh kyu kar rhi h
Navya-nishu plz
Nisha-thik h bt garden ka gate band hoga late hogaya h
Navya-tu chal to sahi
N they left for the garden
Nisha-mana kaha tha na ab vapas chale
Navya-kya nishu itna sq gate hume rok nhi sakta
Nisha-matlab kya h tera
Navya-matlab hum gate khudke jayaga
Nisha-navya tu pagal h
Navya-chal na nishu plzzz...dekh tu nhi aayi na toh ma tujse kabhi baat nhi karugi
Nisha-accha thik h
N they climb they gate they were sitting on grass with utter silence navya knew nisha needs some time n spacr so she remain silent suddenly she saw someone in the park
Navya-nishu tu ruk ma abhi aayi
Nisha-kaha jaa rhi h
Navya-mana vaha kisi ko dekha
Nisha-kisa or park to band h
Navya-pata nhi tu ruk ma aayi
Nisha- nhi tu akele mat jaa ma bhi aati hu
N they went near the bush and saw a figure standing there facing his back
Navya-kon h kon h vaha
Suddenly the figure turns n nisha gets shocked to see kabir in front of her eyes
Kabir knew now he can't run away this time
Navya-aap aap yaha is waqt khair...nishu yahi h vo jinone vo gown apni "wife" ka liya tha (the word wife felt like a knife priking in her heart) or yeh h...
Suddenly she stopped in middle bcoz she saw tears in nisha's eyes
Navya-(tensed)nishu kya hua???
Nisha can't handle it and ran from there navya follwed her
Kabir-(to himself) sry nisha ma tujhe caah kar bhi nhi rok sakta m sorry ma kal hi londan chala jauga or vapas kabhi India nhi aauga
Navya-kya hua nishu
Nisha-navya vo...vo...mera kab...kabir tha navya vo kabir tha ma galat thi navya vo mujse pya...pyaar nhi karta h usne shaa...shaadi kar li navya vo mujse pyaar nhi karta
Navya-what?
Navya without thinking twise called all the cousins they took broken nisha to her house
Precap- cousins plan nibir proposal
M really sorry for late update n plz tell how was it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome vaishu
now I m curious to know what happen next?
Keep writing u r very good in that

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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Really nice update Vaishu👍🏼
The garden part and the dance part was really nice😃
Update it soon😊😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Fantastic update ⭐️👏👏
Loved garden and dance part ❤️
Excited for next update 😃
Plz update soon

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