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Posted: 10 years ago
I am glad u made viraj stop kabir...finally rajbir !!
lovely twist...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niki2

Beautiful chapter love👍🏼 loved how viraj realized nishas feelings...

Coz the chapter was interesting I felt like it was too short...😔
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the pm buddy🤗



aaww...thanx😃
I'll write a bigger chapter next time😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it vry much

pls PM me whn u update nxt prt
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm glad Viraj was level headed here! Excellent update! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AVC92

I'm glad Viraj was level headed here! Excellent update! :)



I've always like a level heade Viraj so i thought I'll keep him that way.
Glad you liked it😊
Edited by Lekha.Mayur4eva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part.. update soon.. nauc cv's can follow ur story..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Can't wait for nibir to reunite
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeh chota dhakan, dhakan hi rahega. Lekhs waiting for nibir part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
So here's the last part😊 sorry for the late update😳
Something is wrong with my laptop so I'm using the mobile. So please ignore all typo mistakes😳

Part 6: Together Forever

" What is the meaning of all this?! ", Ramesh asked.

Nisha had just told her family about the contract marriage and Viraj and Kabir's relation. Everyone was shocked.
" I told you not to take this marriage lightly. You disappoint me again.", Dadaji said.
Everyone started speaking at once throwing questions and advices.

Just then a package arrived for Nisha. She opened it to find an offer letter to join the Sports Academy of London. Nisha's happiness knew no bounds. She wanted to join mp with joy but then she wondered if Kabir loved her and if Dadaji would let her go. There was a note along with a packaged which said "For my brother and he a wife -Viraj"

"I need to leave", she said and left for Viraj's penthouse.

She hadn't been gone for more than a minute when Kabir let himself into the house. Everyone looked shocked at him.
" Get out ", Viren said," Just leave. "
He tried to force Kabir out of the house.
"Dadu please", the dancer shouted out, " You know I care about all of you and this family's reputation."
Moham joined Viren. Ramesh stood rooted to the spot.
"Leave him", Dadu said.
The brothers let him go and he ran and knelt before Dadu who was in his usual chair.

"I'm sorry Dadu", he said, "I'm sorry for everything. I thought that I could manage to be a bad damaad and make you all hate me so that you won't blame Nisha but I couldn't see you all hurt because of me."
"Why are you here Kabir?",Dadaji demanded.
" I have come to apologize for everything that I have done that has hurt you. I also came to ask you if I can take Nisha with me to London."

Everyone was quite and waited for Dadaji's decision.
"You are Viraj's brother.", he stated.
Kabir knew that this wasn't going good. He nodded.
"Nisha told us everything about how you came in search of your brother and lied to your mother and you both lied to us about your marriage.", Dadu said.
"But my feelings for Nisha is real. I love her and I genuinely care about all of you.", Kabir said.

" I need to meet your mother?", Singham said.
Kabir have a questioning look.
"The wedding is over. Let me at least meet your mother before you and Nisha leave to London."
Kabir's face lit up and he was about to hug the old man when he stopped mid way.
Dadaji smiled and hugged Kabir. The whole family celebrated this happy ending to the problems.

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Nisha walked in when Viraj opened the door for her.
"This is not done sir", she said, " You recommended me and got me into one of the best shooting schools where I can be with Kabir but Kabir doesn't want me with him. "
"It's Viraj... no sir", he corrected her.
Nisha looked at him questioningly.
"We are family Nisha. You may have broken my heart but you are the reason I have a brother who will fix it. I'm happy for both of you."

"But he left. I told you that", she said.
"He's at your house asking your family if he can take you with him."
Nisha didn't know how to react to that news. Her eyes filled with tears of happiness.
"What are you waiting for?", Viraj asked, " Go!!! "

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Nisha reached her house and found everyone outside waiting for her.
"Where were you?", Saurav asked," Kabir is waiting for you inside."

Nisha ran and opened the main door. She v looked around the house. It was just like she remembered in the dream that Mrs. Kumar made her see. She knew where to find him just like his dream.

The raven head found the love of her life standing at the balcony. She wanted to leap and hug him with joy but she stopped herself.

"You left didn't you?", she asked trying to get into her cranky mode," Then why are you back? "
"I left something here", Kabir said and turned to face her.
" What?", she asked.
"My heart", he said waking towards her,"I can't leave it here. I need it for my dance but my heart very stubborn. It doesn't listen to me. So I decided to listen to it."
With that he kissed her, just like he did in his dream. He poured his feelings out through that one kiss.

"Nisha", he said as they finally broke the kiss,"All my life I've been trying to make people around me happy and when I met you I started learning to be happy myself. Don't ask me when and how but I started seeing my dreams differently. I still see myself becoming the best dancer the world has seen but you are there too right by my side."

Kabir knelt down on one knee.
"Nisha Gangwal. I love you more than ever thought it was humanly possible. Will you come with me to London so that we can fulfill this dream together?"

Nisha was speechless and her eyes welled up with tears of happiness. She knelt down in front him.
"A few moments before I met you I prayed to god to show some kind of miracle in my life...and god got you into my life. You have probably helped many people with their broken hearts but I know you fixed mine by filling it with love...with my love for you. I can't imagine my life without you in it anymore. I don't want to be incomplete anymore. I just want to love you forever."
"Me too", Kabir said and so the two soulmates reunited as the sun set lighting the sky in deep red just like their love.

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So here it is. The ending. I enjoyed wiring it and hope you all enjoyed the story.
I wanted to thank preru(P_shah) for asking me to write this SS.
Thanks for all your like comments and support😃

-Lekha😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lekhs i hope the story goes this way in the show as well. Loved the Ending.

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