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Posted: 9 years ago
OK there was a lot of demand for this FF ...and I'm awfully late ...and sorry cause caught up with my tight schedules
Rosh - This one's for you ...It's more of a filler ..but yet for you ..
sorry for the short one 😆



Chapter 14



Location -School , Waiting for the Van for the trip

The day growing up faster with little dark clouds crowded over the sky making it a little dull and little brighter with some due interval, the situation seeming to exciting for the senior children as it was getting merry for them to get few days off from classes. There was a similar situation for a small gang too. Sourav, walked in holding his carry bag on one hand and pulling a sulking Kabir on the other followed by Umesh who kept gawking at the two control his laugh.

Sourav: Kabir, Dare you not come, I will kill you!


Kabir : Like I'm sacred!

Sourav (raising a brow): Really? Then you should be scared of me (in a serious tone)

Kabir : Why should I? You look and sound like a toothless pig - I should be disgusted

Sourav reached to punch his face when Umesh told him stop the childish behavior giving a high five to Kabir saying indirectly that he was with him.

Umesh: Don't trouble him you idiot , maan gaya hai otherwise he will back off from this trip!

Sourav: Yaar! I hate you both emotional blackmails ...get some brains

Kabir : Why can't you get one first? If you be like this, I swear the donkeys will race your IQ

Sourav: Right! When one is standing beside me!

Kabir: Umesh he just called you a donkey!

Umesh, who kept watching their fight hiding his laugh turned red when he was donkey before he could do anything, Dolly came along with Nisha and Kirti.

Sourav: Wohoo ...looks like the girls are ready too


Dolly: Ha don't ask! Kirti was full on ready to come but our darling Nishu ...she was sulking the whole way and guess what? I had to pack things for her!

Nisha: Shut up Dolly! I still have time and chances to go back and I will do that!

Sourav to Umesh: Aisa kyun lag raha hai ki this happened before too?

Umesh: He he ...apna dimag zyada use mat kara - using it after a long time, smoke will be produced

Sourav: Staying with Kabir you too are turning cocky like him!

Umesh : WHAT? (Loudly)

Kabir: What?

Umesh: God Sourav, please shut your mouth!

Kabir: Uska mooh kab band hota hai? Seems like its damaged

Kabir giving high five giggling

Kirti: How blah you two? ...bichara him

Sourav: I don't want your sympathy ...these two don't have the patience to tolerate me ..I know


Kabir: God talk to girls properly!

Nisha: As if you do that very nicely right? (Sarcastically)

Kabir: Great for you ...Lady Dragon

Nisha: Kabir dare you call that name again or else?

Kabir: Or else what? You will complain to whom Miss Bacchi?

Nisha: Bachi? Who me? Get some brains!

Kabir: You think I don't have?

Nisha: You what? NO EVEN A LITTLE

Kabir: Well that's for you my dear ...that's why you have Sourav as your best friend

Nisha: In that case, he is your best friend too!

Kabir: WHAT? No! We don't share our jockeys with each other! ..May be yes at times

Nisha: WHAT? YEW! No wonder you both are piggy friends

Kabir: He is a pig! Not me you brainless machine!

Nisha: Then it's him who is brainless machine not me you douche bag!

Kabir: He the douche you chicken

Dolly to Sourav: inka tractor phirse chalo hogaya!

Nisha: Sourav is the chicken ...you don't need to define it more frequently you jackass!


Sourav: Hold on! Tum logon ko aaps mein jagadna hai toh jagdo ...but why me in between huh? Pig ? Brainless? Douche? Chicken? Now you will say jackass too?

NIBir : SHUTP UP YOU JACKASS!

Sourav had the biggest bulb light face along with Dolly and Sourav who were trying their best to hold on from laughing the heart off. And by the time they could fight more, Mr Bhakshi entered the class.


Mr.Bakshi : Children...get ready with you bags and stuff we are moving towards the bus and I want PERFECT DISCIPLINE OKAY !

Sourav: ok fake baal ...

Mr.Bhakshi: What? Sourav

Sourav : Fake Bhaalu ...Kabir

Pulling Kabir's cheeks .

Sourav : stop give Fake bhaalu - teddy bear to girls ...be a good boy ok Kabir!

Kabir staring at him : Girls ka pata nehi ...tere liye zoo ka teddy bear zaroor leke aaonga!

Sourav : isse better hai tu Nisha se zoo ke janwaron ke gaali hi do

Kabir stamping on his feet

Sourav: Ouch! Saaleee Kutte !

Mr Bhakshi: What?

Kabir : Issne kisiko gaal di ...lagta hai aap ko hi hai sir (With an innocent face)

Sourav : Nehi sir ...aap jaise mahan ko gaali doongi toh ...bache hue baal bhi udd jayege..

Mr Bakshi : Tum logon ka kuch nehi ho sakta! Now get out before I cancel your trip and Sourav! Behave your selves! I'll mark your behavior report !

Nisha rolled her eyes at them .

Nisha ran to the van which was moving, ending up being the last one to catch it. And she stared at the seats panting for her dear life and found Kabir's and Viraj's seat to be empty and of course sh e would be choose would choose Kabir anytime over Viraj.

Nisha moved to Kabirs side and Kabir was busy hearing some songs in his mobile .

Nisha: Hrmmm

Kabir turned to her side raising an eyebrow.

Nisha: Baitne ke liye jaga nehi hai

Kabir : Haan toh?

Nisha(Controlling her anxiety): Toh ...yeh seat do ge?

Kabir: Give me a reason for me to give this seat?

Nisha stared at him: Best friend

Kabir: oh really? Ok fine ...say the magical word

Nisha: What?

Kabir: Please ...bolo come on

Nisha: Kabir seat

Kabir: Nisha ..say please and sit ..Otherwise get somewhere else

Nisha(gritting her teeth): Please

Kabir removed his bag from the seat and Nisha sat there without any options

Sourav to Umesh: Kamaal hai ..these two didn't fight!

Umesh: Can you just shut your CID wala head for some time? It's seriously getting me mad

Sourav: Grrr Damn you ...but I still feel ki Kabir sat alone for her to sit beside him ...

Umesh: did you forget? He likes to sit alone and yeah one- those two things are best friends too

Sourav: don't tell that - yeh log mere best friends bane ke liye layak hi nehi hai !

Umesh: ya right ...tu jaise bada Mahan hai !

Sourav : par inke chemistry ache honge na?

Umesh : CHEMISTRY? (loudly)

Making Nisha, Dolly,Kirti,Kabir to trun behind.

Sourav: Saale, stop shouting like a donkey for such things

Kabir: Kisi ki chemistry? Yaar Sourav - your timing is too dumb ...when you have to study you don't that

Sourav: Tu rende ...dost keh ne layak nehi hai tu ..

Nisha: Sourav? Tujhe kya hogaya hai?

Umesh : Pyaar ...wo bhi iske ghar ki kaam wali se!

Sourav: What? Umesh ...shut up yaar

Kabir: woh Manda aunty? Unke toh 2 bacche hai...matlab tu baap hai? Yew ...I don't want to be uncle ...so you are sourav uncle

Sourav: Uncle toh mein banuga na ...jab pata nehi kitni bache ko baap bano ge tum

Umesh : Beshak!

Nisha: Matlab mein Nisha aunty? Yuck!

Sourav to himself : Aunty nehi Mummy

Nisha: Kya?

Umesh : he was telling ki

Sourav holds his mouth before he could complete

Umesh : hmmm hmmm

Sourav: chup ...aise baatein bahar nehi kehtein

Kabir to Nisha: Lagta hai ..chemistry ke baatein in dono ko leker hua tha ..(giggling with gutter mind)

Nisha hits him with her elbow



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I have doubt - do you guys want to me to continue this like the scripted one like the previous chapters or ..change the them to story with paragraphs and stuff ?

Any ways ...will continue - I don't know when 🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago
scripted one rakho, please😊
Coming to the update, thanks itne baad update karne ke liye🤗
NiBir and Saurav-Umesh convo🤣🤣🤣
Bakshiji mahaan😲😲😲
🤣🤣🤣
continue whenever possible😉
Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res🥳
scripted rakho pla
unres
loved it papa
i love the nibir nirav ans souka banters 😆
poor sourav, he a paying for being best friends to nibir😉

want to know about nisha's past

continue whenever possible
Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
FINALLY
The star dialogue of the update " Kabir to Nisha: Lagta hai ..chemistry ke baatein in dono ko leker hua tha ..(giggling with gutter mind)" 🤣 🤣
I loved it Abi, if this is short I don't mind the update being short just continue it yaar😃
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all thank you so much for updating this 🤗
Coming to update it is Amazing update 👏
Maza aagaya I was laughing all the time 🤣
Scripted rakho 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Scripted one rakho...
The update was nice...
NiBir 's fight was hilarious..
Bechara saurav...kaha phas gaya...
Update the soonest. Plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
you updated I vl dance first
now about the update
hilarious update abi 🤣 🤣
poor saurav 🤣 🤣 har baar bechare ki band bajti h
i love NiBir nok-jhok yaar 🤣 🤣
last bt the best the chemistry dialogue" 🤣 🤣
overall amazing 🤣

P.S. if possible plz plz plz pm me next time 😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz continue and next time a long one plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
scripted one rakho..
n d update was superb..
loved dere convo a lot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally!!!
I was waiting for this
Thank you for the update
Beautifully written😃
Saurav's kabir's N Umesh talks🤣
Very nice
Do continue soon😊

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