Originally posted by: yulin
Sorry for being so late. Was saving it for reading when I had enough time and I'm glad I did. Loved it! Really helps to give me closure for Viraj in the show.
Please don't apologize. Irrespective of when you comment, your comment brings a smile to my face.😊 Thank you. Yes, Viraj does need some sort of closure. The way things are headed, I don't think, rather I don't want Nisha to help him now.
Loved the white lies part and the quote from Dalai Lama. So much to say - so glad to see Viraj moving on strongly - and realise that each situation in life, however bleak it may seem - makes us stronger and makes sense in the larger scheme of things.
Thanks again. Yes, I think that is a major reason for Viraj-Nisha not working out. Viraj is neither good, nor comfortable with lies. Nisha on the other hand can lie with finesse if she thinks it will serve a purpose. Neither are wrong. Yet...
Also, really like your style of writing - the use of language, writing techniques, the newspaper snippets, the poetry - all makes it so much more fulfilling as a story.
Again, thanks.😆 Glad you liked it all. I have a doubt though... by poetry you mean the diary entry right? because I didn't intentionally put in poetry and I just reread my work to figure out which part was poetic.😛 It is a huge compliment if you did find it poetic.❤️
Thanks a lot and please do write more!!