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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think this is the best of all the work pieces I have read! Loved it completely !!
Different of all.. *touched*
Beautiful..
Your work comes from ur heart..
Thank you so much for sharing it with us..❤️
Looking forward to more such beautiful work pieces from u..
Do write it:)
Also waiting for ur other Thread about Ramesh and Laxmi..:))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Taherianforeva

I think this is the best of all the work pieces I have read! Loved it completely !!
Different of all.. *touched*
Beautiful..
Your work comes from ur heart..
Thank you so much for sharing it with us..
Looking forward to more such beautiful work pieces from u..
Do write it:)
Also waiting for ur other Thread about Ramesh and Laxmi..:))



@bold- *faints* really? you liked it that much?😲
So glad you appreciate the non-couple stuff too.😊

Thank you!🤗❤️
Will write whenever possible!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -Saraswati-



@bold- *faints* really? you liked it that much?😲
So glad you appreciate the non-couple stuff too.😊

Thank you!🤗❤️
Will write whenever possible!


Haha.. Don't faint.. We want to read more..
Obviously! I do like the non couple stuff too! Its about the work and how the story touches people.. And you have definitely managed to do it..
And how come I cant like it.. Its about Viraj!!!!
But no on a serious note.. Its superb!
Ya do write whenever you have time.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Taherianforeva Thanks again. ❤️
Well, yes. Viraj is one hell of a character.
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
loved it!!!
a very unique one!!
nailed it perfectly... idont know how many times i have read this one!!
lovely...😛😊
viraj characteriation is awsmmm... n i loved the white lies part...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: shivani_agl

loved it!!!

a very unique one!!
nailed it perfectly... idont know how many times i have read this one!!
lovely...😛😊
viraj characteriation is awsmmm... n i loved the white lies part...😊


Thank you so much!😃
I find it so flattering when people say they find it worth rereading. Thanks. Glad you could relate with the white lies part. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Sorry for being so late. Was saving it for reading when I had enough time and I'm glad I did. Loved it! Really helps to give me closure for Viraj in the show.

Loved the white lies part and the quote from Dalai Lama. So much to say - so glad to see Viraj moving on strongly - and realise that each situation in life, however bleak it may seem - makes us stronger and makes sense in the larger scheme of things.
Also, really like your style of writing - the use of language, writing techniques, the newspaper snippets, the poetry - all makes it so much more fulfilling as a story.
Thanks a lot and please do write more!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: yulin

Sorry for being so late. Was saving it for reading when I had enough time and I'm glad I did. Loved it! Really helps to give me closure for Viraj in the show.

Please don't apologize. Irrespective of when you comment, your comment brings a smile to my face.😊 Thank you. Yes, Viraj does need some sort of closure. The way things are headed, I don't think, rather I don't want Nisha to help him now.

Loved the white lies part and the quote from Dalai Lama. So much to say - so glad to see Viraj moving on strongly - and realise that each situation in life, however bleak it may seem - makes us stronger and makes sense in the larger scheme of things.
Thanks again. Yes, I think that is a major reason for Viraj-Nisha not working out. Viraj is neither good, nor comfortable with lies. Nisha on the other hand can lie with finesse if she thinks it will serve a purpose. Neither are wrong. Yet...
Also, really like your style of writing - the use of language, writing techniques, the newspaper snippets, the poetry - all makes it so much more fulfilling as a story.
Again, thanks.😆 Glad you liked it all. I have a doubt though... by poetry you mean the diary entry right? because I didn't intentionally put in poetry and I just reread my work to figure out which part was poetic.😛 It is a huge compliment if you did find it poetic.❤️
Thanks a lot and please do write more!!



Will definitely write more. (And will look forward to your comments.)😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes, I did mean the diary entry. And I re-read it to discover that its not strictly poetry 😆
But yes, it was very poetic. And hence my reference to poetry. I also like that your writing leaves a lot of room for imagination. Not everything is spelt out. I loved that the progress of time between the first part and the last part was represented by the newspaper articles.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello! So I rarely visit IF and hence missed this. I want you to know that you are an amazing writer. Those newspaper articles, diary entries, postcards, were all works of art. I loved the way you incorporated them in the story. This three shot was phenomenal, and it has left me thirst for more 😛 What ever you write, on whichever character, I'd love to read it. A PM, Scrap, anything works. The titles and the quotes were amazing too. This was like another take on Viraj's life, something the creatives of the show are currently not doing. I loved it. And I want more 😆😛
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