NAUC FF:Quiver ~Ch 6 Pg 18| 19/5~

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Index
Prologue- Scroll down.
Ch 1- Hell hath no fury...|Pg 4






Ch 5 (i)Triggers| Pg 11


Ch 6 Risks|Pg 18
PS- I'm a control-less hypocrite. I'm just dropping in. Will beoff again. I'm still officially on leave from the forum. But 7and a half hour exam sittings leave you unfit for further study, so don't judge. Had to post this. No replies. No regular updates.
Leave your opinion phir bhi. Prologue next post.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue


***
...
He never can cross that mighty top!
He's forced to let the piping drop
And we shall see our children stop!"
When, lo, as they reached the mountain-side,
A wondrous portal opened wide,
As if a cavern was suddenly hollowed;
And the Piper advanced and the children followed,
And when all were in to the very last,
The door in the mountain-side shut fast.
...
-The Pied Piper of Hamelin by Robert Browning
***

Ramesh turned to his side for the fifteenth time that night.

Does Babuji think I have influenced the cousins, that I lured them?

He laughed to himself.
Na. Babuji probably thinks I'm too dumb to "lure". He may not trust my character. But he definitely trusts my incapability.

He shut his eyes. 'Have they eaten?'

Lakshmi placed her hand on his arm. 'Probably.'

Ramesh realised he'd thought the last question aloud. He turned to face Lakshmi. He gave her a sad smile and squeezed her hand.

'You have to relax Ramesh. There's nothing you can do. You didn't flinch while sending Nisha alone... We didn't even know her whereabouts. Then why are you worried now? All the cousins are together. They'll take care of each other.' Lakshmi said, searching his eyes.

Both knew that Ramesh's worry didn't end at the cousins. Yet, some worries were less worrying than others. Ramesh often tried to focus on the lesser.

Lightly he caressed Lakshmi's hair. 'Lakshmi, you always relax me.' He said even as Lakshmi stroked his temple until he fell asleep.



***


Nemichand lay awake staring at the ceiling. He straightened out his legs, hoping to calm himself down. It didn't help.

So they do blame me. I'm the villain. Every single time I erred...They've kept a tally. A single tear rolled down the corner of his eye. I've misjudged. I thought Ramesh would calm down. See my point of view. Show it to them. Perhaps they wouldn't listen even to him. Fear and hatred... I'm not... Not the villain...

He let out a soft sniff.

I'm not your enemy. Please don't abhor me. Please. He squeezed his eyes shut, forcing out the welled up tears.


Saroj took his hand into hers. 'Nothing you can do now. Sleep. Things will get better. Stop trying to control the situation. Let it play out.'

She wiped his tears and patted his arm. 'Sleep.'

***

Though Ramesh was no Pied Piper, he had shown them dreams... Dreams of not being afraid to think. They had dreamt far enough to not back out now. They had tasted freedom.

They knew the rush that living life on one's own terms gave.

No mountain was high enough to make them compromise now.

***


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh shivi tumhe forum me dekh kar to dil khus ho gai the 😃 par sref 7 hours 😔 koi bat nahi bilkul na hone se thorasa hona hi accha hai 😊 and studying is first 🤓
Waiting for apdate

Good luck for your study 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So emotional, pata nahi kaise par iss apdate ne to mujhe rulahi dia 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks.
I'd just like to make a request: if you don't like something/disagree with my POV... Do let me know. Trust me, negative feedback is needed too. Any suggestions... Regarding language/content/ anything! Are more than welcome.

Of course positive feedback will be cherished, too. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one Shivi /.. "they keep a Tally ?"🤣

Best of luck for your exams 👍🏼 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The Prologue containing the NAUC essence ..Oh Ramesh is truly being a subtle incarnate of PIED PIPER and Dadaji's "I m always right" wrong decisions have come back to bite him..Totally looking forward to reading the story to the beautifully written prologue

But in serial , I really dont wish to see Singham becoming so despondent, though he has it coming for him. Karma is afterall a bitch ;)

p.s. I liked that u have named it as NAUC FF :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If I put in a cover/banner what's the specification I should follow? Or is there no rule?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NAUC FF...Wow Shivi! You have got me to read a FF now...😊 Great prologue especially at a time when I am so much into Dadaji Vs Ramesh..😆 Waiting for your updates..😊
And yes...good you mentioned NAUC FF..😆
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Another wonderful beginning. I agree with you that there is nothing more refreshing after a tiresome exam than hanging out in the nauc forum. Continue soon.

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