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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: achirasingh16

So lovely and emotional towards the end...

want to kill this shekhar😡😡
i felt like crying for viraj😭...glad to see his love for nisha
waiting for the next part!!
update soon 😊

Thanks achira...
Will update next part in night...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Nany

Thanks achira...
Will update next part in night...

Will definitely wait...and best of luck!!!
hope nisha jaldi se theek ho jaaye...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Too..emotional...feeling sad for viraj...
Wanna kill that shaker...
Awesome...part...lovely and emotional..niraj moments...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Hello guys...thank you so much for all ur lovely comments ...I m really glad that u like my work...n ya I come here to say sorry...because I m not able to update today...as...just come home after one week so thoda relax kar lu...I will update tomorrow in morning...n I this is my promise... I m sorry for not giving update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello well the second part was emotional and touchy just loved it ps- when can we expect the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Morning toh ho gai...update karo na...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg... plzz viraj ko mr. lonely mat hone dena...he deserves nishu more than anything...

heart wrenching update...
and i am really happy that you r going to continue this ts...really relieved .agar ye yahi khatam ho jata toh meri jaan hi naikal jaati...
plzzz continue ASAP.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Hello,helllo...guys back with update...ufff...last update...going to update in 5 minutes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Viraj:nishaa,nisha...pls come back,pls nisha don't leave me...pls come back nisha...I can't live without u...pls nisha...

Nisha:viraj...viraj ...viraj...open ur eyes...what happen to u...viraj...pls wake up...

N viraj open her eyes...his eyes r all red...n his all body is shaking in unknown fear... His face is all sweaty...

Nisha:viraj...r u OK???pls tell me what happen ??why you are crying...????

Viraj look at her with with shocking expression...n hold her hand...

Viraj:nisha...nisha r u actually here na...u will not leave me na...pls ...u know na I can't imagine my life without u...u know na I m so scared when u r not around me...u know na nishu...he is sobbing very badly...he hold nishu's hand n from other hand he is checking her back n her elbow...he is actually crying like baby...he didn't understand wht to do...but nisha understand wht he is feeling ryt now...she understand everything...n tears start from her eyes...she can feel viraj's pain...she is not able to utter a word...she look at shaking,crying viraj...n she just hug viraj tightly...both r crying now...

Nisha:shhh...viraj no need to cry baby...I m not going anywhere...look at me...I m here...beside you...

I m not going anywhere baby...u don't have to scare...no need to think about that incidents... Forget it like its nightmare...baby pls look at me...look at me...n she make him to look at her...she feel so much pain when she look at his face ...his face is all pale,tears r still there on his chicks...his eyes r blood red...

Nisha:shhh...shhh...no baby...don't cry na...she wipe his tears...n give soft pack on his for head n then on his eyes...shhh...I m here look at me...open ur eyes...pls viraj open ur eyes na baby...for once for me...

Viraj:no...u will leave me...I will not open my eyes...

Nisha:no...I will never leave u...I promise... U didn't trust me...

Viraj(suddenly open his eyes):no...I trust you...I trust you more then my self...

Nisha...I love you,I love you,I m scared what if u leave you...u know that time when u r in hospital na...u r not talking to me na...I m feeling so alone that time...n ...

Nisha:shhh...why u r thinking about that incident that happen 1 year ago...now all that is finished...I m fine now...I m with you...look I m talking with you...I m in ur arms rite now...

Viraj(pull her towards him n make her sit in his lap):promise me u will not leave me...

Nisha(give kiss on his nose):I promise me baby...now leave me I will come back with glass of water...look at ur eyes n its so red...I will be back...

Viraj:no u r not going anywhere...

Nisha:viraj u r to much...aap itne pagal ho gaye ho ke aab to muje bath lene ke liye bhi akele nahi jaane dete ho...u r just to much...

Viraj(pull her towards him):aage bhi akele nahi jane dunga...understand...
Again pull her towards him n they both r so close to each other...their breath is touching each other... Their heart is beating fast...they r lost in each other...viraj give wet kiss on her neck... his hands had moved everywhere making things to go out of their hands. it was viraj who pulled back as he had found his fingers opening her shirts button... which he wasnt planning to do.. running his finger through his hair he took deep breaths...nisha had her eyes closed lips trembling and moist this was the effect she had from his just one kiss. resting her head on his shoulder she slowly opened her eyes only to find Him starring at her ...

Nisha look at him with all love,pation ...

Nisha...he whispered She lifted her eyes and stared at him.. her hands automatically went to his neck as his face came closer to hers and finally took her trembling lips into a warm soft kiss.

Breaking apart for some oxygen .virak rested his forehead on her shoulder...both breathing deeply. you... you are looking so beautiful

Nisha blushed ... her hands dropped from his chest n start to play with his shirts button...viraj smiled wickedly... She is looking so cute...

holding both her hands stopping her from playing with buttons he brought her hands close to his lips as he planted wet kiss on both her hands...

She couldnt take it anymore his slow kisses where making her vision go blur...viraj stop back and look at his wife n impressed by herr overall look ...he smiled...she is wearing her shirt...n she perfectly fit in his shirt...viraj is shocked...she is perfectly fit in his shirt...how can he forget such important thing...
Viraj:shit...nisha...why u didn't stop me yaar...n make her sit comfortablely on bed...u r OK na...u r sitting in same position from long time...its didn't hurt you na...u have to stop me yaar...its not good for you n n baby...doctor say no to do all this ...n its going ur last...

Nisha:virajj...stop giving me lacture viraj...its all happen because of u...u r not leaving me n u start to kissing me n now I m hungry(she said all this things in her super jet speed)

Viraj(rais his eyebrow):nisha u r not going to change...bilkul pahle jaisi ho...kuch nahi badla ...

Nisha:aur badlega bhi nahi...understand...n now pls go n make something...I m hungry...

Viraj:nishu...u n ur food curving...I m going to make something... u rest...

Nisha:OK...noodles banana...

Viraj:nishu its not good for ur health yaar...kitne noodles khaogi...mera baccha bhi ...

Nisha:what u say???

Viraj:hamara baccha...n give her small smile...

Nisha:that's better...now go...

Viraj:yes mem...n leave...

After 5 minutes:

Nisha:viraajjj...viraaaj...

Viraj(come in room):I m coming baby...why u r yelling...u will make full family awake...n he is shock to see nisha in pain...

Viraj:nisha...nisha...baby what happen???

Nisha:viraj its paining to much...I m not able to bear this...I think its a...ahha...

he saw nisha holding her stomach and crying in pain she called out for her mummy...viraj didn't know what do...

Viraj:wait...nishu...I m calling mom...pls wait baby...


Before viraj stepepd outside the room lakshmi come there...n first thing she saw was nisha clutching her stomach and crying in pain...she rushed towards her forgetting about everything... Nisha...nisha kya huaa beta...??

"beta we need to take her to the hospital abhi. " said lakshmi...and as well all viraj carry nisha in his arms and almost run out. making her lay in the back seat he waited for lakshmi to sit with her and te drove off.

On the way he called ramesh with his trembling hands and told ramesh about nisha's labour pain and even told him to bring others to the hospital as well. not waiting to disconnect the phone he just threw it on the seat next to him...

time to time he kept looking back at nisha who was in pain ...nisha... Nisha... plzz baby sirf kuch der.. We r on the way of hospital...nothing will happen to you...he felt his own voice trembling.

he was breaking all the trafic lights and driving like maniac... finally they reached to the hospital the stretcher was already out waiting for them. ramesh already called the hospital about this...

Viraj opened the back door n take nisha in his arms he made her lay on the stretcher...n he didn't leave her hand even for once...n they drew nisha to the labour room...

Viraj is caressing her head time to time... the doctor asked him if he really wanted to stay with his wife while she delivered their baby...n viraj without thinking twice say yes...he will stay there.he had promised her to be with her. he cant lessen her pain but atleast help her go throught it...


Viraj look at nisha n give her assuring smile...n say her by his eyes that he is with her...wht ever happen...he is not going to leave her...n he hold her hand tightly... N nisha's nails dig into his as she pushed their baby with all her strength..viraj feel so much pain...his eyes r most to see nisha in such pain...

Few more mnutes and nisha finally give birth to a baby girl... Viraj had tears in his eyes as he heard their baby's cry...nisha was also crying when the nurse brought the baby towards her she kissed her forehead while viraj...caressed her tinny red cheeks with his finger.

As the nurse took the baby to clean up viraj place a kiss on nisha's forehead n say thank you...n wipe her tear... he gave her a smile which reached till his eyes. his eyes showed a new twinkle today.a glow of becoming a father...

The nurse told viraj to wait outside as they help nisha get ready...

Ramesh:viraj beta...every thing is OK na ..nishu is fine na...and all gangwal family start their own questioning on viraj...

Viraj his finger trembling remembering the touch of his daughters small cheeks...n he hug ramesh...all is worried...but viraj broke into small smile:papa...it's a baby girl...our nishu gave birth to baby girl...I become father...

All r happy...they all r having tears of joy,happiness... They hug each other...all cousins share a group hug with viraj...


As he finished saying this the nurse came and told them that they can meet nisha...n all went inside the room n see nisha is playing with baby...

lakshmi came near nishu and sat beside nisha placing her hand on her forehead... N ramesh also come near them...

Ramesh n lakshmi look at each other with moist eyes...but smile is playing on their face...

Ramesh:look lakshmi...our baby...our nishu give birth to small cutie baby...hamari beti maa ban gayi...

Lakshmi:yaaa...ramesh...n hug him tightly...n they both give flying kiss to nishu...n nishu give them smile...her eyes r moist...

Nisha:you both r hugging eachother ...muje kon huggy dega...n after then they trio share hug...all family comes there...n give hug to nishu...n they play with baby... They r afraid to touch her...they r looking at her in amazement ...like she is delicate doll...she is so preety like her mom...

Kirti:wow...nishu...she is exactly looking like you...she is so beautiful...she is prettier then me...n she touch her tiny hands...baby aapka word robe na me ready karungi...

Sukku:kya kirti tu bhi...kaha nishu jesi dikh ...rahi he...look nose is like viraj jiju...

Jwalu:no...nose is like nishu bro...her eyes r viraj jijs...

Aman:noo...her lips like viraj Bhai...

Umesh:stop it guys...why u r fighting...baby ke mom dad se to pucho koi...

N they all look at viraj n nisha:viraj is there standing in corner...he is looking at nishu n their baby...his eyes r never leaving them...his eyes r moist ...he is overjoyed... But not able to say anything...tears r flowing...n other side nisha is also looking at him...they both r talking with each other without uttering single word...their eyes r talking...

All look at vira n nisha...n understand what he is thinking...ramesh come there n hug him...

Ramesh:beta,go near ur family,go n sit with ur daughter ,with ur wife...they needs you right now...n after then all family member leave to give them some privacy...

Viraj(go near nisha n seat beside her n give her soft kiss on her for head n touch baby's hand by his finger...n suddenly baby start crying... N nisha say him to take baby in his arm...

Viraj is so hesitat to take baby...as she is soft he will hurt her...

Viraj:no nisha...she is so soft...it may hurt her...

Nisha:viraj take her in ur arms...n give baby to him...

And as viraj take her in arms as baby recognizing her father she stopped crying and opened her tinny eyes...starring at her father.. Viraj felt his world feeling with more happiness as he looked at her eyes...awww...her actually like his...all small..small... the same twinkle the same shine...

She had taken her mother's fair skin and her nose is also like her mother...n chin like him...

Viraj holding the baby came n sat beside nisha.

Nisha:her eyes r actually like u...small small n shiney n she smile at him...

Viraj nodded n he keep staring at her baby...n he look at nisha:nisha u give me all happiness...but I can't say how happy I m today...I m feeling like happiest person of the world...now I have everything...my family,my love n my daughter...thank you nishu for giving me all this happiness ...I love you...

Nisha give him smile n say:I love you 2viraj...

Nisha:BTW...ham iska naam kya rakhenge...

Viraj:hamare pyar,hamari chahat ki nishani he ye...so iska naam hoga 'CHAHAT'

N THEY BOTH GIVE SOFT KISSY TO THEIR DAUGHTER...N HUG EACHOTHER...N NOW THEIR FAMILY IS COMPLETE...N BRIGHT FUTURE IS WAITING FOR THEM...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys...updated last chapter of my ts...hope u all like it...uuffgf...finally updated last chapter...thanks for ur lovely comments guys...

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