Broken Promises (Short story)

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Devika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

😭😭😭

A bit too sad for me to handle... but it was beautifully written

Continue soon

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Neethu Raj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

nice start...very emotional update...do continue soon.

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Nisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Confusionn

Understood Then

Beautifully Written

continue Soon

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Nisha❤️

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dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

omg !!😲

this is sad!!😭

cont soon .

i want to know what happens next..

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AnnieSKaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

OMG...this was so emotional...poor viraj...his pain...:(

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AnnieSKaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

OMG...this was so emotional...poor viraj...his pain...:(

Very nicely written...plz update soon..

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Jhhanvi, all I can say is, you just gave me the most weird chills down my spine.
First thing, first- It was so beautifully written. I mean, I was trying to process your thoughts while you wrote this beautiful piece.
I'm so star-struck right now. Every emotion was so beautifully described, and somewhere when I started reading it, I absorbed how it'd end. But to actually read it in black and white, just shook me through and through. My heart actually sank. I could feel the loss, that void, that numbness...
I seriously don't know how to pour it out in words, but it was simply a delight to read. 👏

Edited by fire_whisky - 10 years ago