The Dark Before The Dawn - A Nazar/PiyAnsh FF (Completed) - Page 12

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Yes i am writing fresh stories. Currently am researching for them. When i post it next year in FF you can read them.

Cool! 😎 Can't wait for you to finish them. All the best! 👍🏼

Ps : From your Os i felt passion from you. All your bottled up feelings just exploded on paper. The result was really good. Piansh had depths to them that i didn't even see in the serial.

Thanks! Actually, when I saw Nazar for the first time, even I didn't feel this much passion. Story was crisp and VFX was amazing. But when you have watched the same thing multiple times, you notice things that you hadn't in the first place. Besides, everyone interprets the same story in different ways. Came across some posts on IG pages, some comments in threads and later saw for myself. There was progression in their story and I will always love them considering they are not butchered completely before the show ends.

Cool if u are still active on IF by the time i post I will pm u.

I don't think there is any more scope for Saavi and Piya. As I told Alisha earlier, they have made two different teams altogether. Nishant with PiyAnsh and Naman with Saavi.

Even in the show there is hardly any interaction between them. So I couldn't come up with anything that would include Saavi. Sorry for that!

On the contrary, Ansh's siblings were his first support system. So in a journey of finding himself, he would require the push from the people who had always been there for him. Here Neha fit the bill perfectly.

Don't know much about Gul shows but I used to love Arnav and Anjali. Daljeet portrayed her role brilliantly. They were together till the show ended, right?

I hate it when they show the ML or FL to be the reason of discord between siblings. It's absolutely shallow.

Oh! How are they similar? 😲

As much as I hate Ved, she is not a vamp and she does want Ansh's happiness. Meenu seems like a proper vamp to me.

And isn't Abir the outspoken one? Then how are they similar?

Or have they changed the entire characteristics of the leads of that show?

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Cool if u are still active on IF by the time i post I will pm u.

I may not be active like this after Nazar ends, but you know my Bhatkofying nature. 😆

So PM me once you are done. Can't wait to read your stories. 😊

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I don't think there is any more scope for Saavi and Piya. As I told Alisha earlier, they have made two different teams altogether. Nishant with PiyAnsh and Naman with Saavi.

Even in the show there is hardly any interaction between them. So I couldn't come up with anything that would include Saavi. Sorry for that!

On the contrary, Ansh's siblings were his first support system. So in a journey of finding himself, he would require the push from the people who had always been there for him. Here Neha fit the bill perfectly.

Don't know much about Gul shows but I used to love Arnav and Anjali. Daljeet portrayed her role brilliantly. They were together till the show ended, right?

I hate it when they show the ML or FL to be the reason of discord between siblings. It's absolutely shallow.

Oh! How are they similar? 😲

As much as I hate Ved, she is not a vamp and she does want Ansh's happiness. Meenu seems like a proper vamp to me.

And isn't Abir the outspoken one? Then how are they similar.

Or have they changed the entire characteristics of the leads of that show?

Thanks for telling. It's your story at the end, those angles were interesting. But it's how you see the story.

It's fine. I just said cos even Piya would have liked to discuss with someone or seeing her perspective, hence I mentioned last time..here she seems too good to be true and your love clearly reflects.

Yes, they were super awesome and bond was beautiful. Though at points, Khushi did tarnish that too. But overall, as a whole it was fab and never given up.

I agree with your points, but way it was written, hugely similar. Except Mishti, she also wants his happiness, and the way she controlled the brothers, Ved never controlled Ansh to this limit.

They haven't changed.

I don't know why Madhura, but I feel you are too hung up on my inclination towards Piya's character. 🤔 I like her for her vulnerability. So I am never gonna make her a wonder woman, at least not in my story. And the chapters where I included her, in none of them she was calm or composed. She blasted everyone, fought with Mo, practically squandered Ansh's dream of starting afresh and later moved out with the kids. So where is she too good to be true? Yes, the only good thing she has done so far is to allow Ansh to co-parent the kids. If she hadn't done that, wouldn't that be too cruel on her part?

Besides, she is the type of person who withdraws herself from any equation when she is fed up. She did that on Ganesh Chaturthi too. Let everyone stay together and walked out of the house. So how is this time any different?

About Piya needing someone's counsel, it'll be revealed in the upcoming chapters. But there is a huge difference between her and Ansh. Ansh has always had some support beside him. Be it Ved or AviChai or the siblings or Piya. But Piya has only two people who knows her out and out - Guruma and Ansh. Nishant and Saavi love her but they have never been together for a long time where you truly get to know about someone. Piya got married to Ansh way too early and even during the leap, she was at Bandap with GM. So the dependence she has on this two people and the way they handle her, Nishant or Saavi can't do that. So I didn't plan on including them.

This is something I had written on them. Try reading it if you are free. 😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151759719

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I don't know why Madhura, but I feel you are too hung up on my inclination towards Piya's character. 🤔 I like her for her vulnerability. So I am never gonna make her a wonder woman, at least not in my story. And the chapters where I included her, in none of them she was calm or composed. She blasted everyone, fought with Mo, practically squandered Ansh's dream of starting afresh and later moved out with the kids. So where is she too good to be true? Yes, the only good thing she has done so far is to allow Ansh to co-parent the kids. If she hadn't done that, wouldn't that be too cruel on her part?

Besides, she is the type of person who withdraws herself from any equation when she is fed up. She did that on Ganesh Chaturthi too. Let everyone stay together and walked out of the house. So how is this time any different?

About Piya needing someone's counsel, it'll be revealed in the upcoming chapters. But there is a huge difference between her and Ansh. Ansh has always had some support beside him. Be it Ved or AviChai or the siblings or Piya. But Piya has only two people who knows her out and out - Guruma and Ansh. Nishant and Saavi love her but they have never been together for a long time where you truly get to know about someone. Piya got married to Ansh way too early and even during the leap, she was at Bandap with GM. So the dependence she has on this two people and the way they handle her, Nishant or Saavi can't do that. So I didn't plan on including them.

This is something I had written on them. Try reading it if you are free. 😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151759719

Possibly yes. Thanks for explaining all the points.

Would read it later possibly.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I may not be active like this after Nazar ends, but you know my Bhatkofying nature. 😆

So PM me once you are done. Can't wait to read your stories. 😊

Thanks Nushy. It will be my pleasure

well it will take a year. So if 2021 u are there will pm.

Finally... Internet services back to normal after three days... Uff!!

Anyways, as usual an amazing update... And a special thank you for including Neha... She was one of my favourites among the cousins. So, I really really loved that you included her in your story.

I really liked that you made Neha question Ansh and made him realise everything. And the fact that his main priority has always been Ved's happiness... And I also liked those examples which you gave about Ansh not doing skating because Ved was scared, him giving up football, not learning western music as Ved didn't like that... I really liked these parts.

Now, I can't wait for the next part...

Hello Nikki! I am glad you are fine and back. 🤗

When I included Neha, I knew, you would be the happiest. 😃

I am glad you are liking but at this point I have got stuck. Can't really decide which route to take. Any advice?

Hello Nikki! I am glad you are fine and back. 🤗

Hi Nushy... 🤗

This internet service is still not back to normal... I am highly irritated right now. So many assignments are pending...

Abhi ek hafta poora aisa hi rehne wala hai...

When I included Neha, I knew, you would be the happiest. 😃

Indeed I am the happiest... 😃

Thank you for including her... I really like her. Somehow, she was the one who understood Ansh really well.

And I would have been happier if Rishi too would have been there...

I am glad you are liking but at this point I have got stuck. Can't really decide which route to take. Any advice?

Stuck as in???

Wo baat alag hai ki I can't give that good advice... Yet maybe I might just try...