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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mussu

omg...it was sooo goood yaar..

i cannot explain my feelings..the shaadi part was too awsumm..
i knew ki bohot achcha likhogi tum but itna achcha to maine expect hi nahi kiya tha yaar..
i have become a big fan of u now...
love u mariyam...
aur yeh RS tumhe har roz update karna padega...
update soon..waiting dear...

thanks alot muskan...love you and your comment alot...thanks dear...hugs...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Sohal

Really..Just awesome !!

thanks ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

''The course of true love never did run smooth...''

Part:3

Om said to Deepak:aaj hu hum navya ko apne saath Mumbai le jayein ge...mein ne tickets book karwa lii hain...2 ghante baad ki flight hai haemin nikalna chahiye...chalo navya

Navya picked up the rice in the thallo and threa it behind her as she took step toward the big car standing outside the hall...staring blankly ahead,navya kept scooping up the rice and throwing it behind her...she could feel appy sniffing every now and then,and she knew that she was crying...her heart clenched at that thought but she couldn't bring herself to look at her and comfort her...

She is still in shock that her life was no longer her own...she was going into a stranger house to a house where she wasn't sure she ever going to find her place...

As the rice finished tha thalli was takwn away and her mother let out a sniff as she handed the thallo broke the sight of tears running down her mother's cheecks...

Navya...''meeta said spfty,a hand coming to rest on her arm...navya turned around and her heart broke at the sight of tears running down her mother's cheecks...

''Maa' navya voice broke' as her tears broke lose,and fell past hrt eyes leaving a small trail on her cheecks

Meeta pulled her into a fierce hug and held her tight...she could feel her mother's tears falling on her shoulder and she hugged her back just as tight...

She would no longer to see her mother when she woke up.she would no longer make tea for her maa nad paapa everyday...she would no longer sit beside her mother and help out with chores...she would no longer dance with her mother...

Maa'' navya sobbed,hugging her tightly

Shh'' meeta consoled her rubbing her back...

Navya felt another hand on her shoulder,and she slowly turned to see her paapa standing behind her,with teary eyes

Paapa...navya cried and hug him tightly...one arm came around navya,and the other rested on navya head as he cradled her...

Navya,beta roo mat...deepak whispered as he hugged her fiercely...she could hear him sniffing and saw him wipe his eyes as she broke the hug slowly...

Looking at the side,she saw her daadi standing,tears running down her face...navya went toward her to hug her and daadi enveloped her in her arms...

Betiya mat ro na...daadi said slowly as navya hugged her tightly...daadi kiss on the top of her head and navya slowly broke away frm the hug...

She looked ahead and saw appy,ritz standing next to the car...navya run toward them...and hug them tightly...

I don't want to go...navya whispered...as the tears countined to flow frm her eyaes...

Pagal hogayi hai kya...?? appy said while broking the hug

Tm doono kay bina mein kaise rahun gii...??

Ritz cupped her face...hum bhi nhi reh payein get ere bina...miss you alot

Bhabhi??'' nimisha spoke up frm behind her,resting her head on navya shoulder

Navya looked at nimisha...and saw that nimi had own tears swimming in her eyes

Chalein bhabhi????nimi said hesitantly

Navya looked back at appy and saw that appy wiped the tears on her check,but there were still some in her eyes which she was trying to hold back

Mein...navya said...a few more tears sliipin down frm her face

Jao navya appy,ritz said...smiling at her

Navya started toward the car...the lehnga seemed to weigh and slow her down...and navya didn't mind...the more prolonged this...the later she will start her new life

Glancing over her shoulder,she saw her family standing,tears running down frm their face but still smiling and waving at her...how could she leave them??????

She felt someone hand enclose in hers...and for a second her heart skiiped a beat at the thought that it might be anant...her prince

Looking at the side,she saw nimi standing with her...warmth and a radiant smile on her face.she nodded at navya showing her support and guided her toward the car...

As she approached the car,she realized that anant was already sitting there...

Navya had always dream that when she got married amd was leaving her family...her husband would be at her side...supporting her and provide her with the luv and courage to start her new life...

I m sorry...anant said slowly

Navya asked:kyun???

Mein bahar nhi tha aap kay saath...

Navya:its ok...😭

As the door closed,navya stared out of the window to see her family hugging eachother and crying...navya heart broke into two as the car slowly pulled and took navya away to an unknown future...

Navya stared out the window suring the entire car ride...she was actually aware og the person sitting next to her...now her husband...this was not how she had imagined her new life...however fate had planned something else for her entirely...rather than getting her married to someone she loved,she was getting married in a hurry to a man she hardly knew...she was going to spend rest of her life with this man...

Looking down at her lap,she looked at the mehndi adorning her hands...the colour had darkened and everyone had teased her that her new husbad must loved her alot...but navya knew the truth the mehndi colour was misleading...the marriage was not built on love...finally

They reached Mumbai...

Thank you for amazing comments...they really made my day...thanks for you luv guyz...plz don't forget to press like button and leave your honest comments...

Constructive criticism is more than welcome!

Love you all

Mariyam!😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Yay me first
The update was too good yaar 👏👏 Even i was crying while reading your update 😭 Will be eagerly waiting for your next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Very emotional update :'( mujhe rula diya:'( next update main only anya scenes plz nd me 2nd :-D
Edited by lina19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: jc_2312

Yay me first

The update was too good yaar 👏👏 Even i was crying while reading your update 😭 Will be eagerly waiting for your next update 😊

wow aaj meri jhalli first hai...😆😊 happy...thanks alot yaar love your comment alot...thank you so much...love you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
WONDERFUL one Mariyam.
Very emotional and sentimental scenes on Navya and her family.. felt bad for navya for being departing from her family and moreover d way she got wedded. loved d way u described d rasams n rituals with emotions attached to it between navya and her parents. Felt bad for friends departure.. loved Anant saying "sorry I was not der outside with u."
so Nimmi to console Navya haaan.. so navya predicting and thinking about mehendi and wedding as unadorable.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: lina19

Very emotional update :'( mujhe rula diya:'( next update main only anya scenes plz

thanks lina...yup anya 1st night ahahaahah😆😆 thanks alot yaar...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: rashvin

WONDERFUL one Mariyam.

Very emotional and sentimental scenes on Navya and her family.. felt bad for navya for being departing from her family and moreover d way she got wedded. loved d way u described d rasams n rituals with emotions attached to it between navya and her parents. Felt bad for friends departure.. loved Anant saying "sorry I was not der outside with u."
so Nimmi to console Navya haaan.. so navya predicting and thinking about mehendi and wedding as unadorable.

once again thanks dii for your big wala wounderful comment...just loved it alot...aap ko jitna bhi thanks bolon bohat kaam hai...love you hugs...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Awsum updt meru ji...luvd it luvd the way u described navya's expression...it ws awsum...cont soon...

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