AnYa FF not by me but by my friend Lina updt pg40 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annasweety

Thanks for the nice update Liana:))apni frd ko bhi thank u bolna🤗


the pleasure ws mine dee 🤗 thanks to u for taking out some time to read & comment hv convy ur thanks to my friend she also thanked u for liking her updt 😳


Originally posted by: BEKABOOANYA

wow liana kamal kar dita 👏


kamal to meri friend ka hai who is writting this story im jst sharing wth u guys thanks for liking😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Batool123

beautiful update by babyface👏👏👏 love it to te core 😊


thanks alot on the behalf of baby face glad to knw tht u loved it dear means alot


Originally posted by: rashvin

wonderful update that was..loved corefully


thank u soo soo much dee glad to knw tht u loved it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anya98

Very nice yaar 😊 hope so to see navya's sight to get perfect soon..waiting continue soon


thanks alot for ur lovely comment.. wish for the same 😊 hope she get bck her sight soon dpend on the writter


Originally posted by: anyadiv96

lovely liana...car scene ws ssooo cuuttee...nd anya ke cabin ka scene tho mast tha 😉 continue soon :))




lovely Lina bcos she is the writer of this FF im jst copying it frm FB & pasting here glad to knw tht u liked both the updts dear & i guess u r here after long time??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanking each & every readers & commenters of this FF on the behalf of the MAIN writer
thank u soo much guys for ur lovely comments
your comments are really encouragable for us we r thankful to u for taking out some time of urs to read & comment on this FF
this really means alot to us
As im not the main writer of this FF i really dnt knw whn ll b the next update the writter is busy with her finals still she ll try to updt soon but when & how long it ll take cant say but hope you guys ll b with us when we updt the nxt part
thanks alot for ur cooparation 😊
Edited by -Liana- - 12 years ago
immaria91 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovely scene dear story is going in an interesting way
waiting 4 the next update
plzz update soon
waitinggg
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Posted: 12 years ago

wooww very nice dear

Loved ittt Anya Rockzzz 👍🏼

waiting for the next update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelyanya

wowww lovely scene dear story is going in an interesting way
waiting 4 the next update
plzz update soon
waitinggg


thank u soo soo much for ur lovely comment glad to knw tht u r liking the story line
well as the story is written by my friend i cant give u the assurity of updt but ll ask her to updt soon but at present she is hving xams so mayb after her xams she ll updt only hope u ll understnd
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry to make u wait but as i hv been mentioning again & again im nt the actual writer of this FF so cnt promise to give quick updt xtremely sorry about tht at present she is hving xam so hopefully she ll updt once she is done with her papers hope u ll understnd

Originally posted by: saba12

wooww very nice dear

Loved ittt Anya Rockzzz 👍🏼

waiting for the next update


thank u soo soo much for ur lovely comment glad u liked it :)) sorry to make u guys wait but its nt in my hand as the main writer is hving xams hope u guys ll understnd
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guys so im back with another updt by my friend here is the orginal link of ur FF

http://www.facebook.com/groups/239746092813116/permalink/356043017850089/

First of all I am soo sorry for late update..as liana told u guys..that I am too much busy with my exams that's y not able to update regularly..
Nd thank u sooo much for liking nd appreciating..it means a lottt for me..
Here is the next part…hope u all like it..


18th part:

When water fall on raj"s hand..then raj nd renuka saw each other..
Nd raj said to renuka:tum yaha?
Renuka also said this to raj:raj tum yaha?
Kuch pal ke liye jaise bakt thamsa gya hain..they are only watching each other bt not saying to each other..
On ther side anya was saying to each other..kya renu or raj ik dusere ko jante hain..par kaise? #confusedlook
After some time renuka nd raj back to their reality..then renuka was about to go but raj interrupted nd said to renuka:kya hum thodi der k liye baat karsakte hain?
I mean restaurant pea aye hain toh thodi der ke liye beth toh sakte hian..
But renuka don"t know what to say further..after sometime..she said to raj:ok..
Then raj nd renuka sit on the chair where the table booked..
Raj said to renuka:tum kaisi hu?
Renuka:main thik hu..aur tum kaise hu?
After taking a deep sigh..raj said to renuka:main bhi hu..
Renuka:gharwale kaise hian?
Raj:last year..mom ki death hogayi hain..
Renuka:kaise?..i m sorry raj 😔
Raj:its ok..don"t say sorry..
Then when waiter came nd asked for order,,
Raj orders orange juice nd renuka orders coffee😉
After the waiter left..raj said to renuka:tum aj bhi yaad hian ki mujhe coffee pasand hain..
Renuka also said to raj:tumhe aj bhi yaad hain ki..mujhe orange juice pasand hain..
By saying this they saw each other like that they want to say soo many things to each other but not able to say anything………..
On the other said..anya saw everything silently..
When the waiter came..raj nd renuka back to their reality…….
Then waiter placed the ordered food nd they left..
While drinking coffee..raj was looking renuka..chupke chupke..
On the other side..renuka also watching.. raj but when raj about to see renuka,,she turned other side..
Then after some time..when raj wants to ask a question renuka..
That time renuka stood up..nd said to raj:now I have to go..hope you will understand..
Raj said to renuka:its ok..renuka..bye
Then renuka left..
But raj could not ask the question which he wants to ask renuka..
(it's a suspense)
Raj was sitting on a chair..a flashback came….
It has been a 2 years ago..renuka came a restaurant nd waiting for raj..nd as usual raj was late,,
On the other side renuka was also angry nd sitting on a chair nd not watching on raj..
Then raj came nd said to renuka: I am sorry (holding ears)
Then renuka said to raj:tum humesha aisa kuch karte ho ki main tumse naraz hi nahin ho pati hu by pulling raj"s check..
On the other side..raj:aur tum humesha mujhe maaf kardeti hu..isliye main tumse aur bhi jada pyaar karne lagta hu..by holding renuka"s hand..
Then renuka said to her:ik din aisa aaygi ki main tumse naraz hojayungi tab tum kuch bhi karo..mujhe mana nahin paoge
Raj:wo din main aane nahin dunga..i love u soo much renuka
Renuka:I love u too raj
Now the flashback over..
Nd raj said to himself:wo bakt aaya hain..jab tum mujhse naraz hu renuka…main aj bhi tumse pyaar karta hu..kya tum mujhse pyaar karte hu..kaise tumse puchu..aab tak shayed tomahari shadi bhi ho chuki hogi..
On the other side..anya heard everything which raj told..nd navya said to anant:iska matlab raj hi wo insane hain jisse renu di pyaar karte thi..anant
Then anant said to navya:shayed aj bhi karti hain..
Navya said anant:yeah..
After some time waiter came nd asked for bill..
Then raj give the bill nd tips also to the waiter..
After waiter"s left..raj also left from the restaurant..
After raj"s left,,anya came out from the place whre they were hiding..
Anant:aab humhe chalna chahiye navya..iss pehele raj or renu di ajaye..
Navya:ok..
Then anya left the place..
Now scene shift to the anya"s office..
Navya is walking here nd there nd being restless
On the other side anant said to her:idhar udhar ghumne se kuch nahin hogi navya..
Then navya came nd said to anant:toh main kya karu..di aj bhi raj se pyaar karti hain aur raj ko lagta hain ki di ke shadi hogayi hain..aab kya hoga anant
Then anant hold navya"s hand nd said to her:raj ko lagta hain..par sach toh humhe pata hain na..ki renuka di aj bhi raj se pyaar karti hain aur isliye unhone shadi nahin ki..aur ihi baat raj ko samjhene hain..aur un dono ko ik karna hain..
Navya:kaise hoga anant..mujhe kuch samajh nahin arahi hain..
Anant:tumhe mujh par bharosa hain na?
Navya:khud se bhi jada..
Anant:toh phir tension mat lo saab thik hojaye ga ..samjhi pagalladki?
Navya:ha samajh gaye..
Then navya huged anant nd said to him:I love u anant
Anant:I love u too pagalladki…….


Precap: anya will make a plan..renuka nd raj ko milane ke liye..
Sorry guys if I disappoint..
Waiting for your likes nd comments
Nd silent readers plzzz hit like button
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the nice update:))

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