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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start!!👍🏼..continue pls..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww pooja just Awsome...wonderful update dear 😊 ...i just loved it 😊🤗...continue soon...waiting waiting 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super duper...it ws marvelous...different nd interesting starting...do continue..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u so muchh guys ..m nt frm tamil nadu bt ya i knw its similar of a south indian road film bt hope next u get difference
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely start pls post the other parts too ll b waiting pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the updates, please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
update next part plsss waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Puja want to ask u sumthing...
R e bengali????? Ur story is similar a film in bengali called BOJHE NA SE BOJHE NA...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prizi yess dear.. i know.. i wrote for them who dnt knw d story.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 –

Dip takes her a bus.. Dip takes a sit but Riya didn't sit with him.. she takes a another place..(she try to show that she is enough smart n she scared that a stranger can takes her advantage)

Riya mesmerized Mumbai's beauty window… after10 mins she looked back to see dip..but she realized he is not in bus..she shocked..n shouted..STOPPP THE BUSSS ..i have to leave.. (bus stopped n she leave ) n after that dip came's frm bus.. n bus leave them..

Dip – wat happen ???? now who ??

Riya – tum??? Kaha the???

Dip – what ??? jaha tum they ..bus mein aur kaha ??

Riya- really ? mujhe dikkhayi nehi di toh main utar gayi..

Dip- Oh goddd… who r u ??

Riya- main….

Dip – ssshhh….. enough.. ab jaia main leke jaungi waise chalo.. samjhi ??

Riya- par..

Dip- Shhh…chupp… (riya making innocent face )

Dip stopped a auto..n said to Riya chalo..

Riya – kaha ?

Dip- kya? Arre tumhare didi k ghar..

Riya – nehiii

Dip – what ?

Riya – 1st interview then..

Auto driver - saab jana hai toh bolo mujhe jaana

Dip- haa akele main hi iss dunia mein bekaar hu.. (he seeing Riya)

Dip to Riya – chalooo

Riya – kaha na 1st interview..

Dip – toh waha jane k liye hi chalo yaar..

Riya- auto mein q ? bus mein q nehi ?? main janti hut um meri advantage lena chahte ho na?? bhul jao.. utna easy nehi

Dip- then akeli jao..trust nehi hai toh jao (dip moved..riya scared n shout )

Riya - sunooo (dip stopped)

Dip- wat ?

Riya – ok chalooo

Dip – pakka u trust me ?

Riya – lil lil I cant full just few mins ago we met na ?

Dip – it almost 2 hours..

Riya- its small tym to knw each other..

Dip – what ?

Riya- nothing .. chaloo we getting late..

Riya think all this now.. wat sweet things happen with her 4 months ago..n here dip is in Punjab for his job n more than this he try to find her .. because when he searched her di's house that tym she n her family was not there so he thought they all r in Punjab now.. but in between he failed .. n he coming back to Mumbai..& Riya started her journey Mumbai to Punjab she too failed to find him.. their separe journey started …

Dip started thinks same those sweet things that happen with him 4 months ago…

Dip & Riya in auto going for her interview..office came.. she almost running...n forget her bag

Dip shout- areee bag..Dip running ..caught her..

Dip – your bag..

Riya – haa rakhooo..interview k baad le lungi..

Dip surprised..riya gave interview n she passed..she came out n saw Dip was not there..she shout my baggg..

Watchman – wat happen madam ?

Riya – my bag..d man came with me .. u seen na ? where is he ?

Watchman – he gone..

Riya – n my bag ?

Watchman – may b with him..

Riya – oh no..(she came outside n seen Dip taking tea n her bag with him she run towards him )

Dip – over ? howz interview ?

Watchman came n said to her – yeh hi toh who ladka n she though u escape with her bag hahahha

Dip look at her with pale face

Riya – I m sorry..main kya karti..nayi hu na toh socha..

Dip – kabhi kabhi anjaane k baremein achcha sochna zaroori hai..i knw.. mere city mein bohot aise ladke hai jo advantage lete hai..par m not like that ..

Riya - m sorry.. pakka aage se aisa nehi sochungi..

Dip – trust dil se ata hai zubaan se nehi.. chalo..

They walking..Dip burn a cigarette..

Riya – isi liye kabhi kabhi doubt hota hai..achche log yeh nehi karte ..

Dip – kya ? (Riya showed his cigarette ..he thrown..)

Dip – now ok ?

Riya – yess( both smiling)

Dip drop her di's place..

Dip – is it ur di's house?

Riya – yess..aao andar aao.. u helped me a lot..

Dip - :)

Riya- par agge se itna achcha banna maat, apni ofc chodke doosre ki interview, unhe ghar chod aisa maat karna..itna achcha na banna.. thoda smart bann jana.. ok ?

Dip – (wondering face) ok :)

They moving..bt they backed n seeing each other..they felt something going but they could not understand

Di came n she hugs her n takes her..she looked n sen Dip goes .. after separation they realize they need each other..may be Love happen ..

BUT…the train Dip travelled Punjab to Mumbai & Riya travelled Mumbai to Punjab its both crashed ….

Needed honest comment & honest like for the last part ..Thank you… : )

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