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Posted: 12 years ago
Really excellent updates 😊 I have no words for them 😊
please do update soon 😊
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wow wow wow...atlast anant is going to propose...ws waiting fr this...hope navya to does d same...it ws an awesome update :):):):)
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hi my lovely readers:) srry again for kept u wating and thanks a ton for ur love and supportπŸ˜ƒ


'C'mon bhai atleast give me smile before leaving' Nimmi said trying to light up the atmosphere and then he gave a faded smile and hugged her. Nimmi gestured navya to take care of him to which she accepted through eyes by giving a smile.

Both of them watched her until she disappeared from their eyes and then headed towards the car.

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Chapter- 17

Both of them sit inside the car. Navya looked at Anant who was silently looking ahead.

Navya places her hand on his and asked softly ' Anant, r u ok?

Anant didn't turn to look at her bcoz he knows that he couldn't able to hide his pain from her. 'ya I am fine. ' Anant said weakly.

'Anant meri tarf dekho' Navya said while cupping his face and making him look at her and he just looked at her without saying anything.

'I m ur friend na?' navya .

'Hmmm..' Anant just nodded his head while looking at her.

'Then why r u trying to hide ur pain from me?' Navya.

'Nahi Navya asi koi baat nahi hai .' Anant tried to speak but interfered by Navya ' then y are upset?' First he lowered his eyes and finally he opened his heart in front of her.

'Actually Navya our parents never loved us dey never cared about us and whenever we needed them they were never there for us like they had no responsibilities towards their children. We got that only from our dadi. But then she also left us and I had made myself strong and I never cried in front of anyone even Nimmi too bcoz I knew she can't see me like this but after that I used to spend most of time alone. And u know I never shared this with anyone not even Nimmi too but don't know why today I felt like sharing it with you' Anant said and tears started rolling from his eyes.

Navya noticed that and she can't take this anymore as she had never seen him like that . Her heart urges her to take in her embrace. She quickly placed her hand on his shoulder and said while wiping his tears ' I can understand Anant it's very difficult for you bcoz I know no one can take the place of parents. ' then paused for a while thinking about her parents.

' per tum chinta mat karo ek din tumhe unka pyar zaroor milega just trust in god ' Navya tried to cheer up him and he just gave a faded smile.

'Don't worry I m always with you 'looking deep into his eyes making him calm.

Without realizing he places his hand on hers and nodded his head with smile.

'Waise thanks Anant for sharing ur pain with me' with cute smile.

Navya didn't knew that Anant couldn't resist her sweet smile and looked at her in aww he was totally lost in her. Navya too couldn't able to take her eyes away from him when she found him gaping at her like this. Both of them kept looking at each other for few seconds like the time had stopped for them and then realize they were still holding hands and let go immediately.

Anant :' I think v shud leave now.'

Navya : 'hmmm..'

After 45 minutes both of them reached Anant's home. Dey were about to enter when Anant's cell phone rang and it was Ranbir's call.

Anant: 'Hello Ranbir!! '

Ranbir excitedly :'Hi Anant ! tu kahana hai?'

Anant: 'ghar per..tu bta kuch kam tha?'

Ranbir : 'nahi yaar phone per nahi'

Anant : 'umm..ok then I'll come in 15mintues.'

Ranbir : 'ok then see u per jaldi aana.'

Anant : Bye. Saying this he hangs the call .

'Navya tum chalo mein thodi der mein ata hoon.' Saying this he was about to leave but stopped by Navya.

'Ek minute Anant.' She said and he turned to look at her.

' I think my work is over aur abh mujhe bhi chlana chahiye' Navya said in low voice.

Anant frowned after listening to her words but as the realization dawns upon him that reason of her staying at his home is now over which made him quiet low. He didn't want to end these days so soon. He didn't want to let her go. He wanted to stop her and somewhere he was hurt with her words as he was surprised how can she say like this. He didn't understand what to say now.

'But I can't let her go like this' He thought feeling helpless.

'Kya hua Anant koi problem hai ?' Navya asked him as she noticed forlorn looks on his face bringing him back from his reverie.

'huh..per Navya abhi..mera matlab hai bahut der ho gayi hai..' Anant was to say further as he was expecting her to stay at least today but interrupted by her.

'Woh Anant actually bahut sara kaam pending ho gaya hai toh mein soch rahe thi ghar ja kar complete kar loon' Navya said.

Anant just smiled weakly and Navya noticed that and thought to make him feel better.

Navya smriked ' kya karu tum khud itna kaam dete ho ' and his jaws dropped after listening to her words.

'Acha mein kaam deta hoon ..tumhe hi kaam karney ka itna shok hai ki is ke elava kuch bhi dekhi nahi deta' Anant said angrily while keeping his hands on waist.

'Acha baba sorry . ' Navya said and smiled and he too smiled back.

'Ok Anant abh mein chalti hoon' She said and he smiled slowly and nodded his head in yes. But as she turned to leave Anant stopped him by holding her wrist.

She looked at him and gestured what through eyes.

'Navya !! can I hug u?' Anant said in husky voice and for a moment she was shocked as she didn't expect this from him and looked deep into his eyes and she can see the pain of letting her go.

She nodded her head 'Huh!!' and Anant instantly hugged her tightly like never to let her go away. First she hesitates but then she too hugged him back. He closed his eyes feeling peace in her embrace like he was waiting for this moment only and she too closed her eyes feeling the warmth of his embrace. Both of them forgot the whole of the world around them and lost in each other embrace. She opened her eyes as realization hits her and she whispered 'Anant..'

He slowly opened his eyes and let go of her looking other side feeling embarrassed he was too confused the way his heart felt when he hugged her . He came back from his reverie when his cell phone rang and it was Ranbir call again.

Anant: 'hello '

Ranbir : tu abhi ghar per hi hai?

Anant: bas abhi aa raha hoon saying this he cuts the line.

Anant said in soft voice breaking the trail of her thoughts 'Navya !Thank u so much for everything.'

'Ananttt !! now no more thanks ok' Navya replied .

Annat 'Ok ma'am.' And both of them laughed.

Navya :'Ok bye Anant'

'Acha chalo mein tumhe chod deta..' Anant tried to speak but protested by her.

'nahi tum jao Ranbir tumhari wait kar raha hai'

'R u sure ?' Anant asked and she just smiled and said 'hmmm..don't wrry you go.'

Both of them bid bye and then left.

Anant was trying hard to concentrate on driving but his mind is still thinking about Navya . He don't know what happened to him but whenever he think about her a smile crept on his face but he was sure that she is more than a friend to him. But then shrugging off his thoughts he came out of the car and headed towards ranbir's home.

Ranbir : 'hey Anant !! kaise hai tu? '

Anant:'huh ! m fine'

Ranbir :' tujhe pata hai mein tere kabh se wait kar raha hoon and now i can't keep this to myself' and Anant just looked at him with confused expression.

Ranbir excitedly ' ummm..finally mein ritz ko propose kar diya aur tujhe pata hai us ne hain ker di'

Anant: 'really? congrats'

Ranbir : 'ya ? mein aaj bahut khush hun' and that he tells him how he confessed his feeling to her and how much he was conscious as he didn't know how she'll react but Anant was not listening to single word he was physically there but his mind is still with her and when Ranbir noticed that and asked ' tu kuch sun raha hai?'

Anant :' huh?'

Ranbir : 'Navya ke bare mein soch raha hai na?'

He was still in her thoughts ' ya' and then realized he had been caught .

' nahi actually woh.. mein Lonavala wale project ke bare mein soch raha tha' tried to cover up what he had just said.

Ranbir shaked his head in disbelief 'kaam se kam mujhe se toh juth mat bol...' he tried to speak but interrupted by him.

Anant: 'acha yaar mein chalta hoon muhe kuch kaam hai.. bye'

Ranbir tried to stop him 'yaar abhi toh aaya hai kam se kam dinner toh kar ke ja'

'Nahi yaar phir kabhi ' he replied in low voice.

' Acha chal Bye' Ranbir said and thought hope he realized his feelings towards Navya before it too late.

In few minutes he reaches his home and directly went towards his room. He was still thinking about Navya. After reaching in room he found no one there and then realization dawn him that she left he felt his heart heavy. He never felt so lonely .Then after changing his clothes he laid on his bed. He was missing her badly and he can't deny that. He looks at his cell and thought to call her.

On the other side after reaching her flat Navya was also lost in her thoughts. She was very confused that what she felt was wrong that means Anant considered her as his friend and nothing more or still he couldn't understand his feeling towards her. And how stupid she was that wished Anant would be confessing his love for her today.

As Anant dialled her number he found it's busy. He tried again and again but still it was busy.

'Itne raat ko kis se baat kar rahi hai' he thought while putting it aside. The taking a deep sigh he closed his eyes.

'Anant' when he heard voice he immediately open his eyes and found Navya standing over there wearing her nite dress and her hair were left open and she was looking like an angel.

music

For a moment he was again lost in her beauty but when realization hits him he whispered ' Navya?' He couldn't believe his eyes and a smile crept on his face.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Tum se hi din hota hai

Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

Unknowingly he started moving toward her looking straight in her eyes. When he came close to her she turned to leave but he stopped her by holding her wrist and pulled her towards him. Both lost in each other.

Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Na hai yeh pana

Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Then gently taking her hand in his kissed on it and she lowered her gaze feeling shy. After that he made her twirl around him. Then he came into senses and looked all around no one was there. Then he smiled at his thoughts and hits his hand on his head.

And then thinking about her soon he fall asleep.

Music

Next morning when sun rays falls on his face he slowly opened his eyes. Then smiled thinking about moments spent with her.

But when realization hits him that he had to get ready for office immediately gets up from bed and rushed to take shower.


Aankhon mein ankhne teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhe mein kuch raha hua kya

Anant was getting ready for office and he was buttoning his shirt when he felt someone hand on his shoulder and he turned to look at her and saw Navya there. He smiled when he saw her. She started buttoning his shirt while looking deep in his eyes. Then she adjusted his collar Anant raised his hand to touch her but she patted on his cheek and vanish from there. He looked all around and smile at his thoughts while touching his cheeks.

After that he gets into the car and drove towards office.


Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya

On the way he was still thinking about her. He remembers her cute smile and how innocent she looks when she talks.

Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

After parking the car he came out and started walking towards office but he stopped in his track when someone held his hand and he turn to look and found Navya there smiling and its bring a smile on his face but then he heard car horn and after that when he looked in the direction where he saw her but no one was there and she search her but she was not there. He was shocked tat this time again he was hallucinating her and shakes his head in disbelief.

Shoor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi

Then he entered the office lost in his thoughts with smile and thinking that he had gone mad.

But this time he was listening to his heart not mind.

Music

Anant was sitting in his cabin rested his head on chair with smile when he felt some one standing near to him and he instantly opened his eyes and saw Navya standing there.

Aadha sa wada kabhi
Aadhe se jayada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is trah wafa ka
Chode na chote kabhi
Tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka

He immediately gets up from the chair and looked at her shocked. She raised her eyebrows gesturing him what happened? But he just nodded his head nothing .She smiled and gently kissed on his cheeks. Unknowingly he smiled just then someone shrugged his shoulder.

It was Anant's PA.He opened his eyes in jerk and found him still sitting on chair.

'Kya hua sir aap thek toh hain?'

'Huh..ya kuch kaam tha?' he asked after coming back to reality mentally scolding himself Anant ye office hai just concentrate and shrugged from his weird imaginations.

Then she tells him that there is some problem in Lonavala project and he decided to go there himself. He tried to call Navya but her cell phone is switched off and then goes to her cabin to inform her but she was not there and finally he puts a note in a file kept on her table and thought he'll call her after reaching then left for lonavala.

Mein Tera sharmaya hoon

Jo mein ban paya hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi
Raste miljate hai
Manzile miljati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

In evening he reached there and then talking keys from receptionist headed towards the room.

Anant was standing near the window and it started raining. Then he saw Navya dancing in the rain and he looked at her in happiness. She too looked at him and then tells him to come out.He started walking towards her. She was looking beautiful and reaching near to her he held her by waist and pulled her close to him looking straight into her eyes.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Both of them were looking deep into each other eyes. He noticed some of her strands were coming on her face he gently tucked them behind her ears. Then looking deep into her eyes he said 'I LOVE YOU NAVYA' and then hugged her tightly.

And when realisation hits him he found he was still standing inside the room alone but he was not feeling alone he can feel her presence there. He closed his eyes in happiness and murmured 'I LOVE YOU NAVYA I LOVE YOU'. He still couldn't believe finally he accepted his feeling toward her. He brushes his hair with fingers and smiled.

Then he slowly opened his eyes and after realization he was desperate to hear her voice. So he immediately picked up the phone and then dialled her no. But there was some message network busy and when he asked at reception they told him it's due to bad weather all lines are dead and kept the phone aside in frustration.

Here Navya was too getting angry on him that he could inform her before leaving and even now he didn't call her once.

That's it guys. Its very long na? i just hope u didn't get bore but I know I couldn't able to write it properly and for that jutis and chappal are welcome😊

plz hit like button if u like it and plzz do comments and silent readers atleast hit like button it motivates me a lot..waise guys my likes r decreasing day by day 😭


Luv

Rashi😊


Edited by rashi_anya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipiee...me first...di..such a fantastic chapter it is...bohat dino baat dil khush hogaya...the way anant felt when navya was leaving and then he hugged her and then with the song tumse hi...😳u expressed anant's feelings changing and finally him saying he loves navya...its truely awesome...now the question comes whats up for coming chapter...will be eagerly waiting for it di...πŸ˜›congrats di...ur ff turned 100 pages witht his chapter...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ€—
Edited by .sio.angel. - 12 years ago
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Wow wow wow no words for this update seriously it was soo magical n awsome the way u described each n everythin was just FAB πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by Rano_rock - 12 years ago
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EEEK! Rashi Di I have no words to describe this chapter it was definatly Super se Upar! ❀️ The song the flow of this chapter was just PERFECT! ❀️ The descriptions everything was just perfect it was if it was happening before my eyes! This chapter really made me land into Anya world and every other chapter you have written! This FF has bought back so many memories! Also, congo on your 100 pages!
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOWIII this was just overwhelming update Rashi. sucha dreamy update.. just loved the agony in love and feeling between Anya when seperation hits them away.. awiii Anant feeling Navya's presence everywhere seemed so touchy in love and loved Navya's struggly feel...i was visualising the scenes being deep rooted.. Hope they confess soonπŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by rashvin - 12 years ago
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πŸ‘ it was a lovely one 😊 and thanx for such a long update 😊 cant wait more for anant to finally propose Navya πŸ˜‰
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wooow Just wooow😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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