RS: Hum dil de chuke sanam❤️ (NOTE - Page 28)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Friends 😊

I was having an idea to write an RS for Anya quite from sometime, which i have posted it down here..

Since I am writing something for the first time in my life please forgive me if its not upto the mark..🤔

Will be continuing this if u people really like it.. 😳

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Part I

Navya was sitting arms across her legs & was seeing her anklets lovingly..

She was wearing an light blue salwar & was sittin near the bay window of her aunt's home in mumbai. Her long wavy hair was free flowing in the Autumn breeze, it looked like as though it was waiting to hug the beautiful angel from behind. She was wearing silver jhumkas matching her dress shade which were peeking through the shiny curls...The delicate Anklets she wore were luking silver in color with small grey & brown sparks at few places & few beads hanging under that additional beauty to it..

It was luking very perfect on the even more delicate skin of Navya who was playing with the beads which made small sounds that were very pleasing for her ears. She was wearing jhumkaas & silver bangles a dozen in each wrist which were playing in synch with that.. She loved the effect it made on her & a smile curved on Navya's lips n she lay back on her bed closing her eyes thinkin about her first day out with Anant..

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A month ago... Both Navya & Anant were engaged.. It was an arranged marriage and only yesterday anya were engaged... Anant is living in mumbai and Navya is from Banaras...Usually the engagement happens at Guy's place so Navya has gone to mumbai for the engagement along with her family & is now stayin in her aunt home... Everyone are happy at home coz the function had gone very well..

Anant had got permission from both families for taking Navya out.. So both Navya and Anant were luking forward for it..😉

We could hear Deepak saying to Meetha that Anant wil be home any minute.. Navya who was trying a lot of dresses on her got tensed up hearing them from inside & she was really worried coz none of the salwars were like how she had expected..she was really confused which dress to wear now... Navya was standing in front of the mirror checking with a dress now thinking to herself no yaar this too is not good..

Atlast she decided to wear an green & brown combo salwar.. She did not take much time to get dress up as she always like to look simple..

She got ready & came to the kitchen where Meetha maa & her aunt were preparin sweets for anant coz he is visitin their home for the first time. Her Aunt turned & saw Navya then said to Meetha ma

" I feel like Navya is lookin more beautiful today what do u think Meetha?"

Meetha turned and saw Navya & she found her lovely daughter lookin so beautiful today. She kissed navya on her forhead & said to aunt yes meri pyari beti is always beautiful.. Her aunt made fun saying I thought its the otherway.. Since anant is coming home to take her out nah. isliye.. Navya gets embarrased & hug her aunt..

Just then Deepak cals them sayin anant has come home.. Her aunt instructs navya to go and welcome anant...Navya nods and goes along with Deepak..

As soon as her eyes met the eyes of the guy who was standing just a few feet away from her.. She was awestruck..A feel of vibrant emotions went thro her as the chill wind sent sparks thro her veins after seein his mystic eyes..Navya couldnt take her eyes off for sometime after seeing him.. He was luking so simple in a white formal shirt & a faded blue jean But Navya thought that every girl who look at him will feel the same how she was feeling..he has got an amazing pair of killer eyes ☺️

Deepak asked anant to sit down & everyone welcomed him...They started servin anant wit sweets n stuffs..Navya's aunt her made her sit opposite to anant.. she was feelin quite shy to look up and so was quitely talkin wit her aunt's kids.Her aunt's daughter was askin navya where anant was takin her..Navya replied her sayin no idea as anant had said her it was a surprise...

While talkin she slightly looked up anant & their eyes met again.. anant looked at his watch & then at navi again.. Navya understood that he was askin her whether she was ready & slightly shook her head sayin a yes.. Anant smiled at her and slowly got up to tell all the elders that they will leave for the day..


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OK guys.. this was the first part i had in ma mind... If u all really think its worth i ll continue my writings..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb samu👏continue.. plzz update soon..
Edited by rashi_anya - 13 years ago
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wow ths was amazing n yes ofcourse u shuld continue it, i juz loved it. dnt make us wait more, continue soon..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww beautiful intro of AnYa dear.. I m loving to read AnYa arranged marriage story dear.. wish to see next update dear... do it soon.. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Sam, lovely intro of Navya and loved Navya's reaction n feeling over Anant...beautiful RS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was truly an amazing update👏👏... a very good start indeed!
please do continue soon!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely and nice, plz continue dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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read it only now... that was a cute and sweet rs ,,, loved it a lot. 😊
now update it fast...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz update da nxt part sn itz lovely!
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really this is nice, please continue.

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