~My Life Is Incomplete With U~AnYa(part 2,pg. 4)

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hey guys...this is arushi and for d first time i am trying my hands in writing a one-shot for anya...i don't know whether u all will like or not because i am not so gud in writing.
Navya's POV
i leaned againt the window and looked out.the sky was overcast with heavy black clouds and a high wind began to blow filling the air with dust and dry leaves.very soon it began to rain,the first rain in the year.it came down in large sharp drops and was accompanied by the lightening and thunder which mark a change of season.i thought about him again looking at my cellphone whether to call him or not?will he feel weird if i call him?wat shall i talk to him?these all questions have filled up my mind and i was unable to think anything else.may be i should call ritika...she will surely help me out.i punched ritika's no. on my cell and waited for her to pick up my call.
'hi navya!wassup girl...meri yaad kaise aa gayi' said ritika with a soothing voice
'nai yaar bas asee phone kia tha' i tried to be normal
'kuch toh hua hai...tu thik toh hai na navya?'she asked with concern
'actually ritika mai ye kehna chahti thi ki...mai..an..anant se py...pyaar karti hoo'i said almost stammering.
'kyaaa??sach...i am so happy for u...tune use ye baat batai????'she asked almost screaming with excitement.
'isiliye to tumhe call kiya hai...kya ye usae batana sahi hoga?'i asked nervously
'ofcourse yaar,ase baat dil mei jada time tak nai rakhna chahiye,tu agar jaada pareshan hai toh mai tere ghar aa jao'said ritika with concern
'nai yaar bahar bohut tez baarish ho rahi hai,hum log is baare mei kal baat karenge,okey..bye 'i said.
'okey yaar,chal phir bye'ritika said and i ended the call.
the night was a sleepless night for me.i was changing the sides every now and then and finally the night gets over and a fine mornning came.the sun rays falls on my eyes as maa draw the curtains out.she sat beside me and said-'navya tujhe college nai jaana...chal jaldi uth ja beta'
i open my eyes and said to maa-'haan maa bas abhi fresh hoke aati ho'
and i went to the washroom...
in the college...
i entered inside the college and was walking aimlessly,lost in my own thoughts and i bumped on anant.my eyes grew wider as they met with his chocolate brown eyes.i wanted the time to stop at that moment .his hold was very firm and i was lost in his eyes...
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now u all tell me whether i should continue or not...if u all want me to continue with it then please hit the like button and also comment,then i will write 2-3 more parts of it and then end it😊
regards,
-arushi-
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz continue arushi... I loved it!!
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Very nice story, u should right more. Loved your wirj dear. 👏
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you must continue dear, just loving it.
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Originally posted by: nams100

plz continue arushi... I loved it!!

thanks for liking it.
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Originally posted by: jitiksha

Very nice story, u should right more. Loved your wirj dear. 👏

thanks for liking my one shot...will surely continue
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Originally posted by: piyali237

you must continue dear, just loving it.

hey,thanks for loving it
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Nice Start ...Liked it

Please continue ..
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Originally posted by: Preet078

Nice Start ...Liked it


Please continue ..

hey,thanks for liking it,will continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really amazing
navya lost in anant's eyes ☺️ !!!!
PLZ continue PLZ 😃

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