NAVYA'S SHAYARI CORNER UPDATED Pg No 157

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anisharoy1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

nice one...

after reading this episode becomes more interesting..

keep up the good work..

thanks for pm...

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

as always ur poetry was just awesome...luved it!!

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: anantanant
Manoj - the Navya bits were very touching - I cried when watching the scene and when I read your lines (one tear rolling down my cheek 😭)...

Aaj hum likhenge do shabd dil se

Navya ki dard dekha nahi jaata humse

Anant ne keh to diya "roke pe mat aana"

Asaan nahi tha Navya ko aansoo ko rokpaana

Sheesha jab toot tha hai to sabko dikhayi deta

Dil jab toot tha hai koi awaaz nahi aata

Chahte te hain hum sab Navya ke muskaan laut aana

Dekhna hai aage Anant ka himmat jataana

Jo bhi hoga aage kisko kya pata

TRPs ke sang hai har ek serial ka naata

Chaahe kuch bhi ho ek baat hai pakki

Forum mein sab ne Manoj ke sar pe taaj hai rakkhi

Uske shayari ke bina din hum sab ka adhoora hai

Shayaron ka ustad hai woh, yeh sabka maan-na hai!

ushs u just always amaze me with ur writing skills👏 much much much better than me u can become a good writer 😃

Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Xx_fehmida_xX
Amazin Post!!!! ⭐️

lov all ur post Manoj

keep it up

thnx 4 PM 😊

thanks fehmida (hope thats ur name)

glad u found it good😊

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Bia_Ansari
very nice sweetie !!
well done !!
thank u !!

well thanks a lot bia 😃

i hope u know i m a guy 😳

glad u find it worth ur time🤗

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Gulaalfreak
Wow, loved it! 👍🏼

thanks 😃

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: reena544
wow amazing. thnx for PM

my pleasure😃

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: yaminirajan
Hi Manoj I like these lines
navya ne gharwalon se appy aur ritz ko ghar bulane ki ijazaat LII

bahut dino bad sab jane wali dadi g ki shuru ho gayi NAUTANKII😵

navya ke toote dil ka dard kise ne nahi JANA

akhir parivar se use apna haledil tha CHUPANA😭

parivar aur doston ke khushi mein doond rahi thi Navya apni KHUSHI

par is koshish mein huyi nakaam aakhir thi uske zindagi mein anant ki KAMII 😭

in reading this lines tears came in my eyes,keep going on Manoj👏

aww thats so sweet u must be feeling navya's pain too thats great but not to worry happy days are back

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

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Originally posted by: anisharoy1
nice one...

after reading this episode becomes more interesting..
keep up the good work..

thanks for pm...

thanks anisha well i cant say my post is intresting or not but yes i can confirmly say the episode is definitely interesting😃