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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey arsh soo glad that u r lyking this ff too next part asap hope u keep reading and hey nice profile pic :)
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Hi licy im soo glad that u all are lyking this different navya next part asap hope u keep reading it dear :)
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Part 4...PYAAR KII RAAT...








That night..the guests had started coming in and anant who had still not met navya was busy finding his room in the huge house..😊

he enters into one thinking it was his..just as he stepped in the lights go off..and he finds himself into blackness..as he moved forward he could hear his footsteps...😛

and then he heard her speak😳--Kya ritz..kahan reh gayi thi..idhar aa jaldi!..yeh dorr nahin bandh rahi...ANAnt walked closer and in the moonlight coming in from the nearby window he could see her stand with almost bare back to him and as he reached her silent..lowering his eyes lyk a true gentleman...anant ties up her dorii...😍


Thinking that its ritz navya keeps on blabbering out--DEKHA?!...uss gundey ke bhai ke aatey hii sab kuch bigadd raha hai...SHAADI KAREGA?..WOH bhi mujhse?!...aaney dey dekh kaise ussey hataati hoon raastey se!...😉


ANANT FELT LYK SOMEONE had stabbed him...he found it hard to believe what he had just heard!...😲

Just then the light comes back and navya turns around but before bashing the guy coming to see him...😊

she realises it wasnt ritz but someone else and just as she steps back a little...she loses balance and as she slips...anant catches hold of her just in time...looking into navya's beautiful big eyes...anant found himself lost in them...😛

she looked gorgeous in the blue lehenga...soo simple ...soo sweet...and her innocence seemed to take his breath away...while Navya could feel his strong arms support her...and the warmth in his touch mesmerised her...😳

NAVYA'S last words echo in hir head-- dekh kaise raastey se hataati hoon usey!...ANANT HELPS NAVYA BACK to her feet and glaring hard at her...and without saying a word he leaves from there...and as he walks out of the room...navya finds herself stare at the empty doorway wondering who the guy was?...😲


Later that night when navya was finally sent to meet the person she was supposed to marry...she had found herself all alone in her room once again with the same man whom she had thought to be ritz...and as she saw a certain anger in his eyes she curses herself for calling his brother GUNDAA!...😆
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TRYING NOT TO SHOW HER APOLOGY navya says rather rudely once again TRYING TO MAKE SURE ANANT GOT HER POINT --aap toh sab kuch jaantey hii hai...main aapre shadi nahin karna chahti...kyunki main abhishek se pyar karti honm...aur shadi bhi usi se karoongi!...😲


LISTENIng to the complete truth Anant COULD FEEL SOMETHING BREAK WITHIN HIMSELF!...TRYING not to show his disappointment he says-- pyar karti ho to apne mom dad se kyun nahin kehti?

NAvYA REPLIES bluntly--Tumhe ussey kya?..(changing her mind she says) ..kehne wali thi par mujhe kya pata tha woh mere liye ladka dekh rahey hain! Aaj subah hii pata chala ki aap aa rahey ho woh bhi apni bhabhi ke saath...aap na keh kar chaley jaao...phir abhi khud ayega apne mom dad ke saath...😲



Anant found himself attracted to her honesty and was in awe of how SIMPLE SHE MADE EVERYTHING SOUND! BUT he knew his brother seldom sought No as an answer but this time anant knew he had to settle for a NO!

He looks at navya noticing for the first time how sensous she lonked in the blue attire which complemented her beautiful figure...meeting her eyes he says rather sternly-- Mere BHAU GUNDEY MAWALI NAHIN HAI...WOH GAREEBON KE MASEEHA AUR besaharon ke liye devta hain...aur unka yeh bhai aaj tumse wada karta hai...KII WOH TUMHAREY raastey mein kabhi nahin aayega...👏

WITH that anant had walked away without stopping to hear or even look at navya...😉


*FLASBACK ENDS* and as anant sat getting drenched in the rain he recalls it had been raining when he came back with naku late that night to patil wadi and tonight too it rained...that night there was a strange longing and an unknown feeling in Anant's HEART But TONIGHT...THERE WAS ONLY PAIN AND HURT WHICH WERE SOO FRANK AND EvIdent that anant FEARED AT LOOKING AT eVen his own reflection...😭



Inside...navya stood watching anant from inside...she wanted to call out to him and ask him come back...But like No she found no voice and as she turns around and walks back to the bed...she found the same silence which she often found around herself lately...engulf her heart...


It rains harder and anant was beginning to shiver with cold😕...getting up he begins to walk in...While seeing his dismayed brother from inside...Dutta stood at the window of his room upstairs and taking in a deep breath he too moves out to meet anant in the hall and TALK to him!...



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Edited by am_leo - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part...
thanks for pm..
count soon...
please add the index
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice part...loved it... but sad dat navya loves sum1 else ... hope anant gets his love ... anywaz pls continue soon ... n thanks for pm...take care...love aish...
Edited by aisha_ranbir8 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Glad u lykd it dear oh ya index thanks for remiding wil put it up asap :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice part... luved it :)
a flash back was bit like movie "tanu weds manu" :)
continue soon... thnxs for d pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi anisha glad u lyk it dear next part asap and yup wil make index soon thanks for reminding :)

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