RS: Ek nayi shuruat part 13 (05-08-18) - Page 17

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Does one more or even half roti is such dangerous 😲

Indigestion problems sri..mere ghar mein allow nahi karte..toh yaha apply kardi😆

The scene in the room was so surreal . It gave so many feelings . You have written it so beautifully man ! thankyou❤️Avni standing in the threshold of their room and feeling it does the first time though she had been into the room many times after coming back .

I always wanted to see such a scene , when avni comes back to khanna house for the first time after 10yr leap..but it was rushed due to Sayesha drama

Alll the those unsaid emotions came out as tears . That forehead touch was so magical .

Small things play major role...right?😳

It'ss so a girly thing to arrange the cupboard. Actually I empty the whole cupboard and set it .

same..😆

Lets see what Mowgli has got to say .😆 Bebe ki timing hai uske khoon mei .

Originally posted by: roshni_adiza

our darling neil is back in dis chap w8 all ths kisses😉..zain actually learnt kissing while naamkaran I think..he shud thnk aditi😆..ufff d scenes were soo sooo good ❤️..

Originally posted by: adizafan

wow sanju di👏👏

Mujeh di banadi? Mai abhi bhi bachi hu😳call me sanju😆

sorry for the late reply actually i was busy so story nahi dekhi thi 😭

It's okay yaar...bas padne ke baad comment toh kiya na.. that matters me..and ty foe that😃

but today i read all the parts

all the parts are awesome 😳

you're the best writer😳

Thankyou soo much❤️

and di aapke khuraafati brain mein jo bhi story chal rahi hai please update😳

I will ..i will..😳

I wish aap nk ke writer hote but ab...

Aww.. that's a huge thing! Ty😳😃<3

it's ok

di is chote se bacche ki wish fulfill kar do please update soon 😃

Updated!!

di i'm waiting 😈

love you sanju di❤️

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Sanju this was an awesome update loved it, i was waiting to see avni's reaction upon reaching there room it beautiful and emotional, loving t father son bond😊

Originally posted by: VJ07

waiting for Part 5

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Yay! It's me first.

Congo🥳😆

Itna stretch kar diya ki ab to mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki one week has passed and yeah I am not complaining about cos as I am loving it to the fullest.

Meri writing speed..uff..kya kare.sorry. lucky are the once who find this story late n read all Updates together😆

Finally u have become a professional writer.

Arey nahi😆

Koi ni I am loving it.

❤️

Jab tak stretching ke cost par hume aise nice nice and happy updates milte rahenge I am all in for that.

Kash NK mein issmein se 2 parts tak stretch karlete...nahi?😆

Loved the lovely chat between son , mother and father.

Much need right?😳

And the family scene was much lovable.

Or tum ye kaha gayab ho jati ho time to time.

Sorry cousins aaye hue the ghar pe..and maasi ne phone usage limit kardi😆

I was waiting for ur replies last day but came none.

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice update

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

superb sanju amazing update 👏

oh god such cute family moments making me miss avneil so much more😭😭 but i loved everything about this chapter keep them coming.

much love 🤗