RS: AxN TS: (27-04-2018) part 2 up!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

I guess, this is the first time I have come across your story. My fault because I don't usually read much. Anyways, coming to this story of yours. I really enjoyed the way you have given an insight to Avni's feelings. The inclusion of other characters were well balanced and blended. Nothing forceful.

I like the smarty pants, Samrat here. He reminds me of the sharp minded IPS officer we saw in Neil initially. A great job with his character. Honestly, I feel that Samrat is under utilized in the show. But then again, who is even utilized in the show? (going off track) Sorry about that.

Anyways, The last bits of broken Avni.. this reflects how badly the separation has impacted her. The last ten years were difficult for her too.

I so agree with you perspective about comments and feedbacks. No matter what people comment, it is always cherished by the writers.

Sorry, I am bad with titles. But if I can come up with something, I will let you know 😆

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Kaiina

@Kaina.Ain

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Inaya Ki Chachi

You Back ... yay 🤗

Its fabulous!! You have to write more.

You are an Amazing Writer... Words will not do any justice to your Brilliant and Intense writing.

Please Continue. ... Dear!!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Sanju swagat hai 😃🤗

This was more real . Hanikarak . I was feeling really bad for Avni . Neil's words Pierce my heart very badle that I wonder how can Avni stand without flinching . Whatever she says that I deserve this treatment and etc howncan she stand without a reaction .

Samrat is always smartest and my favourite child of the whole.lot after Mowgli

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Rachna Sharma

@sugar_candy15

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

So I loved this update sanju.

Bye sanju.

Loved reading ur posts...

Will try to come back soon but I want u to know something.

Just keep writing. U r great at it..❤️

Rachna

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Sanjuu how I missed ur RS' !!

So Glad that in btwn u came back to give us this beautiful piece my dear... chala chala nachhindi 🤗

Ilanti scenes chupiste entha Baga untundi show lo... I could imagine all this in front of my eyes...

U know what ? Show lo Avni's pain hasn't been shown clearly and justified her agony till now... Focus is more on Neil's depression.. but you made me connect to Avni and her pain with this heart touching scene...! You did what cvs failed to do...

Awaiting the next one Sanju...

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shopaholic

@XshopaholicX

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Wow! Why cant such brilliant scenes come to hanikarak cvs minds 😭

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Sanju 🤗

That was truely awesome. Ab tumhe to kahin Jane ka irada nahi hai na. Wo kya hai na ki ye Saturday is forum ke liye black day ban gaya. Many trusted members forbid their bye just like that. Now I am thinking kya hoga is forum ka. Just wish it to be a prank so that we could read their posts once more.

Now coming again to the update what to say . This way of avneil milan was what we expected from the show . I know the way they showed the milan was also great but now the completely off route going story line is blurring all those good memories. We all wanted the focus on avneil and less ss to unwanted people just like ur story but what do we got babaji ka thullu.

Ur story is a stress buster for us. At least somewhere we are getting the much needed breather. Thank you very very very much for coming here and posting this . Update soon . And about the title will think about it and tell you when I get any ideas.

Much love

Nidhi.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

This is just beautiful...I love the concept...I'm waiting to see them take steps towards each other and this is a lovely imagining of it. Wonderful job