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Hi guyz this is my ff on Neil's bday
It's Neil bday both Avni and Neil are lying on bed Avni is already in deep sleep while Neil is restless he is curious on how wifey will wish him as it's his first bday with her he wants badly to be pampered by her on his bday
Neil:Avni are you sleeping
Avni: zzz she is in deep sleep Neil thinks is she faking sleep or really sleeping
Then Neil realises she is really in deep sleep he gets bit disappointed that his wifey is so unromantic she didn't wish him at 12
Neil decides not to talk with Avni in the morning for spoiling his mood
Then he sees Avni who is looking cute and innocent in sleep
He desperately wants to cuddle and kiss her but then he reminds himself that he is miffed with wifey so he should control his feelings
He tries hard to sleep and finally dozes off
Morning
Neil wakes up from sleep and his hands subconsciously searches for Avni to cuddle her like every morning
But on not finding her by his side he opens his eyes
Neil calls out Avni and then he looks at the time it's 9 am
He wonders where is wifey and why didn't she wake him up till now and thinks why nobody wished him yet
But then he goes to take bath and get ready
He comes down to dining table for breakfast he sees all are busy chit chatting and eating he sees his wifey serving the breakfast to bebe
He wonders what's wrong with his wifey and now even his family is not botheed to atleast wish him
He says good morning to all and gives a miffed look to Avni
She doesn't show any response she serves him food
Neil being irked stops her from serving him and he is shocked that Avni casually goes and sits next to Swetha and starts eating
Neil realises today all his favourite foods are cooked for breakfast but he has no mood to enjoy them
Then Neil leaves to work and just when getting inside the car he remembers that he forgot his wallet and a important file so he rushes back inside
Avni stops him and gives Neil his wallet and file
Neil angrily snatches it from her and turns to leave Avni finally holds his wrist and stops him
Within a second Avni hugs him and cups his face and wishes him happy birthday hubby
Neil is literally surprised he is happy and miffed that only now she remembers his bday and not at 12 o clock
Neil fakes anger and says thank you finally you remember now
Avni kisses him in his forehead
Neil is again shocked now but he continues to fake anger and says when u have wished me and now what's left so I'm leaving
Avni held him close and kissed his cheeks now this time Neil Khanna was flabbergasted
Avni said sorry for wishing him late
Just Before he could react and speak up to Avni
Bebe and swetha praksh all the three wished him happy bday
He took their blessings and hugged them
Bebe asked him to come home soon they may have a bday party for him in evening
Neil agreed and his eyes were anticipating to spend a moment with wifey
But the family didn't give him a chance so he has to leave but not before winking and blowing a flying kiss to wifey
Avni smiled at his antics
Police station:
Dd and others wished him bday and even had a small cake cutting celebration
Then everyone were busy with their work
In the midst of work Neil's mind and thoughts were filled with Avni he badly want to spend this entire day with her and felt irked that only for him this day seems special had it been forw the same for wifeyy she would have atleast spend some time with him But she showed no interest
He uttered where am I stuck to himself
Dd smiled at his annoyance and desperation
Evening bday party :
Neil invites his colleagues for the party and leaves to home
Neil enters the house and sees the house is decorated with all his favourites Flowers lightings etc..and with his favourite cake
All are dressed up and waiting for him
Bebe: aaja puttar bday boy jaldi se tayaar hoja aur niche party mein aaja SAB wait kar rahe Hein tumhare liye
Neil Is mesmerized seeing Avni in black sheer sari
Avniii:tumharee kapde rakhe hue Hein room mein Tum woh pehenlo
Neil:Avni tum bhi ..
Bebe:oi kya Avni tu Jaa Na usse Kyun dekh Raha Hein aur kya ishaara Mein baatein chal Rahi Hein tum dono ke beech
Neil:kuch nai bebe bas aise hi
Bebe:SAB jaanti hoon mein tu jaa ab late horahahey
Neil:AAP bhi na bebe bas mein yun Gaya aur Yun aaya
Neil gets decked up in white shirt with a black blazer and blue jeans
Neil comes down and everybody wishes him he cuts the cake and feeds Avni first and then the family plays video of Neil's childhood rare and unseen pics on projector
All are happy this is family's gift for Neil on their behalf
Avni comes and stands next to Neil and watches the video with a grin on her face
Avni looks towards Neil when she realises he held her hand and signs what
Neil says nothing and smiles
Avni:I didn't know that my handsome ACP Neil khanna used to be this cute
Neil:woh toh mein hamesha se hoon
Avni:you know what Neil im in love with this chotu SA Neil he is so cute ,hot and naughty than you
Neil:acha toh mein cute hot and naughty nahi hoon ab ?
Avni:Haan tum nahi ho chotu SA Neil ka tarha tum usse copy karne ki try kar rahe ho
Neil:oh hello yeh kya chotu SA Neil ka Jaap Laga Rakha Hein
Tumne tumhare paas itna hot or dashing pati khada hua Hein jiski tumhe koi Khadar nahi
Avni:mein kya karoon Neil yeh video of pics dekh kar mujhe chotu SA Neil par bohot pyaar aarahahey
Neil now seriously gets irked and says then go get married to him
Avni laughed out louder and pulls Neil's nose Which is already red in anger
Ouch says Neil yeh kya bachpana hey Avni
Avni : that's what I'm asking you too Neil seriously you are jealous of yourself aise bhi koi karta hai kya
Neil:I'm not jealous mrs Avni Khanna And why will I be jealous of myself are you mad?
Avniii :acha ok fine I will not annoy you more Kyun ki aaj toh tum bday boy ho Waise ek baat bolun Neil you are still the same old chotu SA Neil
Neil:Avni tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta hain kabhi mujhe khud Apne AAP se bhi jealous hone Ko majboor karde thi ho
Avni:Neil waise yeh saari arrangement party gifts tumhe acha Laga na are you happy?
Neil: finally now your brain started working
Avni:what do you mean?
Neil:you know wifey let me tell frankly yeah I liked how my family and you have organised this party for me and this childhood memories ka video and pics yeh SAB teeke but do you think this will make my bday unforgettable and special,?
Avni:what do you mean Neil bday ke din sabke bday Aisa hi toh manate Hein
Neil:Avni I'm 28 mein koi bacha nahi jiske liye gifts cake wishes party organise karne se khush ho jaye
Avni:toh phir ISS 28 years wale thaanedaar Ko bday kaise hone chahiye??
Neil:ab kya SAB kuch mein hi bolun we are married Avni won't you use your tube light brain wifey
Avni:tube light aur mein ab toh tum khud Apne bday Ko nahi tarike sochkar khud hi manalena akele mein
Neil:Avni yaar..
The video ends and lights on
Everybody plays music and performs for Neil
Neil and Avni are seated Neil tries to touch Avni but she jerks away
Neil:attitude Haan aaj mera bday hai toh mujhe tumse actually naraaz Hona chahiyee ki tumne mere liye kuch nahi Kiya yahan tak ki koi gift bhi nahi diya aur to aur wish bhi Kia toh kab Kia subah ka 11bajae
Avni:Itna SAB kuch meine hi Kia tha gharwali yeh saare ideas meine hi diya tha phir bhi tum complaint kar rahe ho
Neil: tumne mujhe 5 saal ka bacha samja kya
Isiliye tumhe mein tube light bulatha hoon and you prove me right everytime
Avni:bas bohot hogaya mujse tumse koi baat nahi karna hai
Saying this Avni runs away from the party hall
Neil realises that ki Usne kuch zyaada hi bol diya ab wifey Ko manana padega
And searches for Avni everywhere in the house
Then the party gets over Neil doesn't find Avni anywhere he gets worried
Bebe swetha and Neela ask him to go and rest Avni will come
Neil is confused and miffed that Avni never understands him and his feelings
He goes to his room and sees that the room is dark from outside he pushes the door open and finds the whole room decorated with rose petals candles and lightings he feel surprised and sighs in relief seeing Avni but wait he realises that Avni has tried to recreate his half SR that happened in their condo
Avni is seated on the bed in a bridal wear with ghungat
Neil is just flabbergasted he pinches himself to check whether is this a dream or real
He closes the door and goes near to Avni he lifts the ghungat he gets shocked seeing Kareena under the veil he jerks back
Kareena laughs out and gets off the bed and there comes Avni in bridal dress with ghungat Neil is literally shocked and confused and he is like what the hell is happening
Avni and Kareena gives hifi to each other
Avni snaps Neil out of his shock Neil screams what the hell Avni what's going on and you didn't do right by playing prank on me mrs.avni Neil Khanna Saying this Neil comes close to Avniw with a smirk while she moves back And looks at Kareena who says all the best bhaiya -bhabhi and rushes out of the room Slamming the door
Avni moves backward slowly towards the door and finally when she is about to hit the door Neil keeps his hand against her head to stop it from hitting the door
Neil lifts his hand towards Avni's face and she gets nervous and says Neil dekho and suddenly she realises that Neil is locking the door
After locking the door Neil gets too close to Avni that they could feel each other warmth Against their skin
Neil cups her face and kisses her forehead and then cheeks her bridge of nose he kisses her hairline filled with Sindoor
He lifts Avni in his arm and takes to bed
Puts her down gently on bed and removes her ghungat and then her accesories one by one and pecks a kiss everywhere
Avni could not handle his touch she gets weak on her knees
And finally when Neil gets close to capture her lips she says Neil And he asks what wifey don't you dare to break this moment Said Neil in a bit irrated tone
Avnii takes him towards the window and asks him to look at the sky
Neil:wifey Kyun satharahiho mujhe
Avni:look there na Neil please and she closes his eyes with her hand
She slowly takes her hands off allowing Neil to open his eyes
He is stunned to see in the sky With lightings of words
"I love you Neil Khanna"
Happyy birthday
Neil smiles and looks at his wifey and pulls her into hug
Avni:Neil kya hua didn't you liked your surprise ?
Neil :Avni yaar don't say a word I just wanna hug you really very tight
After few minutes they break the hug
Avni:ab Bata bhi dho na Neil did you like all this
Neil:you know what Avni this is the best surprise I ever had in my life And he gets emotional
Avni:Neil Khanna ab itna bhi senti mat Bano aur meri romantic mood aur mohol Ko spoil mat karo
Neil:acha Kahan chupa ke Rakhi thi ISS romantic wala side Ko
Avni:mr Neil khanna ab toh maan teh hona ki jitna tum mujhe tube light and unromantic samaj te ho meinn utni nahi hoon
Neil:well I'm impressed
Saying this Neil pulls her close and picks her in his arms and takes back to bed finally Neil's wish gets fulfilled he kisses Avni with passion And they become one consummating
(Sorry I'm not good at describing consummation scenes but you are free to imagine )
After making out Avni is lying on Neil's chest
Neil cuddles her and kisses her nose
Avni:Neil did you like all this I mean I want to make you feel special I know you wanted to spend time with me but to make all this arrangements and surprise the whole day passed off so I couldn't make it up to you
Neil:Avni are you serious ?you know what this is the best day of my life and best bday in all these 28 years I never thought that my tube light wifey would make my bday this much special by saying I love you in the most unique way and most importantly I never ever thought that we will have our Suhaag raat today on my bday what else could I ask for Avni
Avni:so you liked it ?
Neil:Avni yaar I love it and waise you were not ready to wear ghungat wala SR na then how did you suddenly
Planned all this ?
Avni:mera pati kuch chaahe aur mein usse na Doon aise kaise ho sakta hain
Neil:acha pati pe itna pyar
Avni:Neil I love you
Neil:I love you too wifey to the square of infinity
Waise tum aaj toh mujhe shock pe shock mil rahe Hein irada kya Hein
Avni: MATLAB
Neil:MATLAB I mean I never know ki meri sherni mere liye itna romantic wala andaz mein bday gift degi woh bhi seeing you blushing I just can't believe till now ki whether all this my dream or real
Avni bites his cheek And says sach Hein yeh SAB hubby Sapna nahi
Neil:lo ek aur surprise bhi Dedi chal kya Raha hai tumhara tabiyat toh teek hai na wifey
Avni:shut up Neil and now let's sleep it's already 4am you have to go to work tomorrow
Neil:achas you want me to let you sleepp itne saalon se Wahi toh Karti aarahiho ab aur nahi wifey
Saying this he kisses her lips and they spend the entire night making out
The end
Hope it was not horrible guyz
Please share your valuable comments so that I could improvise my writing skills and imagination too
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