FF Spell chapter one updated

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Capt. Neil Khaurna:

He is Captain in Indian army. He loves his wife & daughter a lot. They are his world. After 4 yrs of marriage he still feels that his wife is hiding something from him. He is still uncomfortable with her friendship with Ali. He at times feels that Ali knows more Ananya than him.

Mrs. Ananya Neil Khaurana:

She is Neil's wife. She loves her family a lot. She is a sweet homely girl. She tends to find ways to avoid conflict. She works in the IT department under Shivaay Oberoi. She mostly works from home so that she can take care of her family. Her mother Neela stays with them. She misses her twin a lot. She has a secret which no one knows. She sometimes wishes to tell it to her husband but is not sure how he will react to it.


Mishti Khaurana:

Daughter of Neil and Ananya

Prakash &Shweta Khaurana:

Loving parents of Neil. They run their own chain of restaurants. They would do anything for Neil, Ananya & Mishti. They miss their kids but they have to stay away for their business. But whenever they meet the kids they spoil them a lot.


Neela Verma:

Mother of Ananya & Avni. Her husband Ashish died while in Army serving the Nation. She loves her children a lot. She brought up her daughters on her own. She is famous jeweller designer. She still can't get over the death of Avni. She takes care of Mishti when Ananya and Neil are out on work.


Avni Verma:

She is twin sister of Ananya Verma. She died under mysterious circumstances. Her murder is still unsolved after 5yrs. She was the outgoing and problem maker of the twins.


ALI:

He is Ananya's best friend. He is a flirt. He had a serious relationship sometime back but they broke up. No one knows about that girl. He used to work with Shivaay but he now runs his own pub in delhi now.


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CHAPTER ONE:

4 years ago:

Captain Neil Khaurana had come back home on Vacation. He was celebrating with his friends at a newly opened pub (Gra Caillte) in Delhi. Suddenly he saw a girl entering the pub. The girl was gorgeous. He couldn't believe that he was finally seeing her again. No one knew that he had seen her earlier last year. She had the most beautiful eyes.

Neil had seen her at his parent's restaurant last year but before he could go and talk to her she had left. He had wanted to meet her so he even started helping his parents at their restaurant till it was time to join his new posting but he never saw her again.

He was on his way to talk to her when he saw her hugging some guy. He felt his heart shatter into a million pieces when he saw that. He went back to his friends but his eyes were following her only till the time she left. He was not listening to his friends which was unlike him. His friends noticed it but didn't comment on it.

When it was time to go the group was surprised that there was no bill. They spoke with the waiter who told then that it was their boss's order. Neil decided to speak with the boss. Neil was shocked to see that the owner was the same guy that girl was hugging.

Owner: hi, I'm Ail. My staff told me that you wanted to speak to me.

Neil: yes. My name is Capt. Neil Khurana. I just wanted to know y there was no bill for us.

ALI: well Neil it is for services rendered.

Neil: but we didn't do anything

ALI: well Capt. You serve the nation and we are a part of the nation. We don't charge our soldiers.

Neil: but we are off duty. And we can't accept it.

ALI: then consider it for the time when you guys were on duty.

Neil: thank you.

ALI: (smiles)no... thank you.

Neil: (smiles, shakes hand)btw your girlfriend is very beautiful.

ALI: (sounding confused)but i don't have a girlfriend

Neil: (surprised) but i think i saw a girl hugging you sometime back.

ALI: ohh you mean the girl from whom you couldn't take the eyes off

Neil: (shying) maybe.

ALI: she is an old friend not my girlfriend

Neil: she looks like a regular here.

ALI: depends on her. If you are free tomorrow I'm having a party here @5 with some of my old friends & family. You are welcome to come with your family.

Neil: (happily at the prospect of meeting that girl) I sure will.

ALI: btw, her name is Ananya. She sure will be there tomorrow.

Ali goes from there.

Neil: so will I... so will I.

THE NEXT DAY:

Gr Caillte:

Neil was waiting for Ananya with his parents. His parents couldn't understand y was Neil so anxious today. It was the first time they had seen Neil like this.

Shweta: do you know y is he behaving like this.

Prakash: no idea. I was about to ask you.

Shweta: no idead. I even asked him. He just shrugged.

Prakash: he will not tell till he is ready.

Shweta: yes. I hope it is about a girl who can become our Daughter-in law.

Prakash: oh ho Shweta. How many times has Neil made us meet his girlfriends... never.

Shweta: & how many times has Neil behaved like this... never. Anyways... i will keep myfingers crossed.

Prakash: btw... i like this place... for a pub.

Shweta: yes it is nice... even the owner Ali looks nice.

Prakash: Shweta are you planning to replace me with Ali

Shweta: (hitting him playfully)stop joking Prakash.

Prakash: (smiling) yes he is a nice boy.

They turn around to see Neil's face turn into a big smile. They saw where he was looking and understood that Shweta's wish had just walked into their lives.

Now whatever you at bae
You can make the whole room stare
But you know that my favorite
Is when you're rocking that desi swag

Ananya walks in with her mom Neela. Shweta recognises Neela as a famous jewellery designer and tells Prakash.

O tenu suit suit karda
O tenu suit suit karda
Suit karda..
Tenu suit suit karda

O ni tu lagdi Punjaban, lagdi patola
Lagge ni tu sareyan ton wakh ni
Tenu suite suite karda

Ali is also looking at Neil & his parents & he gives a smile. He greets both Ananya & Neela. He takes them to meet Neil & his parents.

O ni tu lagdi Punjaban, lagdi patola
Lagge ni tu sareyan ton wakh ni
Tenu suit suit karda
O tenu suit suit karda

Shweta &Prakash get happy when Ananya greets them by touching their feets. Neela is also looking at Neil staring at Ananya & also the way Ananya trying to avoid looking at Neil.

Jhanjaran de shor ne tabayi jehi payi aa
Puchde ne munde dasso kudi kitho aayi aa (x2)

Haye ni bacha bacha phirre (x2)
Phirre bacha bacha tere utte marda
Tenu suit suit karda

Ali takes the older generation away so Neil & Ananya can talk. Neela & Shweta understand what Ali was doing.

Now whatever you at bae
You can make the whole room stare
But you know that my favorite
Is when you're rocking that desi swag

Neil doesn't know what to say to Ananya. Ananya is also feeling shy to talk to Neil. They both start talking at same time.

Ooh you little black dress
You don't do it for me
You know how to impress
Just give it to me

Ali plays the music and asks both of them on the dance floor.

No jeans no dresses no tee's no
My queen she's in a saree yeah
Now keep it desi
Like you're in Delhi

You gotta rap the team shotted
I know the flexing mad as me
You should be checking
Cuz I want to make you my rani
Rock with me

Hey, keep it desi.. Rani oh o..

Neil takes Anany's number & they meet up again.

Black yellow red jaddon paake ni tu nikle
Mundeyan de sinneyan cho dil odon fisle (x2)

The parents know what is going on & decide to meet up to fix their marriage.

Kehno dil wali gal (x2)
Dil wali gal kehno Guru darda
Tainu suite suite karda

Both of them shy but finally say yes to marriage.

O ni tu lagdi Punjaban, lagdi patola
Lagge ni tu sareyan ton wakh ni
Tainu suit suit karda

Now keep it desi
Till you feeling that
That suit.. you look so good
Now keep it desi!

Finally Neil & Ananya get married

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQ763VvqiEM

Edited by AngelsHeaven - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That's a very interesting storyline. Would love to read more!

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