Avneil Drabble: Goodbye (UPDATED AT PG 3)

Hey guys.. i have written a drabble, it was very challenging as i have to convey my idea in approx 100 words.. but it was fun too.. hope you like it..
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In the church, avneel are getting married. Everything is going smooth, so much happiness. But maybe destined is not in their favour. Because when they exchanged rings neel's phone rang and he runs from there leaving avni at the alter.
Avni couldn't take this scene and faints.
Family took her home and doctor came to check her. She told its stress.
Later neel comes. To everyones shock door is locked now. He breaks it to find avni laying on the bed with a bottle in hand and a note on bed that says 'goodbye stay happy with juhi' neel screams 'No'

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How was it.. comment and like..
Should i make it a os or is it good be just a drabble.

Thank you
Love you
Mehak

loveliy update dear pls countiue.

Omg mehak...

But Avni is not that weak to die because of all this..

Originally posted by: kp_yasharan

loveliy update dear pls countiue.

thank you so much dear.. one part more will comes

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice os

thank you so much dear

Originally posted by: avishimishra

Nice OS.please continue

thank you so much dear.. next part is coming

Originally posted by: mehak4

thank you so much dear.. next part is coming

super excited 😊 😊

Originally posted by: jasleenkaur1030

i lv it plz conitue...

thank you so much dear

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Nice drabble pls continue

thank you so much dear