Neil Drabble-Broken Pieces

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Her eyes held pain as she looked at Ayesha Maa's photograph, and it seemed like it was the reflection of my own pain, the pain in my heart when I lost Juhi to the darkness of destiny, to death.
I always believed in letting out our emotions, but seeing Avni stay strong with that passionate pain in her eyes all I wanted to do was to tell her that just like her, even I have lost something dear to my heart.
Avni and I are like broken pieces, who have found their own ways of healing the wounds caused by the destiny.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikhsk

Woowww.nice one shibu

Thanks Shikha😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice. Please continue


Edited by Veenapain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woow very nice lines dear...
It's very suitable for ongoing track...
By tomorrow avni will get to know about juhi.. N
By true sense she will become his strength ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veenapain

Very nice. Please continue



Thanks Veena, but this ends over here😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-

Beautifully written :)

Thanks😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya2202

Woow very nice lines dear...
It's very suitable for ongoing track...
By tomorrow avni will get to know about juhi.. N
By true sense she will become his strength ❤️

Thanks Shreya, hopes it's not Neil's dream though😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So apt and absolutely touching ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavsss

So apt and absolutely touching ❤️

Thanks😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara610

Wow.. Loved it shibuu..😳

Thanks Ritu😳

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