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Posted: 8 years ago

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i'm sorry guys..i know this was sad..but i was thinking about death...not always everyone can have a happy ending...many people..who are in love ...face lot of problems...but what if they face death?...this is the thought that stuck my mind...death can't be end of the love right?...

hum ho na ho...pyaar toh humesha rahega...

so i wrote this...

and i always feel light after i write down what's in my mind...

do i sound like a teen?...nah...i don't know y i go to this dramaic and emotional zone this quickly...sorry..if i sound like some old person giving gyaan..i mean to sound so...

@vihu...

i'm sorry yaar..par ye tumhare letter ka hi asar hai...dekhlo...kitna asar padgaya mujh pe..cuz you wrote that so beautifully...sorry tumhe emotional karne keliye...🤗 and thankyouu😃

@charlottedias05

thankyou soo much dear for liking it...😃

@pri..

sorry for making you cry dear...and thankyouu😃😃...happy one noted!

@MysticRiver...thankyouu😃

@msm98 ...thankyouuu😃...and sorry 😳

@GrilledCheese-...thankyou dear...

@naddiya26 ...

i'm sorry for that...and thanks you😃...y avni?..i don't know..i just wanted to portray what if it was with avneil...i never think it's avneil when i write...i just go with the story...😳

@deepti..

thankyou soo much deepti...😃

and letter were many...like i imagined him writing many letters for avni and keeping it there for her...so it wasn't just one letter...that's y i didn't go in detail with the letters...one of favs..means a lot..thankyouu

@gurveen..

thankyouuu😃...

their love is complete..kahani complete ho na ho...😳

@zenab

thankyou soo much dear..😃...apni dukh se zyada apko ka dukh bardash nahi hota...😳

@ekta...

thankyou soo much dear😃

Edited by _SANJU - 8 years ago