Unexpected love: AshdinFF part 4

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Summary: As avni strives to make a name for herself, a different form of friendship is form between asha n Aaladin. While Ashish blinds with jealousy.



INDEX

Prologue; page 1
Part 1; page 1
Part 2; page 1
Part 3; page 2
Part 4; page 2



Coming soon

  • Asha acts again
  • Neela takes revenge
  • Aladin n Asha become friend's
  • Fathers day event
  • Ashish anger n retaliat
  • Avni first acting scene
  • Car Accident

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Posted: 8 years ago
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prologue



Aladin was rolling the camera it shows asha practicing her lines. While looking confuse. she got up pacing until her door bell ring. Aladin watching her says shes a natural. Avni says " of course crack pot, she's the best. " Avni says cut, and asha walk up to them. She asks how was it. Both parties look at each other and gave her a thumbs up.

Three days ago...


Avni Was sitting on the porch, elbow on her knees while paws on both cheeks. " he's late" she mumbles

Asha cleaning told her to come in and eat lunch. Avni says, crack pot was suppose to be here earlier with the new actress. I hope he didn't bail on me.

Asha told her to at least eat while waiting. Avni sigh " fine"

She walks in and sat down, drinking while watching the time. Asha puts the broom away and was about to walk in when Aladin rides in on his hoverboard singing.

"Love is the definition of you an me,
Oh I love this word,
Lov-" Avni stops him

" enough crack pot. Why we're you late?"

Aladin roll around Asha and and move to Avni. " why do we need a actress when we have one that was born to play the part?"

" who?" She says

Aladin Smile an points at Asha. He move to her and circle around her " you know her emotion, her dialect of head and fashion sense."

" I can't Aladin"

" why, It makes the search easier for us"

" because I gave up on that long ago." She sadly says

Avni says " if mam don't want then we will get someone else..right crack pot" she says stretching his nickname

He pouts before snapping his fingers " I knew she would say that so I made some arrangment "

Both Avni and Asha look at him. Aladin smile and cross his arm. Just then neela came running " w-what happen Aladin? You said it was urgent."

" neela?" They said

Neela looks confuse, Aladin says " the reason I called you is because Avni needs some one to play Asha role, and you are perfect. You understand the characte-"

" Aladin" neela says

" you know her pain and your also motherly towards Avni"

Neela sigh " Aladin, I don't know if I can play the part"

Avni snapping out of it says " neela aunty I think you would do great." Asha staid quiet.

Neela looks at Avni " do you really want me to play the part?"

Avni nod, " then with Asha permission I will"

Both Aladin and Avni cheered and dance at first, but stop when she said with Asha permission. They both look at one another whispering " this is a tough one, will she really allow it?" Aladin says

Avni frown " I don't know"

Neela turn to Asha and ask if she would allow it. She says she doesn't want to take her rights away or her life. Asha cuts her off, " I gave my permission to Avni to make this movie, so whoever she chooses is fine by me."

Neela turn to Avni " I guess that's a yes"

They both cheered and start dancing again. Neela smile, Asha didn't look to happy. Avni stop dancing and look at Aladin " hey crack pot"

" yeah"

" how did you get neela-aunty number?"

Aladin bends down to her level. He hit his hand together and confetti came out. " I work my magic " he says before standing straight and rolling away in his hover while waving.

Avni blink for a few minute before chasing after him, calling him crack pot.

To be continued...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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i was so hoping for an ff on this forum
and on ashaldin for sure
love the proluge
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1



The next day neela asks Asha why she didn't want to play it. She says it will be a good come back for her. And if people see this, they will support Avni even more.she says she has a lot of fan from her movies, she should get them back.

Asha told neel that was in the past. Now she only wants to think of Avni goal an future. Neela took a sip of her tea, thinking. Suddenly Avni came to them. She gave Neela her script and told her if she need help her mom was here Aladin move a chair closer to neela. " or you can always come to me. I don't mind helping you" he says smiling

Avni, sigh and pulls on his ears " no crackpot. If she does it with you, she will become worse. "

Aladin frown " I am a good actor" he says touching his ears

" really?" Avni challanged

Aladin nod. Avn says OK, she turn to neela and ask if neela can do a quick practice with Aladin. Neela hesitate, she says she can't do it. Avni turn to her mom, Asha eyes widen " sorry Avni, I can't"

Avni turn to Aladin " see no one wants to act with you because they don't think you can act."

" Avni!" Asha says

" I'm just making crackpot see "

" THATS not right"

Then will you act with him. " before Asha could decline Avni interrupt " if you say no your just prooving My point "

Asha tense, she realize Avni trapped her. Sighing she agrees. Aladin was happy. Avni gave them a role, saying Asha and Aladin will play a husband and wife at home. Neela was amuse, Aladin says this will be easy.

Neela and Avni move away from the scene. ALADIN told Asha to relax and act natural. Avni says if their ready, Aladin nod.

Scene

Asha was folding clothes when Aladin walks in. He calls Asha name. Asha walk out the bedroom, " Aladin?" Your back already... why?"

Aladin took his shoes off before meeting her " should I have a reason for missing you."

Asha says " no, but this is the third time you came home. What gives?"

Aladin hides a smile, he grabs Asha hand, making her look at him. She froze, Aladin seeing her expression drops her hand. Asha quickly snap out of it, and continue her role. " come with me" he says

Asha walk with him, and they sat on the couch. He was fidging with something in his pocket. Asha continue watching him, asking what's wrong. Aladin says " I-lm...I mean...your just beautiful "

" what?"

Avni watching from the side line says " what's wrong with crackpot?"

Neela smile " you will understand when your older"

Aladin fidge " I get worried that you will leave me"

Asha smile " nothing will happen, I won't ever leave you"

" promise "

" promise"

" is that all Aladin? ".

." No"

Aladin smile, he took a box out and open it.inside was a necklace. It has an arabic word that's says hope. And a moon shape around it. When Asha saw it, she was surprise. Aladin reach and puts it around her neck. Asha could smell his Cologne, it made her feel weird. He move back and admire his work. Asha looks down and touch it.

End scene

Avni frown, she walk to Aladin and separates him from her mom. " what are you doing crackpot." She whispers

Aladin smile " it's call acting "

" our goal is to make her see how good she is. And to make her want to act again. "

" I was doing just that "


Avni told him, not to touch her mom, unless she asks. Aladin says when your acting, you gonna end up touching some how. Theirs no way around it . Asha quickly stood up, and walk to her room. Avni glares at Aladin " see now you made ma upset"

She walk away from Aladin and walk to the door to talk to her mom. Neela says " I don't think Asha ready yet, for your flirting. You should be her friend first."

Meanwhile,

Asha recall what just happen. She tense, she look at herself in the mirror and touch the necklace he gave her. She crack a small smile, before realizing what she was doing. She wonder how Aladin knew she was a Muslim. She says no one knows, not even Avni. She says she will talk to him.

To be continued...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2


Asha while cooking was lost in thought. She top when she heard avni and neela acting. She felt kinda jealous. She watch as Aladin walk to them and sat next to neela, flirting. She remembered yesterday event. Turning away, she touch the necklace and smile. She quickly remove her hand when she heard Aladin voice.

" yes" she turn, half meeting his face.

" I smell something good, what are you making"

" shouldn't you be helping avni with the next scene"

" yes, but do that we need ashish involvement "

Asha staid quiet. Aladin look down to see her wearing the necklace. He smile while on his hoverboard. " you didn't take it of?"

Asha look down " I couldn't, it would be rude to remove it. When someone close gave it "

Aladin smile " were close"

" you get along with avni, she never really had a male figure to encourage her and help her. Ashish tried, but he was never around everyday. Thats why avni always had to be strong. Avni likes you a lot, that's why we are close"

Aladin puts his hand on his chest " I'm honoured then"

Asha staid quiet. Aladin kept looking at her and she felt a little nervous. He move closer to her and she move back hitting the counter. " w-w what are you doing?" She asks

He was so close that Asha could smell his Cologne. He move his hand and reach for her hair. Asha froze. He quickly remove what ever that was on it and showed it to her. Asha sigh with relief. Aladin says " I know my limit, and I wouldn't do anything I'm not suppose to do."

Asha holding the counter looks into his eyes " I know" she whispers

They we're still staring, until they heard avni voice. " what are you doing crackpot, hurry up and come here"

Asha quickly turn around to finish cooking, but realize the food burnt. She quickly turn it off, and grab the handle, but wince when she touch the pot " Asha!" Aladin says getting of his hoverboard.

Asha wince in pain. Aladin quickly grab her hand and direct her to the sink. He told her she shouldn't grab the pot without gloves. She should be more aware. Asha says " I didn't think the handle would be so hot"

Aladin turn the water on and wash her hand with cold water. Asha looks on. He asks for the first aid kit. She directs him, when he found it, he patch up her hand. " all done" he says

" thank you Aladin"

" no problem " , Asha cleared her throat saying she should get back to work. Aladin agrees and left.

The next day of the shooting, neela says she can't do it. She says she can't act like Asha because that's not her story to tell. She put the scriptor down and left . Avni was upset. She told Aladin how they will shoot it now, their behind schedule. Aladin told her not to worry, he will find someone. Avni says it's to late now, she says her dream is shattering . Asha hearing this felt heartbroken. She hesitately says she will do it.

Both head turn to her. Avni walk to her mom " really ma, you sure about this"

" yes, I can't let your dream crush"

Avni happily smile " thank you thank you thank you" she says hugging her

Aladin tried hugging her, but they just gave him their glare.

" OK...OK, I'll hug myself" he says

They laugh at this.


To be Co tinued...

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Part 3


Present


After many shooting the movie was completed. Avni asks Aladin what's the next step. Aladin says if the advertisement went well then many people will show up for the movie. Avni yawns, Aladin starts editing the videos to burn a copy. Asha gives him tea before sitting down. " your helping Avni a lot, making her dream come true. Thank you Aladin"

" it's no trouble. Avni is a good kid, I can see her fire and determination to spread her name to the world."

Asha smile while looking at Avni who was now, sleeping on the small couch. Aladin edit the videos and burn the cd. Asha looks at the time, " it's past your stay"

" give me a second it's almost done"

When he finish he quickly drank the hot tea. He scream when it burn his mouth. Asha quickly puts her cup down and walk to his side of the couch. " Aladin, are you OK?" She asks concern while touching his shoulder.

" yeah, I guess I drank to fas-" he never finish when he realize how close they we're. Asha beautiful eyes widen at The closeness. She stumbles for word, but Aladin beat her to it " yours eyes so beautiful , I can look at it for years an I still won't get tired of it." Asha looks down, before moving back.

The room was silent. Aaladin quickly says " isn't that a good line for ashish to use. I mean that would have been great for the movie." He laughs

Asha staid quiet, Avni while sleeping says " crackpot stop flirting with my mom" , they both look at her before Asha starts giggling while Aladin pouts like a kid.

" I should go" he says

Asha look at his shirt " are you gonna be fine with the tea stain?"

Aladin look down " yeah, don't worry I have a spare"

He stood up and thank Asha for a nice day, before leaving. Asha release the breath she didn't know she was holding, before closing the door.

The next day the movie was to release, neela came to wish Avni luck, but Avni ignored her an told her she doesn't need luck from her and that she will only bring bad luck to her. Neela look hurt, she says " I know you won't forgive me, but i hope you will understand some day"

Angie told Avni , she shouldn't blame her for what happen. She says remember you told her you guys we're happy without ashish. So why blame her for marrying her papa. She says she doesn't think Neela would betray her an for her to at least let Neela explain.

Avni snap at Angie and asks her whose side she's on. She says f she's gonna be Neela support then for her to leave. Angie frown, and staid quiet. Fatima says where's Aladin. She says he was suppose to be here five minutes ago. Asha tries calling him, but he didn't pick up.

The men calls Avni, and asks to introduce herself. Avni grab the mic nervously. She stumble for words. She look among the crowd to see days at the very back smirking and her father giving her a thumbs up. Avni says in head where are you Aladin.

Elsewhere,


Aladin had bag full of money while leaving. He remember what happen that night.

Flashback

While walking away daya stops him. " your Aladin?"

" the one an only"

" I want to make a deal with you"

Aladin looks worry " what kind of deal"

Daya says " I will give you any amount you need for the disk an laptop. Now Aladin was interested. " how much are we talking? "

Daya shows the check, and Aladin eyes widen. " fine here you go" he says

Daya smile while thinking Avni won't know what hits her. Aladin on the other hand was happy.

End of flashback


While his taxi stop. Aladin saw kids running while laughing. He remisc Avni and their time together. Guilt was starting to get to him. He thought about Asha and how she made him feel welcome.

Elsewhere,

Avni took a deep breath an talk " hi, I'm Avni. Many people know me as the girl with no sir name. They judge an bully my family, but why does a child have to have a last name. Having a last name does not characterize who you are, or make you any less of a human. I'm still avni. my mother worked hard to raise me, even without a father. She did what a father could do and she still continue to support me. Thats why I'm proud to have her name Asha Avni, with her support I will shine."

She smile at her mom " people only see a girl with no father, a women with a child. They always blame the women an think negatively, but once you watch my movie, our story. Your thinking will change." " so now I present to you naamkarann"

Avni put the mic down, and walk of the stage. Asha hugs her. " you did good"

Avni asks about Aladin, Fatima shook her head. The men on stage came to them telling them theirs no disk. The family was shock. " I thought Aladin sent it to you"

" no, I didn't get anything "

The family was tense, Fatima curse, she says what if he betrayed them. Avni didn't want to think that. Asha says not to get to conclusion. Fatima says she warn them, but they didn't listen, now look he played them. She says I wouldn't be surprise if he was working for Daya all along.

Avni glares at her " crackpot wouldn't do that"

" and how would you know, if you haven't forgotten he came out of know where. We also know nothing about him" she says

" I'm hurt you think that way about me"

They all turn to see Aladin with some bags and a new laptop. Avni sigh with relief " what took so long crackpot?"

Aladin smile " I had some business To handle ."

" thank God your here" Asha says

The men told Aladin if he has the disk. He show it. He quickly ran on stage to play it. Daya smile soon turn to a frown when he saw the men playing the movie. She says how did this happen, she says Aladin played her, an she will get him back.

Aladin was happy he sent a copy to his email. All he had to do was buy a new laptop, set up his things and he burn the disk. Avni seeing his phone vibrate tells him. He grab his phone and check his statues. " no way!!" He says

" what?" They all said

" Avni your movie is a hit?"

Avni was now confuse " how?"

" I put it on YouTube, and it has millions of people watching. Some agencies commented too. "

" wow"

Fatimah says " I knew she could do it" she hugs Avni out of excitment. Everyone was so happy, Aladin hugs Asha " we did it" he says

Asha eyes widen, Aladin quickly remove himself once realize what he was doing. Asha blush, Aladin stretch his hand. " now that Avni movie a hit, how about we become friends "

Asha thought about it before smiling " friends " she says holding his hand.

To be continued...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was a cute update. please post the next update soon. I cant wait
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Part 4



Asha wakes up to get the day started. She head to the bathroom only to see it locked . Confused she shook the handle " what's this? Who could be in there so early, is it nanno?" She mumbles

She knock , but the door was still not open. " Nanno?...Nanno open up I have to get ready." She look at the time an panicked, I have to pray before avni wakes up, she thought.

" Nanno please open"

While knocking she didn't notice Fatima coming behind her an tapping her shoulder. " What's wrong, why are you shouting for me so early"

Asha was now confuse " I thought you were in there?"

Fatima says " I was ironing my clothes"

" Then whose in the bathroom?"

Fatima with her uncaring expression says " probably tiku"

Just then tiku came out of his room sleeply , both women look at one another . Tiku asks if something's wrong, now asha was worried. " Excuse me, w-who ever is in there better c-come oout , or we will call the police" she says scared .

Fatima says it could be a ghost. Tiku starts to shake.Asha says she will count to three an if the person doesn't come out then she will dial. " 1" she says pausing

" 2"

Fatima was feeling anxious, " maybe we should let the ghost stay in there"

" 3"

Suddenly the door open , all they could see is fog. Suddenly a person step out. " Tum!?" They said

Aladdin crack a smile " hi" he says

Fatima not scared anymore was drooling. Asha back was quickly turned, but her cheeks were tainted pink. Their standing before them was Aladdin with a towel wrapped around his torso, he had on a pink shower cap an a sponge. " Aladdin who told you to use our bathroom!?" Asha says


" I didn't have anywhere else"

When he said this Fatima sympathise with him.

" You can come anytime to take a shower"

Hearing this asha frown " no you can't" she says turning only to turn back around seeing Aladdin undressed. " Tiku please take him out"

Tiku noded an grab Aladdin,the whole time he kept protesting, but no one listened..Well not asha. The door was soon slammed in his face. He bang on the door saying he can't dress out here. He was unaware of the attention on him. Some people started laughing at him, while others made jokes. Aladdin embarrassed said hi to them.


After Aladdin left asha was fuming. Fatima asks why she's turning red. Asha touch her face eyes widen before shaking her head to get the image out of her head. " I'm going to go pray" she stuttered


Elsewhere,

Dayavanti was pacing back an forth, thinking. Ketan told her he can handle Aladdin. Dayavanti shook her head " because of avni an that trickster my respect has been tarnished. We won't do it the crook way anymore. We will have to fight legally "

" How will we do that?"

Dayavanti smile before telling him. While they were in their room neela was getting dressed. Hermant frown " do you really want to do this?"

" Yes, dayavanti ruined our life. Since she wanted me as her daughter in law I will show her how much authority I have."

" But will Ashish go along with it?"

" We've been friends for years, he will understand "

" OK if you say so" he says

Neela an her father came down. She started breakfast, by the time she was done ketan an dayavanti came down. " Neela what are you doing?"

" I decided to cook"

" Why? You know we have servants for that"

" I send the cook home"

Dayavanti an ketan look at one another . Ketan asks if she can cook , daya says I'm sure she can.

Neela calls Ashish, he says he wasn't hungry. Neela says he can lie to others but not her. She walk up the stairs an enter his room. " Ashish?"

" Go away neela"

" We've been friends for years, not once did you ever upset me. But you pushing me away, is breaking our friendship."

" It's been broken since you married me"

Neela frown " both of us couldn't get out of the situation. You can't blame me for this"

Ashish sigh " your right, I'm sorry. I'm just frustrated with the situation. Asha is gone from my reach, an avni hates me"

" We will make everything better, it just takes time. Now please come an eat, your getting too skinny"

Ashish, nod. When everyone was seated. Neela gave them food. Dayavanti compliment her food after seeing it. She made a lot of dish. Hermant says " my neela is a really good cook"

NeelA smile an told them to eat. Once dayavanti an ketan took a bite, they quickly started coughing. Dayavanti grab her water while ketan wipe his mouth. Dayavanti look at hermant and Ashish who were still eating. She says in head neela cooking is to spicy, how can they tolerate it.

Neela asks dayavanti if everything was fine. She nod, even though her mouth was on fire. Neela says since she's the bahu of the house she will cook everyday now. Dayavanti frown, ketan mumbles we will die by then.

" Neela, it's fine we have cooks"

" It's my right daya, don't you like my cooking?" She asks

Daya looking at hermant nod " it's delicious"

Neela smile " then eat some more" she says

Ketan almost choked , but daya signal him to eat which he did.

To be continued...


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