Behir ff- Humsafar

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Here is the story. It's my first time in writing so agar koi mistake ho to bta Dena😆😆

By mistake bela confess her love to infort of mahir and whole family members...
After the confession mahir goes from their in his Bela try to talk to him but mahir is not in mood to listen her
Mahir goes from the house in anger
Bela starts crying then she go behind to mahir but mahir is already gone from there in his car...
Bela collapse there on the floor and start crying badly

Here...Mahir drive his car very fastly in anger..He is continually crying and remembering the sweet moments between him nd bela... Their kiss, fight, care

Bela try to call mahir but his phone is switch off
She is really worried for him now
Bela goes to vish to talk to her
Bela- vish tumne to Yuvi Ko mar diya tha Na to fir ye Kon h or yahan kyu aaya hai
Vish- Bela main bhi yhi soch rhi hu..Yuvi mar Chuka h ye Yuvi nhi h sayad uski roop me koi or Dushman hai
Tum fikr mat Kro main pta lgane ki kosis krti hu ki aakhir ye Kon hai
Bela - Lekin vish apna Dhyan rakhna tum ye bahut khatrnak ho sakta hai... Or haan main Abhi mahir ji Ko dhundne ke liye Jaa rhi hu wo bahut gusse main Ghar se nikal kr gye hai..Mujhe unki bahut fikr ho Rahi hai...
Then Bela goes into the jungle to find mahir
Bela cliff ki taraf jati h wahan use mahir ki car dikhayi deti hai
Bela start crying and start thinking about mahir
Bela- nahi mahir g Ko kuch nhi ho sakta hai..Main unko kuch nhi hone dungi
Bela close her eyes and try to see that wat happen with mahir ..Then she sees that mahir fall from the cliff
Bela turn into her snake form and go down in cliff to search mahir
Achanak se Bela ka pair slip ho jata hai and she fall Bela try to catch same thing
Here mahir is hanging in the cliff with the help of a branch
Bela bhi usi branch Ko pakad leti hai
Bela is happy to see mahir safe
Bela- mahir ji aap theek hai... Main kab se aapko phone karne ki kosis kar Rahi hu aapko pta hai main kitna pareshan ho gayi thi aapke liye
Mahir- Bela mere samne ye sab dikhawa krne ki koi jrurt nahi.. ye sab natak mat Kro meri care krne ka...Or tum yahan aayi hi kyu ho
Bela- mahir g meri bat samjhne ki kosis kijiye aap Jo Apache rhe hai waisa kuch bhi nahi hai..Aapko galatfahmi Hui h mahir g
Mahir- galatfahmi kaisi galatfahmi Bela..Mujhe koi galatfahmi nahi Hui hai balki mujhe to pta chala h ki ab tak main galatfahmi me jee rha tha ki sayad tum bhi mujhse pyaar krne lag jao Lekin nhi tum to Apne pyaar Apne Yuvi ka wait kar Rahi thi na..
Bela- nahi mahir g Aisa kuch nhi hai aap meri puri bat to suniye Plzzz
Mahir- mujhe tumhari koi bat nahi Sunni hai
Bela- aapko Sunna padega chahe aapki marzi ho ya na ho maine wahan Jo kuch bhi kha wo sab Sacha tha ek ek word mere Dil se Nikla tha Lekin wo confession Yuvi ke liye nahi balki aapke liye tha mahir ji...Haan mahir g main aapse pyaar Karti hoon sirf aapse mujh par sirf aapka hak hai, aapki Bela sirf aapki hi hai mahir g or hamesha aapki hi rahegi...
Mahir is totally shocked by hearing this that the love confession only for him and he misunderstend her...
Mahir- Bela ye tum kya keh rahi ho wo confession mere liye tha
Bela- g mahir g wo confession aapke liye tha mujhe to pta bhi nahi tha ki wahan Yuvi khada hai..Muje Laga wahan aap ho us black suit mai...Isliye maine galti se wo sab Yuvi Ko bol diya
Mahir- am really sorry bela.. maine tum par itna gussa Kiya ek bar bhi tumhari puri bat nahi Sunni maine
Pta nahi gusse main tumhe kitna kuch keh diya am sorry
Bela - nahi mahir g aap sorry mat kahiye galti meri bhi thi mujhe bhi dekha chahiye thi ki wahan aap hi ho koi or to nahi khada h maine bhi Bina dekhe hi bol diya am sorry mahir g meri wajah se aapko itna hurt hua or aapko chot bhi lag gyi
Mahir- nahi Bela tum sorry mat bolo am happy ki tumne finally Apne Dil ki bat suni
They share an eyelock
Mahir- waise Bela yad hai us din hamari third anniversary PR maine tumko ek favour diya tha tumne mujhe Abhi tak wo wapas nhi Kiya hai..
Bela remember the kiss scene and shyly looks down and then she remember ke wo log ek cliff main latak rahe hai suddenly she shout with fear..
Mahir- Bela kya hua...bela tum theek to ho na Tum aise chilyi kyu
Bela - mahir g niche dekhiye ham cillf me latak rhe hai..
Ab hum yahan se bahar kaise jayenge...
Mahir- main to bhul hi gya tha iske bare main to Lekin ab mujhe agar kuch ho bhi jaye to mujhe koi gam nhi hai kyunki mai Jan gya hoon ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar krti ho
Bela- nahi mahir g aapko kuch bhi nhi Hoga...Plzz aise baatein mat kijiye aap main aapke sath jeena chahti hu
Hamare risthe ki ek nayi shuruat karna chahti hoon
Suddenly the branch broke down and mahir and Bela fall down
Mahir quickly grab Bela her waist
( BM plays- sun mere Humsafar kya tujhe itni si hai khabar ke teri saansein chalti jidhar rahooga bas Wahi Umar bhar...)




So gysss that's it for now
Agar aap sab Ko story pasand aaye to plzz cmnt and like then I'll think to continue this

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Liked it
Res for now
Do contiune
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hope you guys liked it...
Fingers crossed
Waiting for your thoughts about my story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Liked it

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Thanks Shweta
Am glad that u liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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its superb plz continue.
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It's really nice. Do continue.👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Here is part -2
When mahir and Bela fall from cliff both of them land into a river. mahir and Bela come out of river...
Bela- mahir g mausam bahut kharab ho rha hai or hum yahan se wapas nhi ja sakte Abhi cliff bahut upar hai...
Hame yahi par rukne ke liye kuch dekhna Hoga
Mahir- haa Bela aao chalo...
Both of them go from there...Then Bela saw a old house there...
Bela- mahir g dekhiye lagta hai wahan par ghar hai sayad hame kuch help mil jaye..
Mahir- hmmm...chalo Chalke dekhte hai
Mahir nd Bela goes into the house but noone is there in the house
Bela- mahir g yahan to koi bhi nahi hai...
Mahir- are Bela ham hai to sahi yahan PR Abhi
Bela- has PR mahir g yahan hmare alwa or koi nhi hai...Ham akele hai yahan to...
Mahir- Bela tum kya chahti ho to main sabhi ghar walo ko bhi yahan bula loon(in a teasing way)...Tumhe mere sath akele nahi rahna hai yahan to bta do main bula loonga maa or baki sab Ko
Bela- nahi mahir g main wo nhi keh rhi thi...Mujhe koi prob nhi h yahan aapke sath...
Mahir come close to Bela and hold her by her waist..Pull her closer to himself
Now Bela and mahir really close to each other...They could feel eachother heartbeat... Mahir want to kiss her...
Bela- mahir g ye kya kar rhe hai aap...Koi AA jayega to.. kisi ne dekh Liya to...
Mahir- Bela yahan hamare alawa or koi nhi hai or ye jungle hai hamara ghar nhi Jo koi aa jayega...
Bela looks down shyly...Mahir looked at her lovingly then make her look in his eyes..
They share a instance eyelock...
Mahir-l love you bela... Really love you...Main tumhare Bina nahi jee sakta...Bahut pyaar karta hoon tumse
Bela- l love you too mahir g... Or plzz ab aage se aise gusse main kuch mat kariyega...Aapko pta hai main kitna dar gayi thi aapke liye...
Mahir- bela ab Aisa kabhi nahi Hoga hum kabhi alag nahi honge
They deeply look into eachother eyes
Bela broke the eyelock nd turn away...She start to dry her hairs nd sari...
Mahir start to see if there was anything that would help them from there cold...
Mahir sees Bela trying to dry her sari...Bela sari stick to her body...Mahir go close to her nd touch her back with his fingers...
Mahir remove her hair in one side nd kissed her on back,mahir one hand is on bela navel and other hand is entangled with Bela hand, Bela clutches mahir hand tightly, mahir open Bela blouse dori...
Bela turn away nd hugged mahir, mahir also hugged her passiontaly...Mahir broke the hug and kisses on her forehead, then her cheeks,eyes...
Then mahir lean to kiss her on lips there lips are just inches away...Mahir going to kiss her and Bela close her eyes but (sneeze)
Mahir-Bela kya hua...Tum theek ho naa...
Bela-(sneeze)haa mahir g wo lagta hai Pani mein girne ki wajah se (sneeze) sardi lag gyi mujhe...
Bela start shivering with cold
Bela-mahir g mujhe bahut thand lag rahi hai
Mahir- ruko main kuch dekhta hoon yahan kuch hai kya tumhe sardi se bachane ke liye...Mahir find a blanket there
Bela is sitting on the bed there..Mahir goes to her nd cover her with the blanket...Mahir sit beside her on bed
Mahir-Bela tum aaram kar lo thodi der yahi...
Bela- ji mahir g
Bela lay down on the bed...Mahir try to go from there but Bela hold his hand nd
Bela- mahir g aap Kahan Jaa rhe hai
Mahir- Bela main yahi hoon bas udhar side main baitha hoon tum rest Kro
Bela-mahir g aapko bhi rest ki jrurt h Na aap bhi rest Kro yhi PR
Mahir- Bela PR ye single bed hai is par hum dono nahi so payenge
Bela- kuch nahi Hoga mahir g aap aaeyein yahan hum aaram se adjust kr sakte hai yahan
Bela make some place for mahir on bed
Mahir- are you sure Bela kuch prob nhi hogi(in teasing way)soch lo agar kuch ho gya to mujhe mat kahna fir ki mahir g ye kya Kiya aapne
Bela- Aisa kuch nhi Hoga aap aaiye yahan
Mahir lay down beside Bela
Mahir- Bela hum aise aaram se nahi so sakte hai dekho yahan pillow bhi ek hi hai or ye bed bhi chota hai
Bela- ho jayega mahir g...Ek min rukiye aap
Bela then hold mahir one hand and put his hand back of her head and Bela rested her head on mahir chest.. Slipped close to mahir
Bela- dekha maine kaha tha Na hum dono aaram se so payenge yahan
Mahir put his one hand on her waist
Mahir- hmmm...Mujhe nhi pta tha Na meri biwi itni sharp hai and smile to her
Soon Bela and mahir drift into sleep with eachother



So here is 2 part for you..
I hope you guys liked it also


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome
I too wanted the cliff hanger scene.
Thank u so much 4 writing this ff
Please do continue 😎
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vrishthi04

Awesome

I too wanted the cliff hanger scene.
Thank u so much 4 writing this ff
Please do continue 😎

Thank you dear for liking ff
Normally love confession sab krte h maine thoda diff kr diya cliff me latakte hue pyaar ka izhaar 😆😆

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