OS: Teerthyatra pe chale?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is my take on continuation of today’s episode

Dev and Vidhi place the suitcase on the footrest of the bed and start packing.

Vidhi starts to pack her usual dresses.

D: agar tum ko vohi dresses pehen ne hai toh, do aur suitcases lagenge sirf tumhare liye

V: kya sir aap bhi

D: kya? Kya sir aap bhi? Mausi ne kahan hum sab bhi chalenge, maine pucha teerthyatra pe jaana hai, tum poori tarah soch mein padgayi na.

V: aap aise bol rahe hai, jaise aap ko jaana hai honeymoon pe

D: kya matlab? Mujhe toh jaana hai

V: toh phir baar Baar mere MBA ka bahana kyun doondrahe the?

D: main reason bolunga tumhe acha nahi lagega

V: ab toh mujhe reason pakka jaanna hai, kyunki aap har Baar koi na koi bahana kar rahe hai?

D: hello madam, maine toh Dubai ke liye unromantic honeymoon bhi offer kiya tha, tum uss samay bhi backout kar gayi thi, main jaanta hoon kyun, par main har baar bahana nahi karta hoon.

V: toh ab kyun kar rahe hai aap?

D: kyunki tum tayyar nahi ho

V: kya tayyar nahi hoon?

Dev closes the door of their bedroom and comes close to Vidhi takes her hand and makes her sit in the sofa.

D: main jaanta hoon tum tayyar nahi ho, abhi for a physical relationship between us. Main tumhari jhijhak mehsoos kar sakta hoon. You are 21, it is normal and I can understand and I can absolutely wait. Honeymoon jaake main tum pe Meri taraf se pressure nahi daalna chahta hoon.

Vidhi takes a minute to sink in what he said and takes a deep breath and looks at him.

V: main tayyar hoon

D: kya?

V: I am ready for the next step. Mujhe time laga, kyunki sab achanak hogaya and agar Seema nahi aati first night wale din toh shayad hum aage bud chuke hote, par aapko Dubai jaana pad gaya, Priya bhabhi wali blackmailing ka jaanne ke baad, thoda main tension main aagayi this

D: Vidhi humesh yaad rakhna, jo bhi tension hai, is kamre ke bahar bhool jana hai, nahi toh, humari koi married life nahi bachegi, aur tum mujhe sir banake rakhna.

V: theek hai main har koshish karungi ki is kamre ke andar koi tension nahi laane ki. Lekin mujhse aapse problem hai SIR.

D: Dekho phir se sir. Woh pura emphasis ke saath bola tumne

V: haan kahungi, tab tak kahungi jab tak mujhe cute bolna band nahi karenge.

D: cute se kya problem hai?

V: aap ko simmi bhi cute lagti hai, main bhi cute lagti hoon. Main aapki biwi Hoon

D: cute lagti ho toh cute bolta hoon

V: cute bolna band lijiye bas

D: toh kya bulaoon?

V: kuch bhi, par cute nahi

D: theek hai, par mudde par aaye?

V: mudda kya hai?

D: Goa jaa rahe hai, salwar suits?

V: Goa jaa rahe hai, honeymoon pe, Aapke suits jaroori hai?

They both start laughing.

D: ek kaam karte hai, abhi teen baj rahe hai, shopping pe chalte hai, tum mere liye select karo, main tumhare liye.

And thus, they both shop cute, sorry sexy clothes for each other.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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that was nice. 😊

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Posted: 2 years ago
#3

Nice one

Koi logic chal hi ni rha serial me.. kisi train ki tarah bhaga rhe hain serial ko..

Koi proper videv talks & moments dikhate ni hain..

But you pen down so beautifully 😍😍

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Nice os yaar

Continue karo make it as TS

So we can get some moments between them.

You wrote their conversation very meaningful and in beautiful way

Waiting to read more

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Posted: 2 years ago
#5

This was so simple yet so beautiful... Put a smile on my face

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Posted: 2 years ago
#6

This was really very cute. I'm laughing in my office 🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
#7

Very very cute one yaar. Apt description of their feelings 👏👏👏

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Very nice sweet and simple..❤️❤️


Would love to read more

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thank you all. If the makers keep giving episodes like the ones they are, then I will fill in the blanks for them. 🤣😜😁

Edited by Monkish - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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It was indeed such a CUTE os!!! ☺ (just like vidhi.. short n cute🤭)

Ideas ki kami nahi hai duniya mei agar writers chahe toh..😂 but alas!

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