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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Thanks!!

Ab se almost har ch main chota disclaimer dalna padega🙂 jyaada nahin hoga but u know Armaan and his father's charecter and they are expert in planning and plotting na so..🙂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arpita00001

Thanks guys

Yes they met in clg

@duavidhiFAN I'll try my best not to make it as crap as that show

Not going to ruin Armaan's character to that level

As I have mentioned his brother was a good soul(Idk about serial but for here) so Armaan'll have this kinda quality 😬

Suggestions are always welcome

Thanks again ❤️❤️

Bold red No dear I cant bear him Not for my saumya His character is I dont know why ppl said is ruined but actually his character was like that Infact he used to hide his actions in begining n always be pretentious but now he is more opened n glad he his now because saumya have forced him to do he dont deserve her at all Well your story would be Good but I m biased for saumya more Now Any ways Good luck for your story lets hope we get positivity for saumya n how her career should start n she get success in it 👍🏼
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Our show was never a love story kind of show thats the reason we have ML also ordinary kind of actor Otherwise we have many good looking actors also Jodi was not that having spark which main lead couple should have its from beginning it was saumya story her struggle up downs inlife n career how she settle thats was main motive of this show

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

This is the initial part but in future, I'll show Saumya's success and I am not going to end it as EK's love story where couples get united at the end.... Rest you will know as the story progress ☺☺

Suggestions are always welcome feel free to suggest😇😇


Suggestions ka intezar rahega🤩☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

PART :- 2


In the parking area ladies are standing Tara and Sushma's excitement has gone covering their face with little sign of gloom they are thinking about Harshvardhan rude words while waiting for their car


"Ohh mom and bhabi you both are impossible you guys are still thinking about this"Kashis said showing her disappointment "Both of you know na Pa is correct to a many extent, but still you are upset, your low mood are affecting us too" after a short pause she continued"aap janti ho na achhe kam ko jate waqt achaa mood rakhna cahiye but still " she completed while shooking her head in disbelief


" For the last line I agree with Kashis di" said Armaan while runnig towards them Armaan's enter into the scene their face lit up seeing flowers in his hand for each one of them


Without answering anything Kashis left to another car while taking Mahi and Prince with her


"But not for previous ones" Armaan said last line while looking at her


"Some beautiful flowers for two beautiful women of our house" said Armaan giving flowers to them


"Armaan yeh sab kyun?" Sushma asked


To which Armaan reply with his ever smiling face "Pa behaviour has hurt you both and I can't see you all this sad so for a beautiful smiles which makes my day I bring flowers for both of you" "I can't change Pa's attitude but I can contribute in lighting your mood"


Both of them smile at him


"Hnn this smile yahi toh cahiye tha aapki smile mujhe encourage karti you are my anchor" Said Armaan while pulling Sushma's cheek lovingly


"And mom can't I do this much for you you are my super mom I can't take my leave without ur blessings so Tara bhabi and Mom wish me good luck your wishes matters a lot to me and ur happiness too" completed Armaan with a smile and then he leaves


Sushma said to Tara"See I always tell my son Armaan hame sad nahin dekh sakta apne Pa se bhi pyaar karta hain unki respect karta hain wha kitna intelligent hain ki apne Pa ka nature thoda strict type hain wha yeh samjhta hain isliye ushke side se jitna possible hota utna karta hain hamare liye" showing how proud she is for her son and Tara just smile at her


And they went towards the car

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In the Armaan and Harshvardhan car they are discussing about their fundaa about controlling women


"I believe in handeling them with love"smirked Armaan


"But at points you have to show ur Menside varna yeh khatir nahin karenge" Harshvardhan put his view


To which Armaan replied,"too much of hardness can turn them rebellious love and sweet gueste will always give you sweet results" "jaise boyoge waisa payoge toh pyaar se karenge toh wha loyal surrender karti rahengi agar rude behave kiye toh unke patience level ka maximum aane pe wha protest karna start kardenge toh hamara control chutne lagega so its better to handel them with love"added Armaan


Harsh replied same thing happens here "too much of sweet guester turns thing bitter after a point so you have to change ur style in times"


Armaan replied,"I know paa ishka jugaad hain mera pass" "Isliye toh main..Armaan the great producer huin"complete Harshavardhan


Chuckled both of them


"Tumhe producer nahin actor hona cahiya tha" added Harshvardhan between his laugh "actor hi kyun tumhe toh politician bhi hona cahiye, you are good in politics"


"I know paa I am multi talented" replied Armaan in proud


"By the way yeh bharibharkam emotional baate Saumya se likhwate kiya"asked Harshavardhan


"Sangati ka kuch toh asar hoga na" Armaan replied with a giggle "well jokes apart mere yeh talent professional personal life dono main bahut kaam aate"


"Wha toh hain"Harshavardhan replied agreeing with him


"And Saumya ko hamare production house main writting section main lena se faida ho raha ushke idea unique hain ur trp achaa dete"

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Verma family is contrast of Oberoies they are nuclear happy middle class family who believes in love and equality rather than money power supremacy


Mr and Mrs Verma used to worked for Verma industries they used share good relation because of good relation and same surname people used to get confused and mistook them as relatives of Verma's some time this create tension but now they are no longer part of Verma's industries they have their own small business the reason is not the confussion or any rift though it is only known to both the Vermas


Mr and Mrs Verma are very educated and have a great respect in between their people they are sweet innocent pure hearted people with no dual face politics or any greediness for power they believe in equality both of them contribute in house hold course and bussiness both id their daughter are well educated and at the door step of greate success


Their younger daughter 'Shilpi' had taken drop for preparing for neet and after 3rd attempt she has cracked neet with good rank now studying MBBS in govt medical College


Their elder daughter 'Saumya' was also a good student but breaking the stereotype of choosing medical or engeneering as a career line she chose to be a writer she studies mass communication and film making in a XYZ University for mass communication which is one of the best university for this field both Armaan and Saumya have completed their study from here where Saumya joined through her talent Armaan through money power


In Verma's house...


Shilpi is making Saumya ready for today and Mr and Mrs Verma are looking after the arrangements


"Maa didi is ready, dekho kaise lag rahi?" Asked Shilpi when she find her mother entering the room


"Bahut hi sundar" smiled Mrs Verma getting emotional "Bahut badi hogayi hamari beti itni si thi aaj shaadi hone ko aagaya"


"Lagna toh tha afterall maine jo make up kiya hain"said Silpi for lightening the mood


"Hnn aaj pata laga hamari dr banane wali Silpi padhai ke sath sath make up bhi kitna achaa karti hain tujhe doctor nahin make up artist banna cahiye tha" said Saumya while joining Shilpi in her act


Both of them laughed


"Hnn hnn maloom hain yeh sab kyun kar rahe dono mera mood thik karne na"said Mrs Verma while whipping her tears


"Ishka matlab main talented nahin huin"Said Shilpi with pout and innocent filled eyes


"Maine aisha kab kaha meri dono beti hi bahut talented hain, hame toh dono mein toh bahut garb hain" said Mrs Verma while caressing their face after a pause she said before leaving "tum dono ne mujhe bato main laga diya, bahut kaam hain main ja rahi" "ur hnn tum dono bhi bato main mat lag jao Shilpi thodi deri baad niche aa help karne bahut kaam hain"


Both of them nod their head in aggreement


"Didi nervous hain aap?"said Shilpi in a dramatic way


Saumya smiled at her and said "thoda sa, at the same time I am happy I am marrying person whom I know from a long period, with whom I spend my college life and now working with him professionally finally going to spend my whole life"


"Wha bikul Papa jaise hain and mujhe samjhte meri respect karte mere points ko respect dete" "You know jab ham professional level pe kaam kar rahe hote, shows jo leke discuss kar rahe hote myjhe mera point rakhne ka hakk dete and mere points ka mann bhi rakhte" Said Saumya with a joy filled eyes


"Hnn didi tu bahut lucky hain ham sab lucky hame Armaan jiju jaisa koyi mil raha jo itne down to earth hain show off nahin karte, ham sabki respect karte equality believe karte ur apni mummy bhabu behen se kitna pyaar karte, matrimonial site advt main kehete lakho karodo main ek aishe hain hamare Jiju" said Silpi while chucking at the last line


"Achaa di ab main aati kaam hain na maa bulayithi" Said Shilpi while leaving Saumya alone in thought of Armaan's goodness which has covered their eyes from knowing the reality


Her chain of thought got an interuption when her phone beeps she checked the notification her face turn pale she get nervous but still she read that message


"Please listen to me once atleast.....I want to meet you so going to pay my visit soon be ready .. You can't snatch this right of mine in this manner will join your wedding (if it happens)"


For controlling her self she takes a deep breath after some time she said to herself while calming herself "Mujhe kuch karna hi hoga barna problem ho jayega sabhi se abhi discuss karna padega"


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On their way Armaan and Harsh are still discussing about their favourite topic


There is a great difference in between Saumya and me na pa"Said Armaan


"She is thinking I am giving her equal power as mine,but her ideas are innovative and are helpful in my business so I am using her" smirked Armaan


"She is introvative reserve type about whom last is known but I have solve the puzzle and I am more tricky than her, she thinks she know everything about me she only know the side which I have" "She is egg headed but I have a sharper brain than her orelese she would not have fall in my trap" smriked Armaan


"She thinks I love her but in reality I need her rising in both professional and personal life"


"I am proud of you my son,you are more smarter than me" Harshvardhan pats his back in a praise


He opens his mouth to say something but their conversation recieve a pause with driver's applying of break near Saumya's house


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I was planning to change Armaan's character to positive in future(well I was not planning to show them together though) but now I have changed my mind so you guys are going to witness him negative only


And what type of treatment do you want for him and I will be showing about their college life in short in future updates though I have plans for him still I want to know your suggestions


Thanks for reading ❤️




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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Part 2 ❤️ 👏 Thanks for taking time out to write brilliant part 2. 🤗 Enjoyed reading it 👍🏼


First was shocked to read armaan giving flowers to Tara and then when reading further I went now you are showing armaan’s real character 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Thanks thanks thanks a lot ❤️❤️❤️

1st part(I mean flower wala part)had written a long ago as I mentioned previously I was thinking to show him positive then I have changed of mind so I am Showing him like this🤣pehele thoda ka dalithi fir katke doobara dali 2nd scene 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Your contempt for Armaan and men like him really comes across in the story. What a jerk! am hoping you serve him what he deserves! Do write on!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Too

he will receive his treatment soon

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