i think MRD should follow this paath!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Just a brief story came in my mind and thought to share with you people……….

After Friday's episode the story should follow this way……….

Rajveer's father come to know abt the truth and apologizez for his rude behaviour towards Kranti. Actually rajveer will tell the truth to his father that kranti was doing the wrat and blah blah blah…………..

Kranti notices carefully rajveer's changing behaviour.

After very two long days and fighting all the obstacles kranti completes her wrat and breaks it in front of everyone except rajveer. Rajveer is not present when the wrat is broken. Dialogues between Chaijee and kranti follows this way……….

Chaijee finding rajveer but unable to get him. She is carrying a plate for his lunch.

Suddenly kranti sees chaijee a bit jumbled!!!

Kranti-" kya hua chaijee. Aap ye plate leke kahan ja rahi hai!!!"

Chaijee-" beta rajveer ne bhi pechle do dino se kuch naa khaaya hai……pata nahi aaj bhi usne kuch khaaya hai ya nahi?

Kranti- aap mujhe de dijiye aur aaram kijiye. Main ye khana rajveer ko de deti hoon.

Taking the plate in her hand she is moving towards rajveer's study…… (she is recalling all the incidents when rajveer was supportive towards her)

Seeing rajveer in his study she enters the room and forcibly keeps the plate on his table.

Rajveer- kranti tum?

Kranti- mere saath do din bhukhe rehkar tum kya jatana chahte ho?

Rajveer- kranti…..main to !!!!!

Kranti- sab jaanti hoon main…….tumhare is tarah bhuke rehne se meri soch tumhare liye badal nahi jayegi. Tum ye jo mere taraf achcha banne ka naatak kar rahe ho na……. uska mujh par koi asar nahi hone waala……….. aur is naatak se tumhe kuch haasil nahi hone waala……..

She is leaving the room but rajveer angrily stops her.

Rajveer- tum kuch nahi jaanti ki main ye sab tumhare liye kyun kar raha hoon. Aur naa hi tum ye kabhi samaj paogi…….pehle mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki main tumahre liye itna pareshan kyun ho raha hun………

Kranti- kyun kar rahe ho mere liye tum itna kuch?????????

Rajveer answers loudly and clearly and angrily!!!!!!!

Rajveer- kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Music…….music……..and music…….

Rajveer- haan main tumse pyar karta hoon…………lekin shayad tum ye baat kabhi nahi samjhogi kyunkii tumhe mujhpe ilzaam lagene alaava kuch nahi aata………main hi galat tha jo tumse pyaar kar baitha………badi se badi galti to bhagwaan bhi maaf kar dete hai .lekin agar main apni begunaahi saabit karne ke liya apni jaan bhi de doon to usme tumhe mera laalach nazar aayega………….lekin ab bas ho gaya……..tum aazad ho….ab tumhe meri wajah se koi pareshani nahi uthani padegi……..maine bohot badi galti ki jo tumse pyaar kiya!!!!!!

Lekin itna sab hone ke baat main tumse pyaar nahi karta …..nahi karma aisa pyaar jiska koi bhavishya hi nahi hai…………………

Rajveer leave she room and kranti cries………..

From now onwards Rajveer starts ignoring her. He has no qualms showing that their relationship has broken and now he no more cares for her……that will give rise to their small nok-jhoks and catfights………..kranti slowly realizes that she made a mistake by misunderstanding rajveer and she tries her level best to convince him !!!!!!!

HOWS IT????????????????

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Absolutely brilliant Chauveen👏...This is what we all want...a strong and determined Rajbir with his dignity and self-respect intact😃..
He should love Kranti but at the same time should not act like those typical 90s lover boy😆
Raj should make it clear to Kranti now and start ignoring her😃..let Kranti realize her fault and approach Rajbir for a change😳...Even after 2 days of vrat if Kranti fails to realize Raj's love for her,then Raj should definitely end this relationship with her till the time Kranti starts developing feelings for him😳..
And its high time Raj starts giving more importance to his profession😊...I want to see him take some important cases now..his transformation on the professional front should also b shown na😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i agreed completely dear......raj needs to act with attitude now and creatives please follow similar lines..........trps will be in top 5 i garantee now in top 10 its wonderfull anyways..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for appreatiating my thought ............i actually want this to happen!!!!!!!!

i wish creatives could read our minds!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HI Chauveen, welcome to the Mad Bad world of the MRD Parivaar.

I read your story over here and must say that I am mightily impressed. 👍🏼. I would also see the progression of their relationship like this and it will be believable.

I would love to read the next part, I hope you turn this into a full-fledged story.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one yaaaaaaaar.................completely agree wid u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely thought chauveen. I think high time Raj should take a stand and tell Kranti that he is not going to take nay more nonsense from her. However for thet she needs to shout at him once and if you have onserved she is also not shouting at him for a while now
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Posted: 16 years ago
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chauveen its awesome...👏👏but dear..to propose someone is not so easy for this soap....its really tough..raj kranti's relation ship is a total silent one....not by words dear...😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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in one word it s SENSIBLE

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